TheCaptain
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Slightly off-topic (sort of...)
Okay, both good points... now tell me, how does this sound, as a preliminary concept for Ch. 03?:
Kimberley and Keith have a big fight which the rest of the group all hear from their respective cabins, but do not intervene in. She goes to Ashley for comfort and support, but Ash is angry and suspicious of her because she and Rick have become closer since their sensuous coupling.
Kim is hurt, so goes to her youngest sister Connie, who gives her the support she needs, and before long they're hugging each other tightly in Connie's cabin. Over a short period, Connie at least gets turned on by the intimacy, and soon enough starts to get Kim wet as well.
They are kissing and caressing inside of ten minutes after that... then from there, its all over!
Around the same time (btw ch.03 would probably end up spanning the entire second day of the caribbean holiday), Rick and Ashley are having their own dramas.
Rick, deciding that he wouldn't be able to hold up any pretences for the entire week-long holiday, comes out with his knowledge about his girlfriend's affair with Keith to her, and Ashley flips out. Another loud argument ensues, but after much hard words and insults from both parties, things settle down and they leave things as they were for a while... stewing on their own personal rages.
He goes to see Andrew, but instead finds Billie in their bunkroom crying quietly, alone - she tells him when he asks that her husband has gone for a long swim to cool down, and that she was crying because they had gotten into quite a heated fight after she had mistakenly uncovered some information from his personal doctor on his terminal illness (I know, a recurring theme!
)
So now, Rick is not alone in knowing Andrew's dreadful secret... she is hurt and afraid, but understands that she has to get through this and try and bring her fragmenting family together. Again, another comforting moment, with Rick as the 'rock of support' that Billie seemed to need at this point in her life.
Quickly, though, this wholely innocent moment begins to take on an entirely different aspect, as Rick cannot help but begin to get hard, with such a sexy woman's body pressing up against him the way that it was...
Andrew spies them through one of the side viewports when he's coming round on the deck after his swim... he does not confront them, though. He is too shocked, and hurt.
(Keeping to the thread - sort of),As he's heading away from the scene of his wife's infidelity with his middle child's boyfriend, Andrew stops short suddenly when Connie (fresh from her lesbian encounter with her sister Kimberley, though he doesn't know this of course!) comes out on the deck, in her teeny-tiny binkini outfit. She leans over to pick something up off the deck, with her ass pointing back towards her Dad. He cannot help but gawk at it, so firm and luminous, barely concealed with the flimsiest of bikini briefs... he gets rock-hard in an instant! (who wouldn't? 
)
Not a bad set-up so far, huh?
From there, well, you know...
What do you think so far? Okay? Drivel? Thoughts and comments appreciated, ideas moreso!
sirhugs said:
Okay, both good points... now tell me, how does this sound, as a preliminary concept for Ch. 03?:
Kimberley and Keith have a big fight which the rest of the group all hear from their respective cabins, but do not intervene in. She goes to Ashley for comfort and support, but Ash is angry and suspicious of her because she and Rick have become closer since their sensuous coupling.
Kim is hurt, so goes to her youngest sister Connie, who gives her the support she needs, and before long they're hugging each other tightly in Connie's cabin. Over a short period, Connie at least gets turned on by the intimacy, and soon enough starts to get Kim wet as well.
They are kissing and caressing inside of ten minutes after that... then from there, its all over!
Around the same time (btw ch.03 would probably end up spanning the entire second day of the caribbean holiday), Rick and Ashley are having their own dramas.
Rick, deciding that he wouldn't be able to hold up any pretences for the entire week-long holiday, comes out with his knowledge about his girlfriend's affair with Keith to her, and Ashley flips out. Another loud argument ensues, but after much hard words and insults from both parties, things settle down and they leave things as they were for a while... stewing on their own personal rages.
He goes to see Andrew, but instead finds Billie in their bunkroom crying quietly, alone - she tells him when he asks that her husband has gone for a long swim to cool down, and that she was crying because they had gotten into quite a heated fight after she had mistakenly uncovered some information from his personal doctor on his terminal illness (I know, a recurring theme!
)So now, Rick is not alone in knowing Andrew's dreadful secret... she is hurt and afraid, but understands that she has to get through this and try and bring her fragmenting family together. Again, another comforting moment, with Rick as the 'rock of support' that Billie seemed to need at this point in her life.
Quickly, though, this wholely innocent moment begins to take on an entirely different aspect, as Rick cannot help but begin to get hard, with such a sexy woman's body pressing up against him the way that it was...
Andrew spies them through one of the side viewports when he's coming round on the deck after his swim... he does not confront them, though. He is too shocked, and hurt.
(Keeping to the thread - sort of
),As he's heading away from the scene of his wife's infidelity with his middle child's boyfriend, Andrew stops short suddenly when Connie (fresh from her lesbian encounter with her sister Kimberley, though he doesn't know this of course!) comes out on the deck, in her teeny-tiny binkini outfit. She leans over to pick something up off the deck, with her ass pointing back towards her Dad. He cannot help but gawk at it, so firm and luminous, barely concealed with the flimsiest of bikini briefs... he gets rock-hard in an instant! (who wouldn't? )Not a bad set-up so far, huh?
From there, well, you know...
What do you think so far? Okay? Drivel? Thoughts and comments appreciated, ideas moreso!
