PuffDaddyMellow
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Maternal disgust and lust story idea.
So i just had this idea that kind of stuck with me. It deals with a couple of things that i think can stir up some pretty strong emotions. Reluctance, stockholm syndrome, femdom, romance, as well as a young man paired with an older woman. Also possibly the conflicting cultural differences between the north and south. Kind of a long post but there is a lot of stuff here to cover. I apologize ahead of time for the typo's. My bad grammar one of the main factors i don't think ill be able to write this out. That along with i just am not a great writer. This fic will be on the long side due to having to explain the main characters horrible childhood and origin.
The story would revolve around a young man in his twenties, who was born and raised in a heavily populated city, such as boston or new york ect. Father is out of the picture completely. His mother literally brutally tortures him till he is like ten years old or something ,when he escapes or kills her.This is not the focus of the story, can possibly be explained by flash backs or something. This of course leaves him scarred and gives a mistrust for women and or maternal figures.
He continues his childhood living on the streets surviving by any means. When he gets older he starts to peddle drugs, not do them. Becomes an enforcer/drug runner.
Now the rest of this should be the focus and meat of the story. He is told to retrieve a large shipment of drugs from somewhere out in the middle of nowhere in the south. Like in the back woods of Kentucky or whatever. Somewhere desolate and completely devoid of civilization. He goes there and picks up the drugs. He starts his journey back but is ambushed by a group of people. He is dumped in the middle of no where in the woods.
This is where the second main character comes in. He is found by a woman and taken back to her cabin, where she lives alone. A southern backwoods woman. She is older than him, late thirties/ forties. She takes care of him. And nurses him back to health. But she has no intent to let him go. She is barren and cannot have children and wants a son. She sees our main character, a strapping young lad, and desires to nurture and mother him, as well as use him for her own needs.
As you can imagine our main character wants nothing to do with this, given his past experiences with maternal figures. Now she doesn't torture him or beat him but will do anything to keep him there. Kind of like the movie Misery but maybe not so brutal. She actually wants to care for him. The story continues and they kind of develop a relationship. She tries to get our main character over his mistrust for maternal figures.
As for the sex, our kidnapper would definitely initiate it. She would force it at first, but over time he would realize that he likes having sex.
Closing in on the end, they form kind of strange incestual mother/son , stockholm syndrome relationship. Just for clarification they are in no way blood related. He somehow finds a way to escape, but in the end is torn whether or not to leave as he loves and desires her, as a maternal figure, and a lover. The author can decide what he does. I like to imagine him staying, as i like happy endings
There it is. I really do hope some one would adopt it. Anyone can have it and do whatever they like with it. I have no talent for this, really. So it wont matter to me if you change anything, or take out things. It just has been bugging me for a while and i want to get it out of my head. If you do take it on and decide you want input, im game, but you would be under no obligation keep me in the loop. Please comment. It would make my day to even just know that other people like this idea as well.
So i just had this idea that kind of stuck with me. It deals with a couple of things that i think can stir up some pretty strong emotions. Reluctance, stockholm syndrome, femdom, romance, as well as a young man paired with an older woman. Also possibly the conflicting cultural differences between the north and south. Kind of a long post but there is a lot of stuff here to cover. I apologize ahead of time for the typo's. My bad grammar one of the main factors i don't think ill be able to write this out. That along with i just am not a great writer. This fic will be on the long side due to having to explain the main characters horrible childhood and origin.
The story would revolve around a young man in his twenties, who was born and raised in a heavily populated city, such as boston or new york ect. Father is out of the picture completely. His mother literally brutally tortures him till he is like ten years old or something ,when he escapes or kills her.This is not the focus of the story, can possibly be explained by flash backs or something. This of course leaves him scarred and gives a mistrust for women and or maternal figures.
He continues his childhood living on the streets surviving by any means. When he gets older he starts to peddle drugs, not do them. Becomes an enforcer/drug runner.
Now the rest of this should be the focus and meat of the story. He is told to retrieve a large shipment of drugs from somewhere out in the middle of nowhere in the south. Like in the back woods of Kentucky or whatever. Somewhere desolate and completely devoid of civilization. He goes there and picks up the drugs. He starts his journey back but is ambushed by a group of people. He is dumped in the middle of no where in the woods.
This is where the second main character comes in. He is found by a woman and taken back to her cabin, where she lives alone. A southern backwoods woman. She is older than him, late thirties/ forties. She takes care of him. And nurses him back to health. But she has no intent to let him go. She is barren and cannot have children and wants a son. She sees our main character, a strapping young lad, and desires to nurture and mother him, as well as use him for her own needs.
As you can imagine our main character wants nothing to do with this, given his past experiences with maternal figures. Now she doesn't torture him or beat him but will do anything to keep him there. Kind of like the movie Misery but maybe not so brutal. She actually wants to care for him. The story continues and they kind of develop a relationship. She tries to get our main character over his mistrust for maternal figures.
As for the sex, our kidnapper would definitely initiate it. She would force it at first, but over time he would realize that he likes having sex.
Closing in on the end, they form kind of strange incestual mother/son , stockholm syndrome relationship. Just for clarification they are in no way blood related. He somehow finds a way to escape, but in the end is torn whether or not to leave as he loves and desires her, as a maternal figure, and a lover. The author can decide what he does. I like to imagine him staying, as i like happy endings
There it is. I really do hope some one would adopt it. Anyone can have it and do whatever they like with it. I have no talent for this, really. So it wont matter to me if you change anything, or take out things. It just has been bugging me for a while and i want to get it out of my head. If you do take it on and decide you want input, im game, but you would be under no obligation keep me in the loop. Please comment. It would make my day to even just know that other people like this idea as well.
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