Mermaid "Brothel"

[Shendude]

So, having watched Pirates of the Caribbean: On Stranger Tides yesterday afternoon, I developeda hankering for mermaid erotica. In doing so I came up with this:

Firstly, a mermaid's tail does not start at her waist, but below her thighs. Secondly, they can turn it on or off at will; they can have legs in the water and tails on land if they wish. Thirdly, mermaids are beautiful beyond imagining, and are more skilled in the arts of pleasure than the most well-trained human courtesan.

There is an island where mermaids periodically surface to work on their tans and enjoy their legs. If a man comes to the island and offers a mermaid a song and something shiny, and lets her take a bite of his flesh, she will give him the fuck of his life. Of course, the island is no charts, and the waters around it a treachourous and prone to storms, so few men ever make the attempt.

Still, there are always men brave/foolish/horny enough to make the attempt, and some of those men are skilled/lucky enough to succeed.

Thoughts?

 

[Grimfalcon]

Interesting idea… As far a short story goes it has potential, if you’re into mermainds.
My first inclination was a broader plot though; maybe shipwrecked aristocrat or sailor winds up on this island, indulges in the delights of the mermainds, or maybe one takes a fancy to him. After being rescued, he sets up an expedition, like a big game hunter, and seeks the island out with the intent of capturing them, or taking a particular one for his personal use. He could even be considering some sort of nautical, mermaind whorehouse or something for passing ships.
You could go a lot of different ways with this, as I see it. Romance, capture/ slave theme, forbidden love, ect.
Cool idea no matter which rout you take with it.

 

[Shendude]

Disclaimer (which I forgot to include): I am not a writer. I couldn't write a proper story to save my life, all I can do is pop out ideas for and bits of stories. The purpose of this thread is to inspire others to write.

Interesting idea… As far a short story goes it has potential, if you’re into mermainds.
My first inclination was a broader plot though; maybe shipwrecked aristocrat or sailor winds up on this island, indulges in the delights of the mermainds, or maybe one takes a fancy to him. After being rescued, he sets up an expedition, like a big game hunter, and seeks the island out with the intent of capturing them, or taking a particular one for his personal use. He could even be considering some sort of nautical, mermaind whorehouse or something for passing ships.
You could go a lot of different ways with this, as I see it. Romance, capture/ slave theme, forbidden love, ect.
Cool idea no matter which rout you take with it.

Ooh, that could work.

I also had an additional thought since the initial posting, that periodically, the mermaids will find a particularly handsome man and carry him under to be their sex-slave. Also, having a woman visit them and causing great confusion; not because they're unfamiliar with sapphic love (after all, they're all female), but because they never realized that humans have lesbians.

 

[Fatwa_Morgana]

I would love to be a mermaid. Only, I'd probably be a mermaid without a pussy. And all my friends would have pussies, and I'd be terribly unhappy. I would dream of finding a man who could somehow transform me, give me a pussy, make me whole, and fuck me. Yes, I think that would be a terribly sad, and maybe terribly happy, story. Maybe I'll work on it. I like sad stories that turn out happy, maybe. Morgana

 

[Cruel2BKind]

Hey! sexist against mermen!

How about there are mermen on the island too that seduce any female castaways? Or, they could pleasure some of the men if you have a broad enough mind to at least acknowledge the gay male potential for this. You don't have to write the sex scene, but maybe just mention that a merman flirted with one of your castaways or something.

 

[Grimfalcon]

Disclaimer (which I forgot to include): I am not a writer. I couldn't write a proper story to save my life, all I can do is pop out ideas for and bits of stories. The purpose of this thread is to inspire others to write.


Ooh, that could work.

I also had an additional thought since the initial posting, that periodically, the mermaids will find a particularly handsome man and carry him under to be their sex-slave. Also, having a woman visit them and causing great confusion; not because they're unfamiliar with sapphic love (after all, they're all female), but because they never realized that humans have lesbians.

