My first story, woohoo!

Welcome, Zilla! And great job on the story, it's delicious! Just pure, unadulterated, happily graphic sex... :D

~sarah
 
Gotta love the first story high, eh?

I really enjoyed the story. The transition from wait to coupling felt extremely real. I think anyone who's been away from their significant other for long understands exactly what you wrote. Touching :)

Nice job with the second person present as well. It was fun to read, not work. Woohoo!

Keep writing
 
Otus de la Nuit said:
Gotta love the first story high, eh?

I really enjoyed the story. The transition from wait to coupling felt extremely real. I think anyone who's been away from their significant other for long understands exactly what you wrote. Touching :)

Nice job with the second person present as well. It was fun to read, not work. Woohoo!

Keep writing

Well, it is actually a true account of the first night my boyfriend and I were together when I went to visit him last time. So...in effect it is real. :D
 
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