LetsMisBehave
Virgin
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- Sep 23, 2022
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As a human being, I am interested in the fact that two people can, without being totally self-absorbed SOBs, genuinely perceive the same set of circumstances very differently depending on their starting points or the knowledge of the facts they have. Conveying this as a story is not easy. Multiple POVs in the same chapter can be disconcerting, especially when the story does not easily fit into one category or another. I know, as a reader, it can distract my attention.
On the other hand, the other approach, which is to have two or more POV stories in different categories, is challenging to carry off. I am having a go at this at the moment. Technically, it is fun and choosing to write the POVs of the two least selfish/cynical people in the story is a good exercise.
It is disconcerting that despite telling readers that this is a side-by-side story, one side of the story has more than double the views of the other. Admittedly, choosing Mature and LW as my two starting points may have skewed things and the comments from those who have tried both are encouraging that some readers enjoy what I am trying for. (I have no problem with the different scores - if one goes into LW you need thick skin)
I would be interested in any experience other authors have had in dealing with this challenge.
On the other hand, the other approach, which is to have two or more POV stories in different categories, is challenging to carry off. I am having a go at this at the moment. Technically, it is fun and choosing to write the POVs of the two least selfish/cynical people in the story is a good exercise.
It is disconcerting that despite telling readers that this is a side-by-side story, one side of the story has more than double the views of the other. Admittedly, choosing Mature and LW as my two starting points may have skewed things and the comments from those who have tried both are encouraging that some readers enjoy what I am trying for. (I have no problem with the different scores - if one goes into LW you need thick skin)
I would be interested in any experience other authors have had in dealing with this challenge.