My baby needs an editor

ChrissieLecker

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There are a number of scenes I've been carrying around for a lot more than just nine months, and I've finally decided to give birth to a new story ;)

So I've started scribbling on my "perfect" story - a college-themed, semi-consensual exhibitionistic piece of lesbian fiction with a strong focus on the sexual humiliation aspect. It's not something completely new, and authors like Couture or Sabineteas have put the bar quite high in that field, so I'm all set to aim for perfect and be content with a good average :)

I'm not a native English speaker, so while the spell checker catches the obvious issues, I tend to fall for false friends and end up with a lot of clumsy phrasings. Omitting words and struggling with commas are also sins I'm renowned for. This story will be the first where I don't dive into the deep end in the first chapter but rather try to depict a gradual development, so I can certainly use all input on the plot and characters that is offered. Up to now I have the first chapter with a little over 3500 words where I set up the scenerie and introduce my three main characters. While the first few lines of chapter 2 are already there, I don't want to stray too far before the first one is completely finished.

So let me know if you are intrigued enough to try and put up with my awkward ramblings. I swear I won't bite, even if you give me honest feedback - I'm the type to let herself get bitten :)
From the theme of the story it should be obvious that I'd like to find, if possible, a female editor with insight into the workings of my heroine's mind.
 
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