Okay, I was under the assumption you were a writer fishing for ideas (no pun intended.) Cool, so this is a free for all; I may have to follow up at some point in the future, but my plate is pretty full for the time being. I like writting in the historical time frame, the age of sail, ect., and this idea would fit perfectly.

The reverse idea of male sex slaves or turning it into a lesbian thing might be cool.

Mermen is another option; I don't write gay erotica so it didn't even occure to me. Take the ball and run with it, that would work too.

On a lighter note, I guess there won't be any question as to what Mermaind pussy smells like. Time to get the tartar sauce out.

 

[Cameo_Fleur]

Remember the old joke about the sailor/pirate/fisherman who found a MAIDMER instead of a mermaid? The top half of her was a fish!

 

[Shendude]

How about there are mermen on the island too that seduce any female castaways? Or, they could pleasure some of the men if you have a broad enough mind to at least acknowledge the gay male potential for this. You don't have to write the sex scene, but maybe just mention that a merman flirted with one of your castaways or something.

Well, traditionally, Mermen are ugly as sin, so I decided to go with the movie's suggestion that the merfolk are a one-gender race.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Interesting idea… As far a short story goes it has potential, if you’re into mermainds.
My first inclination was a broader plot though; maybe shipwrecked aristocrat or sailor winds up on this island, indulges in the delights of the mermainds, or maybe one takes a fancy to him. After being rescued, he sets up an expedition, like a big game hunter, and seeks the island out with the intent of capturing them, or taking a particular one for his personal use. He could even be considering some sort of nautical, mermaind whorehouse or something for passing ships.
You could go a lot of different ways with this, as I see it. Romance, capture/ slave theme, forbidden love, ect.
Cool idea no matter which rout you take with it.

And just as I thought there were no new ideas out there.
I think you're right, it should be expanded.
For being off the charts, I'm thinking of The Lost City of Atlantes only the entire city is a giant submarine (before they had submarines).
This would mean it's not the typical Wonder Woman story (an island of Amazon women near the Bermuda Triangle) but it would move place to place.

I think we should do something with the Siren Song as well, luring sailors to their death (see new episodes of Doctor Who).

On a lighter note, I guess there won't be any question as to what Mermaind pussy smells like. Time to get the tartar sauce out.

Like seaweed.
A mermaid would probably not have a vagina since she has no womb we know of.
On the upside, the side of her thigh and upper tail is like an automatic C section (sealed for swimming) that includes the vagina and womb (fuck on land only if with child).
If you can believe it, her clitoris is located in one of her ears (which one depends on if she's straight or not).

This description is modeled after the birthing of whales and dolphins.

 

[Grimfalcon]

And just as I thought there were no new ideas out there.
I think you're right, it should be expanded.
For being off the charts, I'm thinking of The Lost City of Atlantes only the entire city is a giant submarine (before they had submarines).
This would mean it's not the typical Wonder Woman story (an island of Amazon women near the Bermuda Triangle) but it would move place to place.

I think we should do something with the Siren Song as well, luring sailors to their death (see new episodes of Doctor Who).

Like seaweed.
A mermaid would probably not have a vagina since she has no womb we know of.
On the upside, the side of her thigh and upper tail is like an automatic C section (sealed for swimming) that includes the vagina and womb (fuck on land only if with child).
If you can believe it, her clitoris is located in one of her ears (which one depends on if she's straight or not).

This description is modeled after the birthing of whales and dolphins.

An underwater city, like a submarine, is delving into a steampunk theme, which I’ve started getting into recently. Alternate history with a futuristic Victorian era past is a cool concept, any way you look at it. It opens up a whole new set of rules for a story like this.

Assuming there are no Mermen, they use the Siren’s song to lure ships closer to the underwater city. (water propulsion technology) as they travel about. Then the Mermaids sink them ( kind of like Captain Nemo) and capture the men, keeping them as slaves for procreation? The Mermaids could even be a war-like race of dominant women with a greater goal of bringing about the downfall of a male dominated, human society. You could take this entire concept in so many different directions, and all of them would work as a good story line, depending on your taste.

