Mind control category?

[tristianc]

I've had the same thought. I wouldn't trust me with this power.

I wouldn’t trust me with many powers, mind control, or invisibility.

 

[nice90sguy]

I just published an MC story and it’s by far my worst performing so far, from an engagement perspective. It’s written from the perspective of a mind controlled man, and focuses more on the power dynamics between him and his controller rather than sex per se. I think it’s pretty good, as far as writing goes, but maybe just not the kind of thing MC readers are looking for.

I read it, and really liked it, my kind of story. That's exactly what MC stories should be like - heavy on the mind games.

 

[Djmac1031]

i had an idea for a story awhile back about a guy who gets the ability to, not control minds outright, but manipulate emotions enough to get people to squash the fears and anxieties that would keep them from doing something enough to get them to act on otherwise repressed desires.

it got too convoluted and still felt like Non Con to me so I abandoned it.

 

[FidelityBoss]

Anyone write in there? It’s my goal to but I struggle with writing long enough stories (I haven’t written in a very long time)

What do you like about it? What’s your favorite story?

Sounds like you just need to find the right story idea that keeps you hooked! No shame in starting small, short stories can be a great way to build up to longer ones. What's stopping you from jumping back in?

 

[trained23]

Sounds like you just need to find the right story idea that keeps you hooked! No shame in starting small, short stories can be a great way to build up to longer ones. What's stopping you from jumping back in?

Mainly being a bad writer. Like I'm reading this one story now and it's so well written. Mine reads like an AI lol but maybe reading more will help

 

[nice90sguy]

Reading more will help, but writing more will definitely help.

 

[FidelityBoss]

Mainly being a bad writer. Like I'm reading this one story now and it's so well written. Mine reads like an AI lol but maybe reading more will help

Hey, don’t be so hard on yourself. Every writer starts somewhere, and reading more is definitely a great way to improve. Plus, comparing your work to others can be tough, focus on your own growth and style. You’ve got this!