My First Illustrated Poem~Unintentional Haiku

[~hellbaby~]

My first illustrated poem,Sychronicity just went up. Does anyone want to take a look and vote. Tell me what you think. It is a little blurry.

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

My first illustrated poem,Sychronicity just went up. Does anyone want to take a look and tell me what they think? It is a little blurry.

It may be a little blurry, but I really enjoyed it. I wish someone could teach me how to do that.

Thanks for sharing, Chris

 

[~hellbaby~]

It may be a little blurry, but I really enjoyed it. I wish someone could teach me how to do that.

Thanks for sharing, Chris

Get a lucky picture or put words to it? The way it came together was just sychronicity I guess, none of it was planned. I'm glad you liked it

 

[WickedEve]

Some of my illustrations have looked good until they're uploaded to lit. Then they look kind of... like yours. It's not bad. I was able to read it--without glasses.

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

Get a lucky picture or put words to it? The way it came together was just sychronicity I guess, none of it was planned. I'm glad you liked it

You can pull that up in Microsoft word? I've never tried it, but would like to. And would it save exactly as it stands when finished?

 

[~hellbaby~]

You can pull that up in Microsoft word? I've never tried it, but would like to. And would it save exactly as it stands when finished?

I couldn't get it to work in word , the pic didn't show.I'm not too good at word though, I used works until last year. I did it in microsoft picture it, just added the text and resized it. It looks better in the program but the pic was taken from about 120 yards away so it really had to be enlarged a lot.

 

[~hellbaby~]

Some of my illustrations have looked good until they're uploaded to lit. Then they look kind of... like yours. It's not bad. I was able to read it--without glasses.

Your eyes are better than mine! I can't read it without glasses

 

[Liar]

Your eyes are better than mine! I can't read it without glasses

I can, and I dig poem. The picture is good with it too.

Just one problem, there are some bright spots in the picture that makes "fortune" looks like "fortone". Superimposing text on photos is tricky.

#L

 

[~hellbaby~]

I can, and I dig poem. The picture is good with it too.

Just one problem, there are some bright spots in the picture that makes "fortune" looks like "fortone". Superimposing text on photos is tricky.

#L

Yea, It didn't look that bad on the original but thats the first thing I noticed when I saw it. I had a hell of a time getting it right,my photo editing skills are pretty limited to really basic stuff and my better programs are stuck in a broken laptop!
You live and learn

 

[angelicminx]

I thought it was pretty cool. Hard to read, but not terrible. I have my first two illustrated poems up now. The first, Cheyenne Michelle, didn't work out as planned, but the second, Who Am I?, worked great. Both were done in Word. Who Am I? is also my first attempt at a Triolet. I'd love to hear what y'all think.