My contribution to the board today...or what ever its worth...

[sufisaint]

Wrote this while cleaning, packin and throwing things away...

A very strange sense
of liberation
is moving through me.
A restoration of the Dignity
I once held
as a dreaming child.
Who saw the entire world
as endless possibilities
of fulfilling this desire
for adventure.
All my possessions
All my persona’s
Are gently falling away
I am just starting
To just be…again.

 

[PepperminTrish]

That was beautiful ........ thank you for sharing it sufisaint.

 

[LadyG]

Very nice and very inspiring Thank you!

 

[SkyBluAngelEyes]

Agreed sufisaint.

Very moving and thank you for sharing

 

[sufisaint]

That was beautiful ........ thank you for sharing it sufisaint.

thanks..i am glad i made someone else feel good today...always trying to share the good feeling when I got it!

 

[Tantanah]

Reading that gave me a sense of peace. The soul will find rest...

Thank you for sharing.

 

[curious2c]

Damn. It is too early in the morning for this. I have read it almost ten times and each time I get a different thought. I think you have done very well my friend.

 

[sufisaint]

Damn. It is too early in the morning for this. I have read it almost ten times and each time I get a different thought. I think you have done very well my friend.

Thanks thats a great compliment...good writing should have multible levels of meaning...

 

[Guest]

 

[sufisaint]

Thank you, I felt an inner peace.

After reading that I felt like my life had a new meaning, like our existence on this very planet was suddenly explained.

I then realised why there is a such a gap between rich & poor.

Why tigers are endangered.

And why the toast always falls on butter side down


This made me think, this touched me deeply

Since you complimented me here one back...use a real gun for your av...see attached

 

[mischeviousmisti]

i love your poetry sufisaint. thanks so much for sharing yourself with us.

 

[A Desert Rose]

sufisaint?

you have a great chest, pal.

 

[sufisaint]

Re: sufisaint?

you have a great chest, pal.

Does that mean you did not like the poem???

 

[LordOfDarkness]

Wrote this while cleaning, packin and throwing things away...

A very strange sense
of liberation
is moving through me.
A restoration of the Dignity
I once held
as a dreaming child.
Who saw the entire world
as endless possibilities
of fulfilling this desire
for adventure.
All my possessions
All my persona’s
Are gently falling away
I am just starting
To just be…again.

speechless...

 

[littlekateyes]

Wow yet another great poem sufisaint.

 

[LordOfDarkness]

There you are Sufi. Been looking all over for you.

Hows life?

 

[BoobsNBrains]

Very well done, Sufisaint!

PA, huh? Go Steelers!!!

 

[Guest]

Wrote this while cleaning, packin and throwing things away...


of liberation
is moving through me.
A restoration of the Dignity
I once held
as a dreaming child.
Who saw the entire world
as endless possibilities
of fulfilling this desire
for adventure.
All my possessions
All my persona’s
Are gently falling away
I am just starting
To just be…again.

<Insert dreamy opening line>
<make sure to add childhood thoughts>
<Mention the world in a spiritual light>
<Create a myth of deep thought through dramatic wording>
<Make sure not to end with a conclusion>

 

[bad kitty]

Handsome, brilliant, and talented too. Women's hearts never even had a chance to resist.