ObsideanWarrior
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Hello all. Though I am an experienced writer and editor, I am new to this particular forum. I do believe I'll settle in quite nicely, and that you will find my writing to be of sufficient calibre to make me an enjoyable RP partner. Now to the matter at hand.
I have for our little tale here a mother and daughter (Rosalyn and Tracy) who are travelling cross-country in a minivan. The trip is to celebrate the daughter's graduation from high school. Right now they are going through the desert near Las Vegas. The mother is an ex-hippie lefty type. The daughter is quiet, intelligent, reserved...and naive. The mother figures the trip will help expose her daughter to the world. Little does she know how terribly well it will succeed...
I'm looking for someone to play a man (or men) who waylays Rosalyn and Tracy, with some rather unpleasant (for the womens' viewpoint anyway) intentions. I don't want to commit one of the typical mistakes of newbies and put my partner's characters in a box (i.e., "must be at least 6' tall, blonde hair, bodybuilder, drive up in a Hummer, do this that and the other") so I'll just give some general, loose parameters. Your character(s) should be male. Since they are about to commit rape, it stands to reason said men are not fine upstanding citizens. They are, at least in some ways, evil. They may overall be "neutral" with some major character flaws (like not bothering with the issue of consent when they find a woman they desire), or truly evil; it's up to you. They can come from most any profession (outright gang member, construction worker, petty criminal, serial rapist, etc.) since most professions do not require a person to be "good" or "evil" per se. I prefer your character(s) to be black, Asian or Hispanic, but this is preferred, not required. Age is not important.
I'm looking for a scene that is at least mostly nonconsensual. It can be a little rough, or very rough (I'm not looking for romantic, nor am I looking for outright torture)--it depends on how your characters play and mine react. Your characters might seduce the daughter or mother, or just take her by force, or some combination thereof. This story will not be for the squeamish. I do picture this being a story rather than a single scene. How your character(s) encounter mine is up to you...maybe they just say mine, or they have been following them, or...whatever it is, it's up to you. I'm making the first scene so the possibilities are open.
Please be able to post regularly, and (usually) write replies more than one or two sentences. It's a turn-off when I write paragraphs and am replied to repeatedly with "bullets" of one or two sentences--we all have our busy days, of course. You the writer can be male or female. Please understand the basics of storytelling, especially description of characters and scenes, pacing (when my character goes from fully clothed to naked in one of your posts, that's a turn-off too because there's no role-playing of what happens in between) and playing one's own character rather than mine (having my character's dialog and responses written is also a turn-off).
(I hope I didn't sound too anal-retentive there, but if you have experience in interactive storytelling and RPing, you probably have these same pet peeves.)
At any rate, onto my opener...
The day had dawned warm, here in the desert. By afternoon, warm would turn to scorching hot, so Rosalyn roused her daughter Tracy at 6 in the morning.
"Mom, it's early," Tracy whined, still groggy. Rosalyn couldn't bring herself to be mad at her daughter...she herself had only been roused by the keening wail of the clock-radio at the nightstand of her bed in the two-star motel. A raucous dissonance that somehow the 18 year-old had slept through.
"We've got to get going," Rosalyn said, pulling her still-fit 35 year-old body out of bed. She looked at herself in the mirror...she was a little matronly, but still had D-sized breasts that sagged only ever-so-slightly. Her skin was freckled, but far from wrinkled. She brushed her blonde hair back, and prepared for a shower. "Why don't you walk across the street to the donut shop and get us some breakfast. It's gonna get hot fast, and I want us to be on the road by seven."
Tracy rubbed the sleep from her eyes. She had blondish-brown hair, and a C-sized chest, with smooth white skin. "Okay Mom. But tomorrow it's your turn. I'm still tired from high school." She gave her mother a wink.
"Thanks dear," Rosalyn said, stumbling toward the bathroom.
"Hey, what kind of donuts do you want," Tracy asked. "Your usual jelly-filled?"
"Uh-huh," the woman said.
"Okay," Tracy said. She grabbed a ten from the table, then stepped outside. She found her mother was right. It was hot and bright. As she walked away from the building, it felt a little cooler. The desert town was still waking up. There was the sound of motorcycles and diesels from the highway. Across the highway was a shop marked "Jim's Coffee and Donuts." It looked as weatherbeaten as the rest of the town. As she crossed the highway, she realized she had to go to the bathroom. Since she was already here, she figured she might as well use the bathroom in the back of the donut shop, then go in and place her order.
