My First Erotic Storie

[Shadex]

I've always enjoyed reading erotic stories, so i took a shot at it. I want to hear your reviews and suggestions

Here it is. It's hosted by a webmaster friend of mine. I used a pen name cause i'm still getting use to this, considering my upbringing
http://eroticindiscretions.com/eroticstories/terraluckystudent.html