me and dad

[pearlygates]

story loosely based on a personal experience i had when i was younger.

dad fell asleep watching tv and his robe was open a little. i noticed his dick peeping out and had always wondered what sucking it would be like. went over and kneeled down in front of the couch quietly and lightly touched his dick. guided it into my mouth and sucked a little. as it got harder i sucked harder. he moaned a little, but was still asleep and evenually came in my mouth.

 

[FTW666]

Did you really do that or just think about it?

 

[BlackSnake]

I think the story would be nice having the curiosity take over. After all, it's right in front of you - inches from your grasp. Like a magnet, you come slower inspecting the folds of loose skin. You are so close that you detect the heat from his sack that lazily lay next to the sleeping rod.

You touch it studying your father movements. You don't know his reaction, but you imagine that it would be horrid. You touch it again, slide the tip of your tongue over the pee-hole,....its in your mouth.

You suck forgetting about being caught. The amazing cock hardened enough...

 

[sirhugs]

did you swallow?

 

[pearlygates]

oh god this is embarrassing and i hope i dont offend anyone. i was so curious and he was sleeping. i was really quiet and went over to the couch and kneeled down. i was pretty scared he was going to wake up but i licked the tip of his dick just to see what it tasted like. i hadn't ever had a boyfriend yet so this was very new to me. after i licked the head, i was pretty excited and i sucked more into my mouth really gently. but then i freaked out that he'd wake up so i quit after like 2 minutes. later i wished i'd sucked it longer and gotten the chance for him to cum in my mouth. but i was young and pretty freaked out that i'd get caught.

 

[sirhugs]

maybe you could write up what you wish had happened as a story submission

 

[MasochisticToy]

Wow. You had an understanding of oral sex (and a desire to perform it) "when you were younger and had no boyfriend yet"? I'm impressed.


~Toy

 

[sirhugs]

Wow. You had an understanding of oral sex (and a desire to perform it) "when you were younger and had no boyfriend yet"? I'm impressed.


~Toy

one assumes she was 18

 

[FTW666]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/revevil/liar.jpg
That's the ticket!

 

[sirhugs]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/revevil/liar.jpg
That's the ticket!

and how does jon lovitz enter the story?

 

[BlackSnake]

oh god this is embarrassing and i hope i dont offend anyone. i was so curious and he was sleeping. i was really quiet and went over to the couch and kneeled down. i was pretty scared he was going to wake up but i licked the tip of his dick just to see what it tasted like. i hadn't ever had a boyfriend yet so this was very new to me. after i licked the head, i was pretty excited and i sucked more into my mouth really gently. but then i freaked out that he'd wake up so i quit after like 2 minutes. later i wished i'd sucked it longer and gotten the chance for him to cum in my mouth. but i was young and pretty freaked out that i'd get caught.

I think this is a very good story like it is. You must have noticed that he had a cock before then. Had you seen it hard in his pants or fully exposed before. Had it accidently rubbed against you. What was your first encounter with his cock? Had you heard him making love to your mother, or accidently exposed elsewhere?

I'm assuming that you were very much aware of sex and probably masturbated often. Eventhough you feared him waking, there must have been something about him that you did say. Was her very kind and helped you with various things, such as getting your driver's licenses, school projects, trips to the mall, etc.

I think you can end the story without showing that he work or came in your mouth. The story could be about the two minutes of having his cock in your mouth, and you getting away with it.

 

[sirhugs]

I think this is a very good story like it is. You must have noticed that he had a cock before then. Had you seen it hard in his pants or fully exposed before. Had it accidently rubbed against you. What was your first encounter with his cock? Had you heard him making love to your mother, or accidently exposed elsewhere?

I'm assuming that you were very much aware of sex and probably masturbated often. Eventhough you feared him waking, there must have been something about him that you did say. Was her very kind and helped you with various things, such as getting your driver's licenses, school projects, trips to the mall, etc.