As for the pussy joke, I was making reference to Shendude’s description that a Mermaid’s tail starts at mid-thigh, and they do have vaginas. Either would work, I guess, depending on your imagination and how you want the story to unfold. If you decide to go with traditional fish anatomy and method of procreation, you could get into some very different fetishes, like egg lying, external fertilization, or underwater life birth to make them more human-ish.

I’ve known a few women over the years that act like they have a clit in their ear.

 

[neci]

mermaid lungs
no vagina
just a set of lips

 

[Fantasies_only]

If you decide to go with traditional fish anatomy and method of procreation, you could get into some very different fetishes, like egg lying, external fertilization, or underwater life birth to make them more human-ish.

I’ve known a few women over the years that act like they have a clit in their ear.

I'm not sure, but I think Literotica won't except even children in non sexual themes, especially when the infant sees a naked lady.
As for egg laying, it might be possible to post, however with egg laying comes fertilization, and a fetus could be called an infant to Lit.

Assuming in this story mermaids do have vaginas, I would say it's best to have her tubes tied, induce a miscarriage, or have a city wide abortion mandate.

The ear clit was inspired by a whale's pleasure center in the blow hole.

 

[LindsayRae]

I'm not sure, but I think Literotica won't except even children in non sexual themes, especially when the infant sees a naked lady.

Funny, Grimfalcon never seemed to say anything about "an infant seeing a lady naked". And, yes, a child-character can be in a non sexual theme at Lit.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Funny, Grimfalcon never seemed to say anything about "an infant seeing a lady naked". And, yes, a child-character can be in a non sexual theme at Lit.

A mermaid traditionally has no top, and if the tail starts at the thigh, she has no bottom.
This means she is naked.
An underwater birth would allow the newborn to see a naked lady.

No, the rules are the same as when I was here (part human alien from a nudist planet).
Non sexual scenes in this manner may not be posted.
Body switching and body transformation must have an adult mind as well as an adult body.

 

[LindsayRae]

Since a mermaid is not a real creature she can be anything her creator wants her to be.

Take the cartoon Family Guy for a minute. Lois is rescued from the ocean by a "merman" who has a fish head and a man's legs and genitalia. He wants to have sex with her and she is "grossed out" by his fish head and torso and says to him "...if you had a man's head and fish LEGS then maybe..."

In Disney's The Little Mermaid and Splash with Daryl Hannah the mermaid was capable of transfering her "fish tail" to human legs and back again, but both tales offered different reasons as to why.

In the TV show Charmed there was an episode with Jaime Pressly (where she was a mermaid wishing to turn human in a fashion similar to The Little Mermaid) where Phoebe, a human-witch, was transformed into a mermaid because of her "cold", hurt heart. So, this show stated that mermaids were creatures that already existed and that other "magical creatures" of sorts could transform into one as well.

Whom is right and whom is wrong? All of them, and/or, none of them. Just like vampyres (my prefered spelling), werewolves, zombies, banshees, or any other creature found within any region's folklore and mythology can be what you make of them.

 

[Grimfalcon]

I was just brainstorming and throwing out ideas as far as the egg lying and birthing thing. I’m sure there’s someone that would enjoy working with that sort of thing. As for the rules, that's something for someone else to inquire on; I don't plan on writing something along those lines, so it wasn't a concern for me at this point.
I still like the overall concept of an underwater, futristic Mermaid city, though.

Since a mermaid is not a real creature she can be anything her creator wants her to be.

Take the cartoon Family Guy for a minute. Lois is rescued from the ocean by a "merman" who has a fish head and a man's legs and genitalia. He wants to have sex with her and she is "grossed out" by his fish head and torso and says to him "...if you had a man's head and fish LEGS then maybe..."

In Disney's The Little Mermaid and Splash with Daryl Hannah the mermaid was capable of transfering her "fish tail" to human legs and back again, but both tales offered different reasons as to why.

