Mind controlling the controller

[silvermatter]

Does anyone know of any good stories that are set up like this, or would like to write one?

The idea: a person discovers they have mind control powers and decide to test it on someone they know (friend, spouse, lover, neighbor, sibling, colleague, etc). They end up going too far, getting out of control, or in some other way going overboard or having unintended sexual consequences. They're clearly uncomfortable with the result that they created, but go along with it anyway and end up satisfied by the end.

Eventually, we find out that the motivation and the powers themselves were originally, unknowingly bestowed on the protagonist by someone else with mind control ability - a naughty friend, a perverted bystander, a vindictive rival with vague but intact morals, or perhaps even the protagonist's partner/target themselves..

Lots of themes could work with this kind of story - exhibitionism, impregnation, B&D, swinging/swapping/infidelity, sluttiness/whorishness, incest, exploring sexuality, or maybe even a reluctant, romantic first time, to name a few.

Thoughts?

 

[Carnevil9]

I don't know of any stories like that, but it is an interesting idea. Why don't you write it?

 

[silvermatter]

I don't know of any stories like that, but it is an interesting idea. Why don't you write it?

I may still do so. I'd still be curious to know what others can do with the premise.

I've only written a couple of erotic stories before but I haven't posted either because I'm self-conscious about my writing. One was a fanfic which honestly wasn't very good, but I also didn't get good feedback on the other.