LetsMisBehave
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I am playing around with a story where a upper sixth form party/senior high school party (anyone who is portrayed as doing anything sexual will be over 18) has a major impact on the lives of about ten of the participants. Five hours which fundamentally change lives.
The storylines include the most sexually promiscous attendee playing fairy godmother to the true (if randy) lovers who don't realise the other one loves them (potentially three POV chapters). two participants plotting to ruin the reputations of two of the guests (three/four POVs), two true believers in MMF trying to convert women to their point of view without damaging their reputations etc. Only one attendee is a total shit (and I'm still working on making him a sympathetic damaged character) The mood swings in trying to write this as a single story means it doesn't work (and is too long) and when I having tried them before multiple POV stories only work for me with a maximum of two POVS (down to my incompetence as a writer).
i have decided that the best chance of making this work is to write POV chapters for each main and major supporting character and have them only noticing what others are up to if it would be totally implausible for them to be oblivious. This avoids having non-consent incidents in the same story as romance/first time. It also needs at least a couple of set up chapters as to why the main protagonists is going to the party
I would be grateful for feedback on
(a) is this just a bloody stupid idea,
(b) should I publish every chapter at the same time (which probably mean around 100,00 words)
(c) should I publish the four main chapters and the set up chapters at the same time and then add in the minor characters viewpoints on a weekly/daily basis
(d) should the POV chapters be put into first time, group sex, non-consent etc catgories or should I go for Novels/Novella.
(e) any other thoughts
I had a first go at this some time ago with a story called the birthday party which disappeared without trace, but a recent comment on the story which said that there was a sweetness about it encouraged me to revisit the set up.
Like most of us, I am open to constructive criticism. If any of you have read my stuff and like the ideas and set up but hate the execution I would love to know why.
If it helps, I was partly inspire dto write on this site by TheRachelChronicles work. I enjoy ambivalence
The storylines include the most sexually promiscous attendee playing fairy godmother to the true (if randy) lovers who don't realise the other one loves them (potentially three POV chapters). two participants plotting to ruin the reputations of two of the guests (three/four POVs), two true believers in MMF trying to convert women to their point of view without damaging their reputations etc. Only one attendee is a total shit (and I'm still working on making him a sympathetic damaged character) The mood swings in trying to write this as a single story means it doesn't work (and is too long) and when I having tried them before multiple POV stories only work for me with a maximum of two POVS (down to my incompetence as a writer).
i have decided that the best chance of making this work is to write POV chapters for each main and major supporting character and have them only noticing what others are up to if it would be totally implausible for them to be oblivious. This avoids having non-consent incidents in the same story as romance/first time. It also needs at least a couple of set up chapters as to why the main protagonists is going to the party
I would be grateful for feedback on
(a) is this just a bloody stupid idea,
(b) should I publish every chapter at the same time (which probably mean around 100,00 words)
(c) should I publish the four main chapters and the set up chapters at the same time and then add in the minor characters viewpoints on a weekly/daily basis
(d) should the POV chapters be put into first time, group sex, non-consent etc catgories or should I go for Novels/Novella.
(e) any other thoughts
I had a first go at this some time ago with a story called the birthday party which disappeared without trace, but a recent comment on the story which said that there was a sweetness about it encouraged me to revisit the set up.
Like most of us, I am open to constructive criticism. If any of you have read my stuff and like the ideas and set up but hate the execution I would love to know why.
If it helps, I was partly inspire dto write on this site by TheRachelChronicles work. I enjoy ambivalence