Mom's Confession

[snoopercharmbrights]

... Which one would be better I don't know and also don't have good writing skills. I just want to sketch a good draft and hope to find a good writer to write...

The way to improve your writing skills is to write. Then ask one of the volunteer editors (see Editor's Forum for availability) to look it over - then try the Story Feedback crowd - then post it for the "great unwashed" to see.

 

[MyWidowMom]

The way to improve your writing skills is to write. Then ask one of the volunteer editors (see Editor's Forum for availability) to look it over - then try the Story Feedback crowd - then post it for the "great unwashed" to see.

I'll consider that and will try to write in my most spare time...

Thank you for your guidance and your precious advices...

Just trying to decide between the corporate bigwig (politician) or a young good looking stud, same is applicable to blackmail (money) or giving in after showing some reluctance...

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... Just trying to decide between the corporate bigwig (politician) or a young good looking stud, same is applicable to blackmail (money) or giving in after showing some reluctance ...

In my PERSONAL preference:
A) a politician is a good villain in any story, because most people believe all politicians are crooks.
B) with a female of long-standing purity, it has to be blackmail - any other reason for changing her mind about saying "No" always seems a bit thin.

 

[MyWidowMom]

In my PERSONAL preference:
A) a politician is a good villain in any story, because most people believe all politicians are crooks.
B) with a female of long-standing purity, it has to be blackmail - any other reason for changing her mind about saying "No" always seems a bit thin.

If the partner is a politician, should the act take place in the plane or in a hotel room? Also what kind of blackmail is appropriate for this situation? Money or something else?

Stewardess mom is petite, shoulder length black hair, pale skinned, around 1.55 1.60 cm, slim but, can be considered skinny. 43 at the time of incident...

Politician could be really fat, huge body, bald, have a moustache. He could be 50 55 at the time of incident...

Oral sex or anal sex is a good idea, since she could protect her vaginal loyalty.

 

[sexyhornymom]

Another idea my husband and I had was maybe she gets pregnant after her little indiscretion. After all, she's a widow who's not looking to meet anyone so contraception would not be on her mind and a male passenger wanting to join the mile high club with the sexy heroine isn't likely to think about using a condom. Or have we been watching too many adult movies? lol

This gives another angle for the mother's confession. She falls pregnant and her son is still too young to understand so she gives up the baby for adoption as the baby would be a constant reminder to her of her actions which she's not too proud of. She tells friends and relatives that she's being a surrogate for a childless couple so thats covered.

Years later, the child now grown up finds her and they have secret meetings as she doesn't know how to break the news to her son. One day, she is caught and has to confess all.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

If the partner is a politician, ... what kind of blackmail is appropriate for this situation? Money or something else? ...

As I said before, smuggling or stealing booze are the obvious ones.

 

[MyWidowMom]

@snoopercharmbrights: Smuggling some electronic devices or some kind of medicine is good. Politician was the rival of her husband and always had an eye on her. He was waiting for just one wrong step. Mom always served cold and behaved badly to this politician. When he found the smuggling, he threatened her for firing and also informing the customs about her incident. She is so disgusted of him but she has no choice but to accept it for the sake of her son's future. Should the sex take place at a hotel room or the airplane? Some kind of sex which she hadn't done with her husband could be good, like blowjobs and ass fucking... Should it be just one incident or more than once? May be secretly she begans to like it, being used like a prostitute...

In the present time, when he gets elected, he behaves good to people and seems to be clean. Also her son likes this politician very much, that's why she tells this incident to her son...

@sexyhornymom: Pregnancy is not good, because she can do abortion. May be son finds some secret letters of him, or some explicit photos of him, signed by him. Then she has to confess it...

May be when the son was a child he found cum stained clothes of his mom but didn't know at the time... Also I don't know where should he cum at first encounter, also should there be more encounters? What do you suggest?


Thank you all for your creative ideas...

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

@snoopercharmbrights: ... Should the sex take place at a hotel room or the airplane? ...

Hotel room - it can last longer, be uninterrupted, and as you pointed out, be taped.

 

[MyWidowMom]

Hotel room - it can last longer, be uninterrupted, and as you pointed out, be taped.

Hmm excellent, but what happens in the plane? Only the blackmail incident?

 

[MyWidowMom]

@snoopercharmbrights: Does the mom stand still in the hotel room and wait for getting rape after the blackmail. Or does she make moves and seduce the politician without any force? Which shortly means that does she act and join or does she behave like a rag doll and cry?

 

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@snoopercharmbrights: Does the mom stand still in the hotel room and wait for getting rape after the blackmail. Or does she make moves and seduce the politician without any force? Which shortly means that does she act and join or does she behave like a rag doll and cry?

Depends on the woman actually. Some women would simply be a ragdoll as you said, and some would figure what the hell I gotta be here may as well have fun. All a question of how you want to portray her.

