must... write.. sonnet...

[Blackie Malone]

I'm right behind you, ojn my way to dreamland as well
Been fun playing gently with you, me lass- *muah!*

Night lovely. It was fun...as always

 

[Blackie Malone]

Still getting trolled love?

 

[Stella_Omega]

I think it was just one vote like that- I have 25 hits, 5 votes, and it's at 4.40 right now...
As I said in an email just now-

You know what's funny, and possibly even more complimentary- is that, technically, the poem is a bit flawed. A bad rhyme ("wore" and "hair") and some seriously limping meter, especially the last three lines- no one seems to care, not even Shanglan, whom I expect to come down on me like a ton of bricks for that stuff.

 

[Blackie Malone]

I think it was just one vote like that- I have 25 hits, 5 votes, and it's at 4.40 right now...
As I said in an email just now-

I loved it so that's all that matters, right?

 

[Stella_Omega]

I loved it so that's all that matters, right?

Your love is wonderful- but I must conqeur the WORLD!



(But that will have to wait- right now, I have to get my brakes fixed)
back later, darlings!

 

[Blackie Malone]

Your love is wonderful- but I must conqeur the WORLD!



(But that will have to wait- right now, I have to get my brakes fixed)
back later, darlings!

Go forth and conquer!!!

 

[Stella_Omega]

goddamn, goddamn.

The second poem is kicking my butt.

I have two endings for it, niether of which satisfy me in the least, and I can't think of a way to complete it.
I think I shot my wad....

 

[Blackie Malone]

goddamn, goddamn.

The second poem is kicking my butt.

I have two endings for it, niether of which satisfy me in the least, and I can't think of a way to complete it.
I think I shot my wad....

Care to share?

 

[Stella_Omega]

Care to share?

what- right here in public?

 

[Blackie Malone]

what- right here in public?

Smart ass
If you want I'll read it...in private.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Well the sucker's up, (as I mentioned in the "Promote poem" thread) and is slowly raising itself from the one-bomb- hah!

My mother emailed me after reading it- She said

Your sonnet was good, but your meter could use some watching. Be careful not to make it sound like a fan letter.

Thanks, Mom!

... But of course, it is a fan letter.
If I could write couplets as easy, and witty, and filthy as his! It's my new ambition.
If I thought I could get away with it, I'd simply purloin the man's work and call it my own.