Okay, there's the opener. Your characters can lie in wait and build up their own story...or meet Tracy in the bathroom, or Rosalyn in the hotel room that Tracy forgot to lock. Up to you...
I have for our little tale here a mother and daughter (Rosalyn and Tracy) who are travelling cross-country in a minivan. The trip is to celebrate the daughter's graduation from high school. Right now they are going through the desert near Las Vegas. The mother is an ex-hippie lefty type. The daughter is quiet, intelligent, reserved...and naive. The mother figures the trip will help expose her daughter to the world. Little does she know how terribly well it will succeed...
I'm looking for someone to play a man (or men) who waylays Rosalyn and Tracy, with some rather unpleasant (for the womens' viewpoint anyway) intentions. I don't want to commit one of the typical mistakes of newbies and put my partner's characters in a box (i.e., "must be at least 6' tall, blonde hair, bodybuilder, drive up in a Hummer, do this that and the other") so I'll just give some general, loose parameters. Your character(s) should be male. Since they are about to commit rape, it stands to reason said men are not fine upstanding citizens. They are, at least in some ways, evil. They may overall be "neutral" with some major character flaws (like not bothering with the issue of consent when they find a woman they desire), or truly evil; it's up to you. They can come from most any profession (outright gang member, construction worker, petty criminal, serial rapist, etc.) since most professions do not require a person to be "good" or "evil" per se. I prefer your character(s) to be black, Asian or Hispanic, but this is preferred, not required. Age is not important.
I'm looking for a scene that is at least mostly nonconsensual. It can be a little rough, or very rough (I'm not looking for romantic, nor am I looking for outright torture)--it depends on how your characters play and mine react. Your characters might seduce the daughter or mother, or just take her by force, or some combination thereof. This story will not be for the squeamish. I do picture this being a story rather than a single scene. How your character(s) encounter mine is up to you...maybe they just say mine, or they have been following them, or...whatever it is, it's up to you. I'm making the first scene so the possibilities are open.
Please be able to post regularly, and (usually) write replies more than one or two sentences. It's a turn-off when I write paragraphs and am replied to repeatedly with "bullets" of one or two sentences--we all have our busy days, of course. You the writer can be male or female. Please understand the basics of storytelling, especially description of characters and scenes, pacing (when my character goes from fully clothed to naked in one of your posts, that's a turn-off too because there's no role-playing of what happens in between) and playing one's own character rather than mine (having my character's dialog and responses written is also a turn-off).
(I hope I didn't sound too anal-retentive there, but if you have experience in interactive storytelling and RPing, you probably have these same pet peeves.)
At any rate, onto my opener...
The day had dawned warm, here in the desert. By afternoon, warm would turn to scorching hot, so Rosalyn roused her daughter Tracy at 6 in the morning.
"Mom, it's early," Tracy whined, still groggy. Rosalyn couldn't bring herself to be mad at her daughter...she herself had only been roused by the keening wail of the clock-radio at the nightstand of her bed in the two-star motel. A raucous dissonance that somehow the 18 year-old had slept through.
"We've got to get going," Rosalyn said, pulling her still-fit 35 year-old body out of bed. She looked at herself in the mirror...she was a little matronly, but still had D-sized breasts that sagged only ever-so-slightly. Her skin was freckled, but far from wrinkled. She brushed her blonde hair back, and prepared for a shower. "Why don't you walk across the street to the donut shop and get us some breakfast. It's gonna get hot fast, and I want us to be on the road by seven."
Tracy rubbed the sleep from her eyes. She had blondish-brown hair, and a C-sized chest, with smooth white skin. "Okay Mom. But tomorrow it's your turn. I'm still tired from high school." She gave her mother a wink.
"Thanks dear," Rosalyn said, stumbling toward the bathroom.
"Hey, what kind of donuts do you want," Tracy asked. "Your usual jelly-filled?"
"Uh-huh," the woman said.
"Okay," Tracy said. She grabbed a ten from the table, then stepped outside. She found her mother was right. It was hot and bright. As she walked away from the building, it felt a little cooler. The desert town was still waking up. There was the sound of motorcycles and diesels from the highway. Across the highway was a shop marked "Jim's Coffee and Donuts." It looked as weatherbeaten as the rest of the town. As she crossed the highway, she realized she had to go to the bathroom. Since she was already here, she figured she might as well use the bathroom in the back of the donut shop, then go in and place her order.
Okay, there's the opener. Your characters can lie in wait and build up their own story...or meet Tracy in the bathroom, or Rosalyn in the hotel room that Tracy forgot to lock. Up to you...