 

[MyWidowMom]

Depends on the woman actually. Some women would simply be a ragdoll as you said, and some would figure what the hell I gotta be here may as well have fun. All a question of how you want to portray her.

She doesn't want to have fun, because she was blackmailed but she just want it to finish as quickly as possible. So I'm confused about this. Should she get in to bed by herself or thrown to bed roughly. She doesn't have to get naked totally, because the politician has a uniform fetish. He wants to fuck her in her stewardess uniform...

But I'm confused about her behavior...

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Hmm excellent, but what happens in the plane? Only the blackmail incident?

She doesn't want to have fun, because she was blackmailed but she just want it to finish as quickly as possible. So I'm confused about this. Should she get in to bed by herself or thrown to bed roughly. She doesn't have to get naked totally, because the politician has a uniform fetish. He wants to fuck her in her stewardess uniform...

But I'm confused about her behavior...

On the plane, the politico tells her he will report her smuggling to customs if she isn't in his hotel room at a particular time.

When she arrives in the hotel room he says he will report her unless she does exactly what he wants.

"What he wants" can be anything the author finds a turn on, and she has to do it - or else ...

Her reaction can be anything the author wants, from finding it exciting to be ordered to do things she would never volunteer to do (even for a loved one, let alone a stranger) to being revolted and in tears throughout the whole episode.

The episodes can then be repeated, using the same threat, and/or the video tapes, in escalating levels of depravity until, in desperation, she confesses to her son.

 

[MyWidowMom]

On the plane, the politico tells her he will report her smuggling to customs if she isn't in his hotel room at a particular time.

When she arrives in the hotel room he says he will report her unless she does exactly what he wants.

"What he wants" can be anything the author finds a turn on, and she has to do it - or else ...

Her reaction can be anything the author wants, from finding it exciting to be ordered to do things she would never volunteer to do (even for a loved one, let alone a stranger) to being revolted and in tears throughout the whole episode.

The episodes can then be repeated, using the same threat, and/or the video tapes, in escalating levels of depravity until, in desperation, she confesses to her son.

Just curious about your opinion snoopercharmbrights, which one do you think would be more appealing more attractive? And also starting slowly, like going to a diner at first, making out and then have sex... Or just at first time have hard brutal depraving sex? Which one is better? (There will be no group sex or no incest elements)

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Just curious about your opinion snoopercharmbrights, which one do you think would be more appealing more attractive? ...

What I think is unimportant. You have to decide on your audience and what they want, and the most important member of that audience is you yourself.

Do you want to write a "stroke story" at one end of the scale, or a romance (at the other), or maybe a comedy in which nothing goes right for the politico? When you have decided what you want to write, then you will have your answer.

If you really feel adventurous, you could try more than one to see which you feel happiest with.

The only point I would make is that politicos probably go to expensive restaurants, rather than diners (except for photo opportunities), and older men probably don't spend much time "making out" if they are blackmailing the woman.

 

[MyWidowMom]

What I think is unimportant. You have to decide on your audience and what they want, and the most important member of that audience is you yourself.

Do you want to write a "stroke story" at one end of the scale, or a romance (at the other), or maybe a comedy in which nothing goes right for the politico? When you have decided what you want to write, then you will have your answer.

If you really feel adventurous, you could try more than one to see which you feel happiest with.

The only point I would make is that politicos probably go to expensive restaurants, rather than diners (except for photo opportunities), and older men probably don't spend much time "making out" if they are blackmailing the woman.

You're right, restaurant and make out thing is illogical in this story. Hmm I'm thinking about some humor; comedy thing. Like smuggling of electronic devices goes wrong for the mom. Also sex act should be rough but also elements of comedy could be included.

I'm thinking of just blackmailing and then hard brutal humiliating sex. May be blackmailing again by a sex tape. But sex tape kind of thing wouldn't be good for the politician. Or he dumbfully records this act but it gets in the hand of a journalist or something like that which could add humor...

He first take pictures of her smuggling act or records it to blackmail her. Telling her that she should be in his hotel room to get those pictures. He then fucks her brutally without any make out scenes. Sex act should be straight but for example mom could talk with her innerthoughts. "Damn I think I'm enjoying this so disgusting" or "Oh he's huge, bastard", "He tastes like a applepine" which could add humor. Also really hard like fucking her ass which she had never done before or blowjob and cumming on her face and uniform or making her swallow or cumming on her coffee and making her drink it like cream...

Any other ideas?

 

[sexyhornymom]

From how you described how you want the mother to be, I got the impression that she's the type of person who wouldn't contemplate abortion. Sorry for any misunderstanding.
Perhaps she's always been a straight laced vanilla missionary position and the politico educates her in just how many ways its possible for a man and a woman to have sex?

 

[MyWidowMom]

From how you described how you want the mother to be, I got the impression that she's the type of person who wouldn't contemplate abortion. Sorry for any misunderstanding.
Perhaps she's always been a straight laced vanilla missionary position and the politico educates her in just how many ways its possible for a man and a woman to have sex?

