Mother-daughter incest too perilous for the masses? "Taboo! Lesbian Teen's Mom-Lust"

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Mother-daughter incest too perilous for the masses? "Taboo! Lesbian Teen's Mom-Lust"

Beware: While the elite here on Lit can probably handle it, this story treads on dangerous ground! To explore that with your own research, find it at Taboo! Lesbian Teen's Mom-Lust.

The first sex scene describes in lovingly explicit detail a tryst initiated by model-perfect 28-year-old Susan Smith, lesbian epicure extraordinaire, with Joyce, a virtuous and voluptuous 36-year-old single mom. Present and watching every move is Joyce's daughter, the tender and petite 18-year-old Kara, who Susan has already introduced to the joys of Sapphic sex, and who has revealed to Susan that she lusts for her mother.

Later, the consummation of Kara's mom-lust, watched and "sponsored" by Susan, is described just as vividly. Between these scenes is one of Susan having sex with the daughter while the mother watches, in a section titled, "I'm going to fuck your daughter now . . ." Here's an excerpt from the incest scene:

. . . despite her overall maturity Kara had one other decidedly girlish trait in addition to her almost flat chest: She had a high, child-like voice. As Joyce tongued her daughter's sex she found it incredibly erotic to hear the teen moan and squeal in that "little girl" voice. The voluptuous mother's own excitement increased by orders of magnitude when actual words were added to those pleading vocalizations:

"Oh please mom, lick it! Lick my clit! Oh yes, just like that! Oh, you're licking my clit, mom! Oh my God – you're sucking my clit!" Joyce almost had an orgasm herself when this stream of obscene words began, uttered in that child-like voice. Unconsciously she reacted by upping the intensity and tempo of her sucking, licking and fingering.

The words kept coming, but more plaintive in their appeal for more, and half an octave higher. Joyce found herself giving more. This virtuous cycle could not continue for long, and only one end was possible . . .​

The story opens with Kara revealing her secret to extremely-wealthy Susan, who also learns that the struggling Joyce is about to go under financially. Susan provides a magnificent life-changing gift, and invites mother and daughter to join her for a private tropical island vacation. This is the setting for the action described above.

Some say that one should not be concerned at finding the idea of incest titillating, because doing so is almost as universal as the taboo itself, and almost never suggests that one really has any desire to taste the forbidden fruit.

Perhaps. But to be on the safe side, it may be better to avoid this story altogether, hmmm? Or, one could just focus on its older-younger seduction and sub-dom themes, and pretend no taboo is really broken . . .

Note: This story was submitted to the "Lesbian Sex" category, but Lit placed it in Incest. (Fancy that . . .) It contains exclusively girl-girl sex.
 
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I wouldn't be me if I did not engage in some quick nitpicking:

"danger of losing the home." ---- house - (intangible object)
"It sounded like Joyce" ---- as if
"Susan, this is my mom, Joyce." ---- mother
"incredible generosity the other had provided," --- trim
"Joyce was well endowed topside, with large D cup breasts" --- *spank*
"Back in civilization the three women's lives resumed their separate courses, intersecting only occasionally" ----- reassumed? resumed is a little clumsy.

I could nitpick forever, but in the end, that is all I would be doing. You have some commas missing and a few things technique wise I prefer seeing different, but overall it is well worth the 5 I gave it.
 
kbate said:
I wouldn't be me if I did not engage in some quick nitpicking:

"danger of losing the home." ---- house - (intangible object)
"It sounded like Joyce" ---- as if
"Susan, this is my mom, Joyce." ---- mother
"incredible generosity the other had provided," --- trim
"Joyce was well endowed topside, with large D cup breasts" --- *spank*
"Back in civilization the three women's lives resumed their separate courses, intersecting only occasionally" ----- reassumed? resumed is a little clumsy.

I could nitpick forever, but in the end, that is all I would be doing. You have some commas missing and a few things technique wise I prefer seeing different, but overall it is well worth the 5 I gave it.

:kiss: :heart: :rose:
Hearken to the voice of the Master, fellow grasshoppers. Kbate knoweth whereof she speaketh on the subject of skillful use of the English language, and bringing prose to a high level of nit-free polish.
 
Very, very wonderful!

I'm up to Chapter 7, and I absolutely love this story! I love the slow buildup, the tension...I'm going to read the rest later when I'm good and alone!
 
Slow, sensual love

I continue to read this story slowly, slowly, savoring each second. I've just finished Chapter 8...I want this to go on and on!
 
Finished! The description of "The Voice" - taunting, forboding, yet oddly enough spurring Joyce on to further depravity - is fantastic!
 
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