I think you can end the story without showing that he work or came in your mouth. The story could be about the two minutes of having his cock in your mouth, and you getting away with it.

and dealing with these issues would expand it nicely to the 750 word minimum or more

 

[BlackSnake]

and dealing with these issues would expand it nicely to the 750 word minimum or more

Easily, I'm thinking horny girl, dad's cock, why dad's cock? Is she touching herself, is she wet, is the excitement of what she's about to do making her nipples hard? She is lost with his cock in her mouth for two whole minutes....that's a long time. She's feeling the shape of the head of his cock...does she close her eyes? What's her vision? Is it romantic? Is it lust? Had she been masturbating prior?

I hope she hasn't disappeared....I like this story developed in more detail.

 

[MasochisticToy]

one assumes she was 18

I guess I'm not one. I don't care to assume anything. Not a smart choice.

Ya know what they say about assuming, right? You make an ass out of u and me. lol

Besides, if she *didn't* mean 18 then that would have to be edited, of course.


~Toy

 

[pearlygates]

i had seen his dick a few times before that. like in his room dressing with the door open. my family wasn't real worried about seeing each other naked. i don't know why i got turned on by it. i accidentally walked in on my mom sucking it once and just wondered about it after that. it was the most erotic thing i have ever done. i wonder if there are other people who have done this. sometimes i wonder if he knows i did it.

 

[MasochisticToy]

You have a PM.

 

[sirhugs]

You have a PM.

we wanna know !

 

[TheCaptain]

Ya know what they say about assuming, right? You make an ass out of u and me. lol

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i had seen his dick a few times before that. like in his room dressing with the door open. my family wasn't real worried about seeing each other naked. i don't know why i got turned on by it. i accidentally walked in on my mom sucking it once and just wondered about it after that. it was the most erotic thing i have ever done. i wonder if there are other people who have done this. sometimes i wonder if he knows i did it.

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You have a PM.

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we wanna know !

= ?


Well one ASSUMES that pearlygates isn't alone there!

Or is that just TheCaptain being -ish again?

 

[MasochisticToy]

It almost seemed like your post was in "code" Captain.

No worries, Sirhugs. I just asked if she minded sharing her current age. Some women don't like that question.


~Toy

 

[TheCaptain]

It almost seemed like your post was in "code" Captain.

No worries, Sirhugs. I just asked if she minded sharing her current age. Some women don't like that question.


~Toy

lol 'code' hehe. No worries, my mistake!

Knew I was seeing things that wern't there... . But one can dream!

 

[sirhugs]

lol 'code' hehe. No worries, my mistake!

Knew I was seeing things that wern't there... . But one can dream!

can one write the best dreams up for Lit?

 

[TheCaptain]

can one write the best dreams up for Lit?

one already has, and one will continue til til one either gets all of one's belongings possessed by the bank or dies at the computer screen, typing furiously away at the keyboard trying to get all of the damn demons out of one's head!

BTW one has already posted 13 of one's best dreams on Lit... at least it was 13 stories the last time one checked

 

[sirhugs]

one already has, and one will continue til til one either gets all of one's belongings possessed by the bank or dies at the computer screen, typing furiously away at the keyboard trying to get all of the damn demons out of one's head!

BTW one has already posted 13 of one's best dreams on Lit... at least it was 13 stories the last time one checked

I recall ' Caribean Cruise' fondly. Must go back to review the rest... is there a cruise pt 3 in the offing?

 

[TheCaptain]

I recall ' Caribean Cruise' fondly. Must go back to review the rest... is there a cruise pt 3 in the offing?

Ah, yeh I guess.... but I really don't know how to take things further and make it more interesting. I don't really want ONE series going on indefinitely, like up into the 20th or 30th chapter!

If you have any ideas or suggestions, hopefully to turn the tale into an incest direction which was where I was sort of thinking would happen with Carribean Cruise, please PM me with them! Or post them here, of course.

 

[sirhugs]

Ah, yeh I guess.... but I really don't know how to take things further and make it more interesting. I don't really want ONE series going on indefinitely, like up into the 20th or 30th chapter!

If you have any ideas or suggestions, hopefully to turn the tale into an incest direction which was where I was sort of thinking would happen with Carribean Cruise, please PM me with them! Or post them here, of course.

well, in keeping with this thread, at least one of the gals ought to " do" Dad...maybe he watches them with Rick then takes them? The way you've set him up as the man of mystery is such a potent archetype of alpha male. so he needs to exert his dominance.

the sisterly potential also screams to be explored. I expected that from page one