mother son

ZiggyStardust672

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I'd like to read a mother son story where it's not obvious that it was written by a horny 18 year-old. There needs to be subtleties and attraction. A guy can't just make a move on his mom right away and expect no consequences. How many guys just take a risk like that out of the blue anyway? This story would need to happen out of a chain of progressively compromising circumstances. The two just gradually become more comfortable with each other until they are touching intimately and the attraction is pulsing. That's the only way two sane people would cross that line, which is what makes it exciting in the first place, it's taboo.

The son does not have to have just turned 18, and is ripped with washboard abs. He can still be handsome, of course. And the mom does not have to be only just old enough to be his mother, thin, with great tits and a tight stomach. These are real people. 22/45 is just as erotic. Also, having the mom wear nightgowns and lingerie that doesn't come off after five seconds would be appreciated somewhere in the story. Anyone have any ideas like this?
 
I'd like to read a mother son story where it's not obvious that it was written by a horny 18 year-old. There needs to be subtleties and attraction. A guy can't just make a move on his mom right away and expect no consequences. How many guys just take a risk like that out of the blue anyway? This story would need to happen out of a chain of progressively compromising circumstances. The two just gradually become more comfortable with each other until they are touching intimately and the attraction is pulsing. That's the only way two sane people would cross that line, which is what makes it exciting in the first place, it's taboo.

The son does not have to have just turned 18, and is ripped with washboard abs. He can still be handsome, of course. And the mom does not have to be only just old enough to be his mother, thin, with great tits and a tight stomach. These are real people. 22/45 is just as erotic. Also, having the mom wear nightgowns and lingerie that doesn't come off after five seconds would be appreciated somewhere in the story. Anyone have any ideas like this?

Well said, Ziggy. I wish more story writers had your perspective. I've been trying to get someone to write a story like this for some time....not having much luck. But I agree with your realistic approach. This is similar to the way I like to roleplay. When I have a new chat partner, I send them the following, so they will understand the way I enjoy roleplaying:

I like to roleplay REALISTICALLY. By that, i mean i want the dialogue to not be crudely overt, but subtle. Even though we would both be horny, we would both be nervous, apprehensive, ashamed due to mixed emotions, and worried to take that first big step. Drop hints, subtle encouragements, etc. Take time to let the seduction build so the sexual intensity is high. Once the cat is out of the bag, you can be as crude and vulgar as you like. Also, please be descriptive when discussing my shoes, outfits, etc, and also include the thoughts and emotions running through your head.
 
you have a unique request!

I may have the unique angle that you like.

This is based on reality...

I grew up on a large farm in Canada...I have a large Family...Mom and Dad, 4 younger brothers and 2 older sisters. Dad married at 30 Mom was 19..So quite the spread in ages..I was third born..Mom was about 25 when i was born and we are very close. Some might say too close. Mom loves horses, we all do, but she really enjoys horses. I have been riding, raising and training horses for as long as i can remember.....Each summer when I was home from college Mom and I would sit for hours talking about the horses on the farm, the breeding programs and the training of each horse. We have a large horse barn and quite a bit of tack. One summer weekend Mom and I headed off to an auction in the next town and bought a young pony and tack to go with it...He was a smart young colt and took to the saddle and pulling a small cart quickly!
One long summer day, after a paticularly hard days work, I stopped by the horse barn to have a quick shower and change before grabbing a late dinner. I heard some noise and looked down the row of stalls but saw nothing...so off to the shower I went...(not many things are better than a shower!!)....To be continued
 
I completely agree with Ziggy.I am yet to find such a nice subtle story of Mom-Son on Literotica.Though I have some really nice such story collections.I can send those to you guys if you want.Do reply.Take care.Bye.
 
mum n son

Would love too see more stories , like this as i agree, all we seem to see is 18 year olds and in 5 mins there doing their mum, NO way would that happen x
 
I'd like to read a mother son story where it's not obvious that it was written by a horny 18 year-old. There needs to be subtleties and attraction. A guy can't just make a move on his mom right away and expect no consequences. How many guys just take a risk like that out of the blue anyway? This story would need to happen out of a chain of progressively compromising circumstances. The two just gradually become more comfortable with each other until they are touching intimately and the attraction is pulsing. That's the only way two sane people would cross that line, which is what makes it exciting in the first place, it's taboo.

The son does not have to have just turned 18, and is ripped with washboard abs. He can still be handsome, of course. And the mom does not have to be only just old enough to be his mother, thin, with great tits and a tight stomach. These are real people. 22/45 is just as erotic. Also, having the mom wear nightgowns and lingerie that doesn't come off after five seconds would be appreciated somewhere in the story. Anyone have any ideas like this?

It's about time I find someone else who gets it. I agree with everything you said. To add to that, a mother-son sexual relationship must be treated with a deep level of respect as well. The words fuck and bang should be replaced with make love, intimate, etc. These are our mothers we're talking/writing about. Even if your story has nothing to do with you or your mom, you can't tell me that the woman didn't pop in your head while composing it?! Anyway good stuff Ziggy! I look forward to reading your work
 
i have a story plan that suits whats youre looking for. A rich family that lives in an isolated mansion. Mother and son live in the lap of luxury, but distant from anyone else, form a closer and closer bond, that becomes very tactile, then eventually flirtatious. The son eventually kisses his mother, and the sotry develops from there. It involves as realistic emotions as i can write, it's about a lonely wife and her son, rather than a boy who, on a boring sunday thinks to himself, "hmm lets fuck my mum".
 
mom son story

Your problem is that you like literature, not porn!
Most of the stories in this genre that I read lack character developement, let alone relationships between them!
I have written one that relates a young man to a mature woman in a way that could give the idea of a mother and son, and , is full of (weird) fetish.
I am trying to post "Dinner with Friends" under 'fetish'. You might find it of passing interest.
 
Here is a story idea. An eighteen year old virgin boy is rejected by the girl he loves. He did everything he could to attract her. He treated her with courtesy and respect. He did favors for her. He took her to nice places, and gave her flowers. After several dates she stopped accepting dates from him.

Because he confides in his mother, he discusses the matter with her, and asks her about women. She tells him. Then she shows him.

Any “incest” story I write will also be “nosex.” The relatives will reveal love and concern for each other. They will not satisfy their mutual desire with sexual intercourse, but they will act on it.

I hope I am not considered to be hijacking this thread by recommending a story I posted on Literotica that develops these ideas from a dad – daughter situation. The story is here.
 
Sorry if this being necromatic with an old topic. But I actually have this story under construction. The length of it all is going to make it two parts, but I'm enjoying writing it. ^_^
 
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