FederalHillRay
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I was thinking of doing a MMF story with some action between the 2 guys. Question is how much? So I go all out or just oral or hand?
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FederalHillRay
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true. I'll through in a good mf blowjob on the other m.
BedtimeStories77
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It depends. Are you writing because you enjoy the topic? Are you writing because someone asked for a specific story? Once that is determined, write about what you (or the requester) enjoy(s). 
As I've learned, talking with other authors, the placement of your story is key as well. Like, some people who frequent the Group category might get "mad" if there is hard core male/male action in the story. Visitors to Gay Male might get mad if the female character is mentioned frequently. Etc.
Can't please 'em all, of course.
As I've learned, talking with other authors, the placement of your story is key as well. Like, some people who frequent the Group category might get "mad" if there is hard core male/male action in the story. Visitors to Gay Male might get mad if the female character is mentioned frequently. Etc.
Can't please 'em all, of course.
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Eve,
You're very correct that categorization is important. Of course, Lit having no specific place for such subject matter is a cause for all sorts of controversy. I've found bi male contact in practically every category (excepting things like lesbian, obviously) at some point or another, but it just shows that with no category to put such stories, the writer must choose what *other* overriding niche the story fits in.
Many are the public comments of stories with bi male contact, whining about how the story should have gone in Gay Male. These are shortsighted comments (usually anonymous), because Gay Male implies that there are NO women present in the story, which is commonly *not* the case.
Which brings me to the subject of a header to the story.
If you write your story, and choose to put it in something *other* than Gay Male (which it probably won't fit in anyway), my suggestion is to write some sort of warning for the closed-minded, letting them know that there is contact in the story that some readers may find objectionable (funny how the comments never bitch when the ladies go at it together). It won't keep out people who are purposely out to be offended, but it should winnow out some of them.
Ultimately, write your story. There will be people who love it, as well as people who hate it. It's true of every story. If it's a subject you're not comfortable with, chances are the story will come off reading that way, so be sure you're good with writing something of this nature. You don't have to have experienced what you write about, you only have to make it *read* like you have.
Good luck.
You're very correct that categorization is important. Of course, Lit having no specific place for such subject matter is a cause for all sorts of controversy. I've found bi male contact in practically every category (excepting things like lesbian, obviously) at some point or another, but it just shows that with no category to put such stories, the writer must choose what *other* overriding niche the story fits in.
Many are the public comments of stories with bi male contact, whining about how the story should have gone in Gay Male. These are shortsighted comments (usually anonymous), because Gay Male implies that there are NO women present in the story, which is commonly *not* the case.
Which brings me to the subject of a header to the story.
If you write your story, and choose to put it in something *other* than Gay Male (which it probably won't fit in anyway), my suggestion is to write some sort of warning for the closed-minded, letting them know that there is contact in the story that some readers may find objectionable (funny how the comments never bitch when the ladies go at it together). It won't keep out people who are purposely out to be offended, but it should winnow out some of them.
Ultimately, write your story. There will be people who love it, as well as people who hate it. It's true of every story. If it's a subject you're not comfortable with, chances are the story will come off reading that way, so be sure you're good with writing something of this nature. You don't have to have experienced what you write about, you only have to make it *read* like you have.
Good luck.
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Personally, I think the *disclaimer* in a story is distracting and annoying. (Especially if they write a paragraph or more and continue on like this afterwards...)
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A better way to "warn" readers that a GROUP story has bi male action is to work it into the summary sentence. Like And Tim Makes Three: Anna and Scott learn what fun adding another male can make!
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A better way to "warn" readers that a GROUP story has bi male action is to work it into the summary sentence. Like And Tim Makes Three: Anna and Scott learn what fun adding another male can make!
susurrus
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True, it *is* quite possible to go overboard when trying to write a "disclaimer." However, I'm not sure it's always possible to include such description in *every* summary, either. If it can be managed, great, but I don't know if I'd sacrifice a better description of the *rest* of the story to get that one piece of information in.
Ray, whatever you want to do, it's your story. Those of us posting our suggestions are only trying to help, even if we can't always agree on the best form for that help to take. These are all one person's opinion, so you can count on some conflict.
I look forward to reading whatever you may come up with.
Ray, whatever you want to do, it's your story. Those of us posting our suggestions are only trying to help, even if we can't always agree on the best form for that help to take. These are all one person's opinion, so you can count on some conflict.
I look forward to reading whatever you may come up with.
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Well, when it comes to tipping folks off as to what a story contains, we could always adopt the tags used by the folks I see who post stories to usenet groups, usually in the subject line or in the first line of the story. Basically it's a set of letters that tell you what goes on in the story in a nutshel, thus (ff,fm,mf,mfm,inc,nc,VW) would tell you that the story has girl on girl, girl on guy, guy on girl (note the switch in dominance between the two), two guys and a girl with the girl in between, incest, nonconsent, and a Volkswagon. Not necessarily all at once, mind you 
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Texguy84 said:Basically it's a set of letters that tell you what goes on in the story in a nutshel, thus (ff,fm,mf,mfm,inc,nc,VW) would tell you that the story has girl on girl, girl on guy, guy on girl (note the switch in dominance between the two), two guys and a girl with the girl in between, incest, nonconsent, and a Volkswagon. Not necessarily all at once, mind you
ROFL!
silkybiblue
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write soon
oral, oral, oral !!!
oral, oral, oral !!!
diehard0123
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How about one with a bit of a twist, have one of the guys wisper to the woman, saying that he wants her to have the other guy cum in her mouth and when he does he wants her to spit the other guys cum in his mouth(snowball). when the guy that cums observes this he realizes that this turns him on and wants to try a taste.
good idea for a story!
I think that the variety of stories in the group sex category is amazing. However if there's one thing thing that I hate its mmf threesome's were the guy's don't interract.
Good on you and I hope to see some curiosity between the guys and girls in your story. Perhaps something to explore is both guys doing the pussy licking, then having their tongues meet...
Look forward to reading
I think that the variety of stories in the group sex category is amazing. However if there's one thing thing that I hate its mmf threesome's were the guy's don't interract.
Good on you and I hope to see some curiosity between the guys and girls in your story. Perhaps something to explore is both guys doing the pussy licking, then having their tongues meet...
Look forward to reading
