MetaMorph

[jezzaz]

Just idly wondering if anyone here is reading it on the main site?

5 chapters, 56k words, written over 4 nights. I just had the idea and needed to get it out. Was only supposed to be 10k words but I am wordy bastard and hell, why use 10k where 56k will work, right?

The comments are nice and occasionally I get a bit of feedback which is great, but it would be interesting to see what the forum lurkers think?

 

[PennLady]

But what kind of feedback do you want? I checked it out and you have tons of comments, and it seems most of them are positive and supportive.

 

[Tyro999]

A link to the story in your post would have helped.

 

[jezzaz]

A link to the story in your post would have helped.

You are quite right. My bad!

http://www.literotica.com/s/metamorph-ch-01

There are 5 chapters - as of today, 3 are published (and the last one needs revising - I had some text in there in < and >, and of course, the web formatter Laurel uses dumped them. I've already submitted a new version.

 

[Darkniciad]

If you want to keep the angle brackets, you can use the html special character code.

< >

< and > respectively.

Just type those codes directly into the text, and the text processor automatically changes them into the appropriate symbol without accidently interpreting them as html tags and eating up the text between them.

 

[FreakersBall]

I'm liking it...flows well...reads like one of those late nite HBO/Skin-emax shows...looking forward to the next couple of chapters...

Definitely see potential for a sequel(s) with Glen reforming other poor slobs.