~*~Mental Meltdown~*~ (new here)

[Sinsualmind]

Hello,
I'm new to this board. I'm looking forward to sharing and reading and hoping this is a great place to do both.



~Mental Meltdown~


Would you mind if I
spoke kisses to you
ones that would melt into
the softness of your skin
and make tattoos on your bones
ones that would
slide down your spine
and fall still at your hipline

think you'd mind if I
licked lyrics on that spot
right below your
baggy boxers
the ones that
decorate those abs
and those thighs
and drape over your size

mmmmmm.... would you mind
If I wrapped you
in slow sucks that
send you into brief
moments of cardiac arrest
scratch your chest
and the back of your thighs
while my throat measures
your size

I can do that

would you mind
if my tongue begged
for sips
of slick thick~ness
and let my lips slide
you back to stiff~ness
(oh my good~ness)
then lift
myself above you
tease your eyes
with open thighs
that flexxxxxx
when I bend
at my knees
and prepare to squeeze
you deep
carress firm
breasts that
demand your attention
did I mention
how wet I am?

would you mind If I
take pleasure
and soak you in it
roll & bounce & stroke
you in it
wettness equivalent to lakes
walls that contract
make you shake
make no mistake

I can do that

would you mind
a little Sinsual pain
like nails in your back
and teeth that clinch & pinch
when you push in every inch
meet me in the middle
of passion
force my body to shudder
give me a temporary stutter
when i moan mmm y~y~yessss


would you mind If I
matched your speed
your stroke
my need
to soak
you
has me wet
my need to see
you
sweat
is clouding my thoughts
so if I ask you to help
me clear my mind....

would you mind?

rsjsj
©2000 all rights reserved, the Mytsexxy/Sinsualmind Experience

 

[Tathagata]

Hello,
I'm new to this board. I'm looking forward to sharing and reading and hoping this is a great place to do both.



~Mental Meltdown~


Would you mind if I
spoke kisses to you
ones that would melt into
the softness of your skin
and make tattoos on your bones
ones that would
slide down your spine
and fall still at your hipline

think you'd mind if I
licked lyrics on that spot
right below your
baggy boxers
the ones that
decorate those abs
and those thighs
and drape over your size

mmmmmm.... would you mind
If I wrapped you
in slow sucks that
send you into brief
moments of cardiac arrest
scratch your chest
and the back of your thighs
while my throat measures
your size

I can do that

would you mind
if my tongue begged
for sips
of slick thick~ness
and let my lips slide
you back to stiff~ness
(oh my good~ness)
then lift
myself above you
tease your eyes
with open thighs
that flexxxxxx
when I bend
at my knees
and prepare to squeeze
you deep
carress firm
breasts that
demand your attention
did I mention
how wet I am?

would you mind If I
take pleasure
and soak you in it
roll & bounce & stroke
you in it
wettness equivalent to lakes
walls that contract
make you shake
make no mistake

I can do that

would you mind
a little Sinsual pain
like nails in your back
and teeth that clinch & pinch
when you push in every inch
meet me in the middle
of passion
force my body to shudder
give me a temporary stutter
when i moan mmm y~y~yessss


would you mind If I
matched your speed
your stroke
my need
to soak
you
has me wet
my need to see
you
sweat
is clouding my thoughts
so if I ask you to help
me clear my mind....

would you mind?

rsjsj
©2000 all rights reserved, the Mytsexxy/Sinsualmind Experience

I think you will do Just fine here

a very clever poem and it's erotic and fun without being....overt
Welcome to Lit

 

[Miss Oatlash]

Welcome!

Welcome to our little world. I, too, am fairly new here, and I have enjoyed it immensely. I look forward to a new friend!



Miss Oatlash

P.S. Love those first two lines:
"Would you mind if I
spoke kisses to you"

 

[Maria2394]

yessss!! I mean, NOOO, I mean, hell, I wouldnt mind at all

welcome to LIt, you will probably die laughing here most of the time, some of the poets here are soo damned funny its not funny, and your poem rocks, I hope you post it

nice to meet you, I am Maria, the self proclaimed narcissistic Literotica gardener, if you have any plant probs lemme know, okay?