I have two stories in my mind, the first one is politician black mail one. The other one is young stud seducing her in the plane.


I didn't understand what you said in this part

the politico educates her in just how many ways its possible for a man and a woman to have sex?

Could you explain it?

 

[sexyhornymom]

My idea was based around the woman being rather straight laced, conservative when it comes to sex. Sure she enjoyed herself with her late husband but she didn't know much about sex other than the vanilla positions. The politico takes her in so many ways that she didn't think possible and so educates her about sex. This way she doesn't want to do it at first but gets something positive out of the experience. things off the top of my head -

fellatio including various acts like stroking, fondling, licking, deep throating, swallowing and so on
cunnilingus including fingers, storking, clit teasing
doggy style
breast sex
anal

She's maybe naive about these things until the politico opens her eyes and she's a little disappointed when its over as she wants it to continue.

 

[califwineguy]

Sorry to "disappoint" you...

But I really got confused about your ideas now, do they change according to the writing skills that I got? Too bad... Sorry to take your precious time...

Thank you anyway, for your help...


If anyone has an idea about my story, I'd really like to hear that, if it's relevant or not, doesn't matter... Thank you all...

MWM: I have been reading your thread and was going to make a suggestion to your thread concept when I saw this post. From your posts on this thread, I would say that you are a much better writer than you give yourself credit for. Your original concept and potential character development are excellent. I definitely think that you have a great basis for a hot SRP thread or as a stand-alone story to submit to Lit. I also agree with another poster that to become a better writer you need to...write. Lit provides a great (and fun) way for you to test your chops. Dont hold back and give it a shot! And most importantly, dont let any negativity from anyone get you down. You are going to do great! Please feel free to PM me at any time if I can help at all, and best of luck!!!
Anthony
Napa Valley, CA

 

[MyWidowMom]

@sexyhornymom: True, you got the concept very correctly. Just one thing that I'm curious about is the term of "late husband". My native language is not English so I'm confused about this. I think late husband means second husband or something close to that is that right?

She had only one husband and she happily married to her and mourn his death for a long time. She was loyal to him, she loved him. She didn't put sex at the first place before his death. As you said just a straight missionary legs apart sex was all that she knew. Politician humiliates her but also releases her innersexual desires. It always includes blackmail, but she hides the fact that she starts to like it, getting ordered, blowjobs, cumshots, doggystyle rough sex, asslicking, etc... I'm just thinking about analsex. I hate anal sex normally what she could just think that she could remain loyal to her husband by just letting her ass fucked not vaginal sex. Or politician which hated her husband could just want different versions of vaginal sex to defy her loyalty...

I'm waiting for comments on anal sex or vaginal sex... And thank you sexyhornymom for your continuous wonderful contributions and advices...


@califwineguy: I like the place where you live. It reminds me some of my best memories and also some bad ones...

I'm really flattered by your comments, I'm not a writer and haven't written any stories in my life. Just may be a little creative by help of the sports I play and the job that I work...

Waiting for your comments on the story, really would like to hear what you think and what you'd like to add...

And thank you Anthony...

 

[GDesmond]

Another idea my husband and I had was maybe she gets pregnant after her little indiscretion. After all, she's a widow who's not looking to meet anyone so contraception would not be on her mind and a male passenger wanting to join the mile high club with the sexy heroine isn't likely to think about using a condom. Or have we been watching too many adult movies? lol

This gives another angle for the mother's confession. She falls pregnant and her son is still too young to understand so she gives up the baby for adoption as the baby would be a constant reminder to her of her actions which she's not too proud of. She tells friends and relatives that she's being a surrogate for a childless couple so thats covered.

Years later, the child now grown up finds her and they have secret meetings as she doesn't know how to break the news to her son. One day, she is caught and has to confess all.

I think the ideas 'shm' has regarding the flight attendant are good; however, projecting a meeting between the love-child and the mother sometime in the future is a stretch and requires too much of the reader. Other than that, let's just say that we girls are together on this one.

 

[MyWidowMom]

I think the ideas 'shm' has regarding the flight attendant are good; however, projecting a meeting between the love-child and the mother sometime in the future is a stretch and requires too much of the reader. Other than that, let's just say that we girls are together on this one.

GDesmond, you think that seducing by a young stud in the airplane is a better idea than blackmail by the politician thing? Why do you think that? And also pregnancy is a hard one, also has very very low chance because of the family thing and culture thing...

 

[MyWidowMom]

Any more ideas? And should this story be written in series or just one story?

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

GDesmond, you think that seducing by a young stud in the airplane is a better idea than blackmail by the politician thing? ...

What I don't understand is WHY this woman who:
after his father's death; many pilots and passengers tried to date her, seduce her and make bad proposals to her. She told son that she rejected them all...
But son learns that it is not true, there was only just one affair that his mom didn't tell him
would fall for a young stud's seduction line?