Mild bondage, bi stuff

[phillyinjun]

Mild bondage, bi (mmf) stuff

The general premise is that this girl cannot understand why guys like girl on girl porn, and rags two of her friends. They dare her not to get turned on by guy on guy sex, and she consents to be tied as they play with each other. The story is a POV from each of the participants in turn, with the girl's POV being the most frequent.

See any potential there? I do need help developing the plot from a female side.

 

[siren319]

There is some potential here, but I think the story would do best from one perspective, but definately no more than two. The girl perspective is a must have since getting her turned on seems to be the whole point of the story.

What part of the girl perspective do you need... I can give a little insight on this part but I already think mmf is really hot anyway so at least you know I'd be honest.

 

[phillyinjun]

What I would like is for a woman to read the story and help me shore up the female perspective. Realism, rather than male fantasy, is what I am attempting, hoping to fulfill that male fantasy in the process.

It is hard to describe the female sensual experience, not having been a woman.

"She moaned, got wet" etc gets a bit tired after a while.

 

[siren319]

that is the tough part. lol. I have to give you credit for the attempt. I could read it sometime this week if you want to send it. I'll give feedback and give you my perspective on it. I'll pm you my email address.

 

[siren319]

or you can put the story here, either way

 

[phillyinjun]

Email would be great...