Mature plot bunny

Jay321

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I'm having tons of trouble with blocks, so I have been trying to work on plot bunnies that are not ones that have been worn out. As I normally write incest stories the plot bunnies are even more limited, so I stretched it out looking for cousins, aunts, etc. and thought of grandmother. Personally, I don't care for the older male figure.

So to get to the plot bunny. That's what we are all here for right?

Will, young man, maybe just back from college, goes to see his grandmother, or neighbor that he was close with if you don't want the incest thought, lets call her Ann, in the retirement village (not a home! almost think she should be obsessed with the fact it's not a home) that she moved to while he was away.

He shows up for the surprise visit, when he opens the door Ann calls out, "I'm back here!" He walks back to her bedroom where she sitting, wearing nothing but a silk robe that is untied and open. Momentary stop and stare before they do the normal reaction, she covers up, he turns around, etc.

Ann explains that one of the few men in the village, Victor, that is still able to have sex on a regular basis had a standing date with her on Monday, but he is late. Actually he has a standing date with several women in the village.

Ann and Will go to check on Victor and discover him dead from a heart attack.

Will goes to the funeral with Ann, she is there with Mary, one of the women that she was sharing Victor with. The others are hateful bitches.

His next visit with Ann, Mary is there, and since it has now been a couple weeks, Mary is insanely horny. She keeps hitting on Will and finally talks Will and Ann into a strip card game. For some reason its in my head for them to play Gin Rummy.

Then, as Hypoxia says, hilarity ensues.

Names are variable. I posted this here because mature really isn't my ballgame. Fair game if anyone wants it.
 
I've done one 'mature' story (Left Behind) where a mid-30s cougar fixates on kids half her age. In another tale, a nearly-50-year-old MILF fucks her son. But I haven't yet got to GILFs. This could be interesting. A young guy finds he's in great demand as a cocksman for a batch of mostly well-toned grannies -- the retirement home has a tennis court, sure. Do they pay him cash, so he's a pro gigolo at the senior home? Is it all pay-for-play with him, or does he develop a taste?
 
Some retirement communities (especially the gated ones in Arizona) are almost nonstop sex parties (to the point where lessons on VDs have to be given since nobody's using protection.

I remember I had an idea a while back after reading up on one gated retirement community where anyone under the age of 45 wasn't welcome (they didn't want families moving in so they didn't have to pay school taxes). Guy's 19 year old granddaughter/granddaughter's friend gets kicked out by her parents so she tries to bunk with her grandpa. Grandpa relents reluctantly, though he has to sneak her in. He tells her she can stay a week at most but she decides she'll stay longer.

Grandpa can't keep the secret forever though and a friend spots her, thinking she's a whore. Friend badgers him to set up a "date" and girl sneaks off that night to bang his friend and his friend's wife. She comes back with a few hundred in cash and finds her grandpa fucking his neighbor and she barges in laughing.

Ticked off, especially when he sees the cash, grandpa strips her naked and hatefucks her, with her at first amused with his more forceful approach and then annoyed and then aroused. She then seduces the neighbor back into bed with her grandpa and becomes the community's plaything, getting passed from house to house, servicing everyone.
 
Sure, over-18 kids can 'visit' in retirement villages. And become very popular. They don't need constant supplies of Viagra. I haven't heard of the Arizona generic Del Webb scene but I'm not surprised. Let's expand. Posit such a village around Tucson that's an underground-railroad-type stop on the illegal-immigrant trail. Coyotes bring in illegals who must fuck their way through the residents before moving on to menial jobs in the heartland.
 
May as well make it semi-legal rather than human trafficking: they were brought in as attendants who cleans the houses and cook (and a lot more).

I am tired of human trafficking stories.
 
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As an industry joke:

The community ends up having a regular supply of younger people to join in the debauchery. However, if anyone asks, they are to say they are CNAs. Then some actual CNAs start working there and asks what the hell's going on when they catch a woman getting eaten out by a younger man. The guy replies : "I'm a CNA?"

CNA sighs and strips down: "well, it's still not as bad as my last assignment."
 
I am tired of human trafficking stories.
I've not seen nor written HT stories; the option just occurred to me as plausible. I see your objection. I'm not big on non-con. It definitely puts a tainted edge on any eroticism here. Focus must shift to infiltration and the rescue of the enslaved. But then some rescuers join in the fucking because LIT.

CNA sighs and strips down: "well, it's still not as bad as my last assignment."
For them too lazy to gargle it's Certified Nursing Assistant.
 
-- the retirement home has a tennis court, sure.
Its not a home! :D

My reluctance to write it myself comes from not knowing the nuances that will really attract the mature readers. Do I describe the skin tone and texture? Do I describe what time and gravity have done to her breasts? What about the toothless blowjob? I hear they are supposed to be awesome, but honestly, I cringe a little every time I hear it. Will that chase off or attract more readers?

"Come here sonny, I got something for ya," Mary licks her lips. Will takes a step that way, "Hold on, let me take out my teef."
 
Its not a home! :D
Village. My bad.

My reluctance to write it myself comes from not knowing the nuances that will really attract the mature readers. Do I describe the skin tone and texture? Do I describe what time and gravity have done to her breasts? What about the toothless blowjob? I hear they are supposed to be awesome, but honestly, I cringe a little every time I hear it. Will that chase off or attract more readers?
I have no idea what the audience wants. My 'mature' player was a 36-ish MILF stalking kids half her age. Are descriptions of decrepitude desired? I dunno -- read some high-ranked Mature stories and see what plays.

"Come here sonny, I got something for ya," Mary licks her lips. Will takes a step that way, "Hold on, let me take out my teef."
Oh, a period piece, eh? Yeah, the pull-out-the-dentures gag presages a nice juicy BJ... Reminds me of the line: "Pull out your teeth and grow a beard and I'll date you."

Anyway, most residents of this retirement village have excellent dental coverage. Toothless folks nowadays are mostly crack heads, right? Hey, there's a less savory setting: an old-folks trailer park filled with toothless dopers anxious for paying customers. "C'mere, sonny, I'll blow ya real good for ten bucks!" s/he croaked. Oy.
 
an alternative to the retirement village scenario.

Mom or Dad desperately wants to stay in their own home. So Sonny hires a home care worker to do the housework, meals, some light personal care. Sonny hires a a hot young Latina, hoping she might show her appreciation for the job in a psychical way.

Imagine Sonny's shock when he walks in on Lupe having sex with Mom or Dad...

If you prefer, Sonny could be a grandkid...
 
If Sonny did the hiring and pays her wages then he is el patrón and can have his way with her. That's traditional. But if he only found her and his folks pay her wages then he's SOL (Shit Out-a Luck). Does she taunt Sonny that he's just not as sexy as his well-toned folks?
 
But se~nor, temp agency pay me! You not my boss! Contract says I follow orders of of Papi here! ;)
 
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