Annual Appreciation Dinner

[If_Only_]

A club consists of a larger number of black men and white women. One or two men act as coordinators and call the women to the club as needed. All are fully consenting to all that happens there. Somewhat degrading terms are used towards the women as they service the men. Lots of ethnic based slang as well as slut, bitch, whore and others. The husbands or sons of the women are involved in driving the women to and from and participating to an extent, even if only watching.

Each year, the families are invited to a dinner. While the men at the club may be dressed in 'street wear', they are in suits and ties at this dinner. Women that are used at the club are honored here. No slang or derogatory terms are used. The families are treated with respect they call the women and men by their first names. They even bring their own wives and daughters. It's more like a Rotary club dinner where everyone is casually acquainted. No sex acts of any kind.

First part of the story details the club events and how the women are explicitly used in graphic detail. Second part details the dinner and how the women are held in very high regard. Third part may go back to the club and how they're used.



Too drastic of a contrast?

 

[Carnevil9]

Interesting concept. But I'd call it more of a setting than a story. You still need to have characters, motivations, obstacles, struggles, and eventually a resolution (happy or otherwise).

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

What I did not get from the initial post, is whether the spouses and daughters (assuming 18+) know of the club.
Without them knowing it would not be much of a story. If they knew, it could offer some interesting plot-lines. However in that case the backstory of how a man and a woman join the club would need to be told, otherwise, I, as a reader, would have too little foundation to understand what is going on at the dinner.

At the dinner, the existence of the club is an elephant in the room. This could make for some interesting dialogues. Imagine the black wife talks with a white husband about their views on the club. They might discuss getting together for a game of bridge while their spouses are at one of the next club events?

 

[Rob_Royale]

It's a farfetched paradigm, but if you just work it into a different situation, it feels more plausible to me.

Emily Conrad, widow of the late Arnold Conrad, owner of the Galveston NBA/NFL team, sets up a dinner for the team in honor of her late husband in his penthouse suite that he kept at the stadium, but she has seldom visited.

What she finds out that night was that her husbands sexual interests had often included the players and their wives. And the reason for the suite and the inherent privacy and unusual furniture become shockingly apparent.

However, unbeknownt to her , her husband knew he was terminal and had told a few players exactly what they were to do to his wife upon his passing.

"Wait, what are you doing, fellas? Sit down please, wait why are you undressing, that's so inappropriate ... someone please ... oh Lord in heaven!"

Once she sees what they are packing, it's all very consensual, I assure you.