In the TV show Charmed there was an episode with Jaime Pressly (where she was a mermaid wishing to turn human in a fashion similar to The Little Mermaid) where Phoebe, a human-witch, was transformed into a mermaid because of her "cold", hurt heart. So, this show stated that mermaids were creatures that already existed and that other "magical creatures" of sorts could transform into one as well.

Whom is right and whom is wrong? All of them, and/or, none of them. Just like vampyres (my prefered spelling), werewolves, zombies, banshees, or any other creature found within any region's folklore and mythology can be what you make of them.

I agree completely; when we limit our imagination with stereotypes in regards to anything, we might as well not even be writers. Kind of takes all the fun out of it.
Btw Linsay- Nice choice of NIN songs in your signiture. Listening to 'Head like a Hole' right now in fact.

 

[MatthewVett]

Just to comment: who is the nominative case, whom is the accusative case, not a fancier version of who. If you could use he, you use who; if you'd use him, you use whom. e.g. He is right, ergo, Who is right?

 

[Fantasies_only]

Just to comment: who is the nominative case, whom is the accusative case, not a fancier version of who. If you could use he, you use who; if you'd use him, you use whom. e.g. He is right, ergo, Who is right?

Huh?

 

[Fantasies_only]

Since a mermaid is not a real creature she can be anything her creator wants her to be.

Take the cartoon Family Guy for a minute. Lois is rescued from the ocean by a "merman" who has a fish head and a man's legs and genitalia. He wants to have sex with her and she is "grossed out" by his fish head and torso and says to him "...if you had a man's head and fish LEGS then maybe..."

In Disney's The Little Mermaid and Splash with Daryl Hannah the mermaid was capable of transfering her "fish tail" to human legs and back again, but both tales offered different reasons as to why.

In the TV show Charmed there was an episode with Jaime Pressly (where she was a mermaid wishing to turn human in a fashion similar to The Little Mermaid) where Phoebe, a human-witch, was transformed into a mermaid because of her "cold", hurt heart. So, this show stated that mermaids were creatures that already existed and that other "magical creatures" of sorts could transform into one as well.

Whom is right and whom is wrong? All of them, and/or, none of them. Just like vampyres (my prefered spelling), werewolves, zombies, banshees, or any other creature found within any region's folklore and mythology can be what you make of them.

I only said what Lit might think of the birthing and egg scenarios, not that there's anything wrong with any of them.

Although the mermaid myth supposedly came from manatees, I'd say a mermaid is more like a cross between a sea lion (very fast and agile) and a seal (can stoop on shallow puddle and breath out of water).

 

[LindsayRae]

I was just brainstorming and throwing out ideas as far as the egg lying and birthing thing. I’m sure there’s someone that would enjoy working with that sort of thing.

I'm sure if someone is interested in this story line they may be interested in these breeding alternatives.

As for the rules, that's something for someone else to inquire on; I don't plan on writing something along those lines, so it wasn't a concern for me at this point.

Minors can be used/mentioned as a character in non sexual scenes within a [quotetale and/or in a non sexual story. I have written both types in the past.

I agree completely; when we limit our imagination with stereotypes in regards to anything, we might as well not even be writers. Kind of takes all the fun out of it.

Bingo!

Btw Lindsay- Nice choice of NIN songs in your signiture. Listening to 'Head like a Hole' right now in fact.

I love Head Like a Hole and Closer a lot! Two of my fave NIN!

 

[LindsayRae]

Just to comment: who is the nominative case, whom is the accusative case, not a fancier version of who. If you could use he, you use who; if you'd use him, you use whom. e.g. He is right, ergo, Who is right?

P.S. Thank you for correcting me. Never have I said my grammar is perfect. (And that is why I seek editors when I do write.)

 

[Fantasies_only]

P.S. Thank you for correcting me. Never have I said my grammar is perfect. (And that is why I seek editors when I do write.)

You mean (why I seek editors when I do write).
If there is no comment afterwords, the period is outside the parentheses.
If there is a comment, the period turns into a comma inside the parentheses with a period after the comment.
A less wordy sentence within the parentheses is preferred.