Mind controlling the controller

[silvermatter]

Does anyone know of any good stories that are set up like this, or would like to write one?

The idea: a person discovers they have mind control powers and decide to test it on someone they know (friend, spouse, lover, neighbor, sibling, colleague, etc). They end up going too far, getting out of control, or in some other way going overboard or having unintended sexual consequences. They're clearly uncomfortable with the result that they created, but go along with it anyway and end up satisfied by the end.

Eventually, we find out that the motivation and the powers themselves were originally, unknowingly bestowed on the protagonist by someone else with mind control ability - a naughty friend, a perverted bystander, a vindictive rival with vague but intact morals, or perhaps even the protagonist's partner/target themselves..

Lots of themes could work with this kind of story - exhibitionism, impregnation, B&D, swinging/swapping/infidelity, sluttiness/whorishness, incest, exploring sexuality, or maybe even a reluctant, romantic first time, to name a few.

Thoughts?

 

[Carnevil9]

I don't know of any stories like that, but it is an interesting idea. Why don't you write it?

 

[silvermatter]

I don't know of any stories like that, but it is an interesting idea. Why don't you write it?

I may still do so. I'd still be curious to know what others can do with the premise.

I've only written a couple of erotic stories before but I haven't posted either because I'm self-conscious about my writing. One was a fanfic which honestly wasn't very good, but I also didn't get good feedback on the other.

 

[LupusDei]

I think it's a terrific idea. A competent mind controller would totally be a able to simulate mind control powers projected unto a person of choice. Our main victim may realize at the end he never had the power, or remain delusional but powerless.

 

[Husky_Embrace]

Does anyone know of any good stories that are set up like this, or would like to write one?

The idea: a person discovers they have mind control powers and decide to test it on someone they know (friend, spouse, lover, neighbor, sibling, colleague, etc). They end up going too far, getting out of control, or in some other way going overboard or having unintended sexual consequences. They're clearly uncomfortable with the result that they created, but go along with it anyway and end up satisfied by the end.

Eventually, we find out that the motivation and the powers themselves were originally, unknowingly bestowed on the protagonist by someone else with mind control ability - a naughty friend, a perverted bystander, a vindictive rival with vague but intact morals, or perhaps even the protagonist's partner/target themselves..

Lots of themes could work with this kind of story - exhibitionism, impregnation, B&D, swinging/swapping/infidelity, sluttiness/whorishness, incest, exploring sexuality, or maybe even a reluctant, romantic first time, to name a few.

Thoughts?

I still have a story in this nearly exact vein that I tried to get a volunteer editor for. Two students try out hypnosis to relax during their exam period. The hypnosis fails, though the relaxation helps. It becomes a ritual where they do this regularly, trying out a different hypnosis each time.

Then at one point it succeeds. It is all slightly wonky and out of place, and suddenly he has a sexual desire for her he never knew he had. After the deed the hypnotized woman helps him cover his crime, so she won't be any the wiser when she gets out of the hypnosis.

Though if you read between the lines you can see the wonky experience is because he flipped to a self hypnosis page instead, where she took full advantage of him being hypnotized.

 

[APilgrimSquare]

I wrote a story with similar themes, but the reveal is that the hypnosis in the early part of the story takes place within the context of broader mind control that only becomes apparent at the end.