Mom son incest romance story

[sumptuouscove]

Plot:

The world has undergone a huge COVID wave. But the worst is yet to come. There's new COVID 19 variant which causes infection to person having different DNA. This variant does not spread among people having same DNA. Also this variant is most lethal and infects by just touching, breathing closely and mating with person having different DNA but not infect if same DNA people mate together.


After the arrival of this new variant it's very difficult to socialize or go out with anyone as everyone is scared with the new variant that causes the infection to people having different DNA.

Rahul(son 21) and Shaina (mother 39) has no relative left alive. Almost everyone they know is dead. They have nobody now who they can rely upon.

This situation causes the son to stop dating and socializing. Eventually the mother encourage her son to go out with girls as he also has to live his life and get it's experience but it's practically impossible for obvious reasons. Rahul is virgin . They decide to celebrate their own dinner date at home since they cannot go out with anyone. This dinner date becomes a routine between them and they grow closer. Rahul buys her a cute sundress and lingerie and asks Shaina to try out for him. She sense that this dates are taking a toll on her son and she tries to make him understand that it's not good to think about her that way. It's wrong for him to fantasise about his own mother. Rahul tells her that she is only one left with him who is his best friend, mother everything now. She resists his advances and subtle flirtatious talks.
But she doesn't want to disappoint her son so she tries out the dress and lingerie. Rahul asks her to model it for him. He than implores her for a dance, slow dance and than he does the unexpected he kisses her. She pushes him back but continue the regular dates because she doesn't want their relationship to go sour. Rahul continue to cajole her and tells her that he loves her. He tells her that it's okay to have physical relationship because there's no one to judge them. It's just one life and let him love you like a man as he is deeply in love with her. Shaina asks him what does he think of her, what does he fantasise about her. He tells her that he had always found her beautiful and attractive but couldn't do anything about it as he was afraid to act on his feelings.
After a lot of resistance and no no Finally they do the inevitable.

 

[sumptuouscove]

I expect some good suggestions and constructive discussion over this plot. Kindly feel free to do so

 

[tristianc]

I think it’s very good. As a son I can understand him being the driving force of this relationship. Perhaps he buys her new clothes as she mentions on one of their dates that she wants to wear something that makes her feel beautiful. She’s embarrassed to say, but she might also use the word sexy as she’s been usually wearing things for comfort more than for how it makes her feel since being stuck in her home.

 

[sumptuouscove]

I think it’s very good. As a son I can understand him being the driving force of this relationship. Perhaps he buys her new clothes as she mentions on one of their dates that she wants to wear something that makes her feel beautiful. She’s embarrassed to say, but she might also use the word sexy as she’s been usually wearing things for comfort more than for how it makes her feel since being stuck in her home.

Yes these circumstances adds value to the story and more intriguing to read.
I might also add that during those dinner dates the son looks at her furtively when he thinks she is not looking but she knows that he's looking. Rahul also flirts with her, sometimes too directly. So can you come up with good lines during those dinner chats??

 

[tristianc]

With him being young and a virgin I expect him to kind of fumble with his words, not use to the idea of talking to a beautiful woman and then to have this woman be his mother. He might try to talk to her with corny pick-up lines thinking that’s what women want to hear. But she tries to guide him, make him feel more comfortable and in doing so she might find herself actually falling for him and he even more so. It’s not the same lust that has caused him to cum every night imagining her riding him, it’s something deeper, there is chemistry there it just takes time and of course the willingness to just say “why not” that makes them take things further.

 

[sumptuouscove]

With him being young and a virgin I expect him to kind of fumble with his words, not use to the idea of talking to a beautiful woman and then to have this woman be his mother. He might try to talk to her with corny pick-up lines thinking that’s what women want to hear. But she tries to guide him, make him feel more comfortable and in doing so she might find herself actually falling for him and he even more so. It’s not the same lust that has caused him to cum every night imagining her riding him, it’s something deeper, there is chemistry there it just takes time and of course the willingness to just say “why not” that makes them take things further.

The first suggestion is really good, but it would be better that the mother is oblivious of his intentions and attraction first. The son is shy and inexperienced but he read it on internet and then tries to use those lines on his mom. She likes it because it has been so long someone has said those good things to her. In the beginning she tell him that you should not feel that way towards me as I am your mother but he persist along nevertheless. She than shrugs it off perceiving it as innocent flirting. She starts dressing according to his likes. The son picks dresses for her everyday so that she could feel good since they can't go out. They play a game truth and dare where she asks some questions she had doubts in her mind about her son. Rahul first tries to dodge those questions but she tells him that he can be honest with her. He then answers all her questions. He also asks some questions and she answers but those answers convey him that she does not see him anything apart from being a son. This disappoints him. But he has no choice but to try harder.

You can add some Direct dialogue between them. Please add some dialogue i would like to read some. Can you?

 

[tristianc]

I like that, but yea she thinks his awkward pick-up lines are cute, but she feels the need to remind him that she’s his mother. He tells her that she’s beautiful, tries to flirt with her, she’s flattered but when he tries to become more forward with her she tells him to stop.

“That dress looks beautiful on you. I like the way it really highlights the curve of your breasts.”

“You really shouldn’t be looking at my breasts like that, I’m your mother.”

She’s mostly telling him this as a way to remind her of this fact as she is flattered that he admires her body but their familiar bond and maybe age is the only thing holding her back from perusing a romantic or sexual relationship with him.

 

[sumptuouscove]

I like that, but yea she thinks his awkward pick-up lines are cute, but she feels the need to remind him that she’s his mother. He tells her that she’s beautiful, tries to flirt with her, she’s flattered but when he tries to become more forward with her she tells him to stop.

“That dress looks beautiful on you. I like the way it really highlights the curve of your breasts.”

