Captured by romans

Nightscream89

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In the times of ancient rome a young woman (early 20's) lived peacefully in her village in Gaul (Region of France). However one day the Romans attacked, as the men went to battle, the women hid in their homes, as did out MC. However as the sound of horses went through the village, it wasn't the men returning, it was the Romans, eager to gather the spoils of their victory.

The woman is found and captured, and her adventure in service begins. It already starts on the way to Rome, where she services thirsty soldiers afterwards being sold to Romans, afterwards she services many men, from rich magistrates to Gladiators who have stood victorious in the Arena. The worst part? She loves every bit of it, she adores each cock that penetrates her hungry pussy. Of course if she had to choose, she rather fucks a strong gladiator than a fat aristocrat, but none the less she enjoys each and every one in its own way.
 
No one any input on a story of a woman in Roman times being captured and sold by the Romans?
(Maybe I just watched a bit too much Spartacus lately)
 
It's not that the premise is bad or anything, it just doesn't seem so obvious what to give input on. You already have a beginning and a high-level story line in place. What are you looking for?
 
It's not that the premise is bad or anything, it just doesn't seem so obvious what to give input on. You already have a beginning and a high-level story line in place. What are you looking for?
I guess some stuff that could happen on her journey.
Should I have her fall in love with a Roman or a Gladiator? Should she have a boyfriend/husband before she was captured and should he return?
I kinda feel like I should put some things like that in to make it interesting on the flip side, I feel like it would take away from the journey of a woman captured by Romans who is sexually exploited (and enjoys it).

And maybe some (sexual) situations which she may find herself in during her 'adventure'.
 
Well, it depends on what you want to do with the story. A couple of options:
  • Romance: Married/boyfriend before. He will have to get her back somehow. Will they be able to put everything behind them? (focus on reunion)
  • Adventure: Married before. Husband becomes gladiator to win her back. (focus on his struggles)
  • Hardcore: Virgin when captured. Used by all. Learns to accept/like new life (focus on her journey)
  • Dom/Sub: She is sold to someone who breaks her in and treats her as property (focus on her treatment)
 
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