I've posted my first story on Literotica. Yay!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=320039
I'd love to get some constructive criticism as I plan future chapters and other stories.
What did you like and how can I improve?
Thanks in advance for the feedback. Looking forward to reading everyone else's stuff too!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=320039
I'd love to get some constructive criticism as I plan future chapters and other stories.
What did you like and how can I improve?
Thanks in advance for the feedback. Looking forward to reading everyone else's stuff too!