My First Story- Please Be Gentle With Me! (BDSM)

[HerMastersPrincess]

If you're into BDSM, please check out my first story posting (it will be the first in a year long series with new submissions made weekly) and give me some feedback. I already know that the lists were a bit long and difficult to wade through, and I can be really bad about punctuation during dialogue sequences, but I'd really appreciate some more feedback!

http://www.literotica.com/s/transfer-of-ownership