Moan!

[Rod Hardwick]

Okay, after my false starts, changes in topic and crumpled sheets of electronic paper tossed into my recycle bin, I'm well on my way to writing my second Literotica story. However, I seem to have a problem...probably the most commonly used word in my story is "moan." She moans when he does this. She moans when he does that. With the cock in her mouth, she can only moan when the troop of circus midgets does.....you get the picture. I checked my thesaurus, and it gave me "whine, whimper. groan, pine, sigh, and mutter," few of which really work. Does anybody have any ideas? Good words or actions that can replace a moan, to indicate that she really, really likes what's happening to her (whether she should be doing it or not, of course ) Thanks for any help you can give me.

Rod

 

[Guest]

Women do much more than moan when they're feeling really good. They:

gasp
pant
squeal
groan (although I think this is more often a male sound)
catch their breath
murmur
sigh
grunt (not feminine, I know, but they do)
cry out
whisper
scream
yell
command
whimper
plead
speak (as in "God (insert partner's name), that feels good")

I'm sure there are other erotic sounds also.

Hope this helps.

 

[ronde]

Now that I'm again logged in

The post from "unregistered" above is mine. There oughta be a warning bell before you get logged out.

 

[Rod Hardwick]

Wow, thanks Ronde. I especially like "squealed," "whimpered," and perhaps, "cried out pleadingly." Thanks much!

 

[Omni]

Cant
Carreen
Mewl ed
Purr ed
Humm ed

Yet also much better is putting some words together. Cried passionately. Her voice churned carnally. The lusty purr she made quivered her belly.
Hmm, yes describe the actual sounds, perhaps like you would her ahhh... breasts! ( I would have said face, but.......grins)


Omni

 

[spankableBelle]

'growled low in her throat' is one of my personal favorites...

whimper too...
weep

i don't know the scene, but if it's not set in stone that she make a sound to relate her enjoyment...could she shiver? or quiver from within? just asking and offering other options...

belle

 

[NoJo]

Moan

Equally important, a list words to avoid:

"My god that feels so GOOD, she ----"

Burped
Chuckled
Yawned
Explained
Sneezed
Whined

 

[spankableBelle]

Re: Moan

Equally important, a list words to avoid:

"My god that feels so GOOD, she ----"

Burped
Chuckled
Yawned
Explained
Sneezed
Whined

<giggles>

 

[Rod Hardwick]

Great, thanks for all the ideas, guys! Those will really spice things up.

Oh, and Joe, thanks soooooo much, you just completely ruined the scene where the heroine sneezed, burped, then chuckled while being tormented by the untidy clown with the soda fetish.

...

see, he's utidy, so it's dusty...and she sneezed...and he's making her drink a lot of soda, hence the burping, and well, clowns are kinda funny so there's the chuckling....

nevermind.

 

[karmadog]

"As she came, she unwittingly let loose a fart, but he liked the way the breeze of the thing tickled his balls."

Based on a true story. When cooking for your partner, make sure you take these things into account.

 

[Svenskaflicka]

I have always regarded sex as a funny game, but that's just too much! lol

 

[TheEarl]

I like groan. I wouldn't have said groaning was solely a male pursuit.

The Earl