Mother Knows Best

[dammit51]

HI all,

I'm dammit51 and I just wanted to thank you all for your feedback. Most of you were shocked and appalled but that is what I was going for(or course SOME of you liked it...sick puppies ). The whole premise of the story (and for that matter my biggest kink) is about the willing and non-willing surrender of power.

I've reveresed the traditional gender roles in the story and threw in some abuse and I think i've created a unique character and potential ongoing story line. If you haven't yet, check it out. And keep that feedback coming!

 

[ShyWetThief]

Simply Sinful

Of course the saying always goes, everything good in life is either illegal, immoral, or fattening *grins*

I really liked that story, I gave a great vote for it, but thought that I might add a note here, too. (Someone has to be the first) Anyway, I really hope that you keep writing, I'd like to see how the kids react to this.

You'll forgive me if my ideas are unwanted, but I see the son trying to rebel again. Maybe the daughter too, but mostly the son trying to show Mom that he's not her little bitch. Or, maybe the daughter brings home a boyfriend and asks Mom's help in taming him. Again, ignore this part if it's unwanted, and please don't be offended.

I look forward to your next submission!

 

[dammit51]

Mother STILL knows best

Not at all!

I welcome any and all feedback. I wanna know what you think, improvements you might make, or potential plot lines. It's all grist for the mill!

Dammit51