“You really shouldn’t be looking at my breasts like that, I’m your mother.”

She’s mostly telling him this as a way to remind her of this fact as she is flattered that he admires her body but their familiar bond and maybe age is the only thing holding her back from perusing a romantic or sexual relationship with him.

I liked and agree with your premise that she is flattered but she also feels the need to stop him and ask him not to look at her breasts. Wow nice start. This should be the way ahead I think. The son understand her mother's reservations but after some days he finds himself looking at her breast again. He continues to flirt with her and the mother is flattered and knows that she holds the ground and can always put a stop to it. So the dates and flirt continues. On a particular day the son playes a soft music and ask her to dance with her. They dance together very closely. He holds her at her shoulders and tries to test waters.

 

[tristianc]

A dance is very nice, his hands might shift as they move, beginning at her shoulders, to her back, she doesn’t think she needs to correct him as she wants him to feel safe in his lessons they even end at her hips, but she thinks to herself “what’s the difference between her shoulders and her hips.” It’s that very gradually push of her lines like “if this is ok, then why not this?” He knows she will speak up if he steps out of line.

 

[sumptuouscove]

A dance is very nice, his hands might shift as they move, beginning at her shoulders, to her back, she doesn’t think she needs to correct him as she wants him to feel safe in his lessons they even end at her hips, but she thinks to herself “what’s the difference between her shoulders and her hips.” It’s that very gradually push of her lines like “if this is ok, then why not this?” He knows she will speak up if he steps out of line.

Absolutely. You have put it so well. It's like you wrote my mind out here. That's the way I wanted it to proceed. Can we both write it as a team? It would definately come out great. I also want it to be long. That's what makes a story special long and heavy build up. I don't want it to be a quick jerk tale.

 

[tristianc]

I hate how many stories are on here that are about two pages long and it’s “She walked in on him masturbating and she thought to herself ‘mmmm, that’s a big cock, my son has a big cock,” like if a woman just saw a big cock she’d have to fuck it no matter her relationship with the guy or her current romantic relationship. I think in incest fantasy there needs to be a figurative dance of “well he held my hand, but there’s nothing wrong with that, oh he’s brushing my arm, but it’s just an arm and it kind of feels comforting…” I think even if he’s sexually interested in her he has to figure out seduction and then see how far he can get before she tries to limit his words and his touch.

 

[sumptuouscove]

I hate how many stories are on here that are about two pages long and it’s “She walked in on him masturbating and she thought to herself ‘mmmm, that’s a big cock, my son has a big cock,” like if a woman just saw a big cock she’d have to fuck it no matter her relationship with the guy or her current romantic relationship. I think in incest fantasy there needs to be a figurative dance of “well he held my hand, but there’s nothing wrong with that, oh he’s brushing my arm, but it’s just an arm and it kind of feels comforting…” I think even if he’s sexually interested in her he has to figure out seduction and then see how far he can get before she tries to limit his words and his touch.

Wow, you are amazing with the plot and thoughts. This is is the way any incest story should be written. Absolutely practical and kind of relatable. It's believable that yes it can happen in real life even if it's a fantasy incest story. That's what makes it interesting and erotic.

 

[tristianc]

Wow, you are amazing with the plot and thoughts. This is is the way any incest story should be written. Absolutely practical and kind of relatable. It's believable that yes it can happen in real life even if it's a fantasy incest story. That's what makes it interesting and erotic.

I think we all want something as slow and gradual as a first time story. I can write about a man having sex with a woman and it will be just that, no buildup and very little dialog, but a first time story whether it be incest or otherwise dialog should be a big part of it, talk through their hang ups and issues of sharing their body with another person for the first time.

 

[sumptuouscove]

I think we all want something as slow and gradual as a first time story. I can write about a man having sex with a woman and it will be just that, no buildup and very little dialog, but a first time story whether it be incest or otherwise dialog should be a big part of it, talk through their hang ups and issues of sharing their body with another person for the first time.

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[tristianc]

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[matharasi2]

It would be better if Rahul was not a virgin and actually had a few girlfriends in past, but it didn't work out because he always fancied his mother.

Make a slow and steady interaction between them first, through "dating" and doing social things together first, so mother feels comfortable around him, and hence it won't strange when he starts gifting her dresses and sheer sarees etc. She starts dressing in his outfits subconsciously wanting to please him. Have him gift her swim wear first, maybe for a holiday trip (after covid), before gifting her lingerie (perhaps after they first sleep together, or slightly before to give her a clear signal of where things could progress). Slow and steady build-up, especially because Shaina is reluctant to get romantically involved initially, just wanting company, but gradually starts to develop romantic feelings.

Describe in detail their first love-making session, with lots of dialogue.


Shaina would probably feel guilt afterwards and try to push Rahul away (for his own good), or go looking for a suitable girl for him to marry (to try and end thier romantic relationship). But though they argue and fall out, Rahul eventually persuades her to see him as her man (and doesn't want to get married to someone else).

Eventually Shaina should fall in love with Rahul, and want to live with him as a "husband and wife" couple. Rahul should lead the way and actually propose to Shaina, and organise a small wedding so she can feel she has actually married him.


Of course after the wedding he should remind her the first duty of every wife is to bear a child for her husband (and she should willingly want to get pregnant by him to "complete" thier family and show her love for him by growing his seed in her womb).

 

[lustychimera]

This sounds plausible.

The only part that I'd change is the whole COVID variant makes it come across like a sci-fi. It'd really ground the story if it maybe shifted focus to the damage all the real life lockdowns did to the kids and how it stunted their social life.

Like, make the kid's reclusive nature a product of his own psyche rather than an apocalyptic restriction.

That's also give the story somewhere to go because maybe as his relationship with his mom progresses, she's able to get him outside more and more, helping him cope with his psychological issues.