 

[fawnie]

would you mind...

a compromise?
not the size
but only silicon
i own
still a pleasure
you could treasure...





don't mind me, i'm rather frisky these days

welcome to the threads here where the poet gurus hang their hats.

your poem was so much fun to read!
inspiring even

 

[Tathagata]

would you mind...

a compromise?
not the size
but only silicon
i own
still a pleasure
you could treasure...





don't mind me, i'm rather frisky these days

welcome to the threads here where the poet gurus hang their hats.

your poem was so much fun to read!
inspiring even

we gotta either get you some or get you a cold shower sweetie

lol

 

[WickedEve]

Hi, get rid of the "mmmmmm...." and I'll adore you and your poem. I don't like mmmmm........ yesssssss...... ohhhhhoooohhhhh..... in prose and certainly not in poetry. It's just a no no. A nooooo nooooooo!!!!!! lol

Did I say welcome to the board? Check out my AV. That's the inside of my knee. Now is the time for extra letters: eeeewwww

By the way, your first stanza is really good. Good poem, but the first stanza just stands out.

Strangely, I like flexxxxxx. You'd think after my mmmmm rant that I wouldn't, but I do. Jeez... I really feel talkative... oh, I know why. I had 4 cups of coffee. I better go now before I say something totally hyper.

 

[fawnie]

we gotta either get you some or get you a cold shower sweetie

lol

lol

cold showers are doing no good..we(I) need to get me some

 

[Tathagata]

lol

cold showers are doing no good..we(I) need to get me some

more power to ya Sis
Good luck

 

[Tathagata]

Hi, get rid of the "mmmmmm...." and I'll adore you and your poem. I don't like mmmmm........ yesssssss...... ohhhhhoooohhhhh..... in prose and certainly not in poetry. It's just a no no. A nooooo nooooooo!!!!!! lol

Did I say welcome to the board? Check out my AV. That's the inside of my knee. Now is the time for extra letters: eeeewwww

By the way, your first stanza is really good. Good poem, but the first stanza just stands out.

Strangely, I like flexxxxxx. You'd think after my mmmmm rant that I wouldn't, but I do. Jeez... I really feel talkative... oh, I know why. I had 4 cups of coffee. I better go now before I say something totally hyper.

Too Late

 

[tungtied2u]

Hello,
I'm new to this board. I'm looking forward to sharing and reading and hoping this is a great place to do both.



~Mental Meltdown~


Would you mind if I
spoke kisses to you
ones that would melt into
the softness of your skin
and make tattoos on your bones
ones that would
slide down your spine
and fall still at your hipline

think you'd mind if I
licked lyrics on that spot
right below your
baggy boxers
the ones that
decorate those abs
and those thighs
and drape over your size

mmmmmm.... would you mind
If I wrapped you
in slow sucks that
send you into brief
moments of cardiac arrest
scratch your chest
and the back of your thighs
while my throat measures
your size

I can do that

would you mind
if my tongue begged
for sips
of slick thick~ness
and let my lips slide
you back to stiff~ness
(oh my good~ness)
then lift
myself above you
tease your eyes
with open thighs
that flexxxxxx
when I bend
at my knees
and prepare to squeeze
you deep
carress firm
breasts that
demand your attention
did I mention
how wet I am?

would you mind If I
take pleasure
and soak you in it
roll & bounce & stroke
you in it
wettness equivalent to lakes
walls that contract
make you shake
make no mistake

I can do that

would you mind
a little Sinsual pain
like nails in your back
and teeth that clinch & pinch
when you push in every inch
meet me in the middle
of passion
force my body to shudder
give me a temporary stutter
when i moan mmm y~y~yessss


would you mind If I
matched your speed
your stroke
my need
to soak
you
has me wet
my need to see
you
sweat
is clouding my thoughts
so if I ask you to help
me clear my mind....

would you mind?

rsjsj
©2000 all rights reserved, the Mytsexxy/Sinsualmind Experience

Erotic poetry written with a smirk- how can you do that with your mouth full?
Welcome, I sure you'll find many kindred souls here. I look forward to reading more. Enjoyed your initial offering.

 

[Sinsualmind]

*smiles* Thanks everyone for the feedback and the welcomes! I see a few of you seem pretty laid back and crazy at the same time, so I think i'll fit in just fine, lol.

Fawnie.... silicon.... I think i'm alergic.... *laughing* but thanks

Eve, I perform my poetry, so I think all the mmmm's come from writing it as i'd perform it, something i'm trying to get away from, but not completely. But i'm glad it sparked a caffene-induced response from ya! lol oh yeah, and *looks@ the avatar*
ewwwwwwwwww
lol

I have the audio file for this one. Is there a specific place I have to post that, or can I post it here as well?

Thanks again for reading
light
R~~~

 

[tarablackwood22]

Welcome.

Especially love the first stanza of your poem.

Hope you offer more for us to read.