Make a haiku

The above has me feeling horse:eek:


Should I post haikus?
No need to strain my poor brain
Maybe tomorrow;)
 
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Thristy for hot cocoa (or a mocha java..mmm)

Haiku's are so fun
though a pain before coffee
Must get some right now
 
So this is how it goes...

the above seems wet to me:rolleyes:


First five syllables,
Followed by only seven,
Finally just five
 
5, 7, 5
That's how it started
But it's in Japanese

Now a haiku can be anything.

I translate haikus from Japanese to English
so 5,7,5 does not apply.

:rolleyes:
 
Come to me
Let's play
little sparrow orphan!

Issa


You tell Issa 5,7,5 and he'll laugh at you from his grave.

Issa's one of the masters of haiku.

Bet you don't know Japanese.

You do 5,7,5 but you have no clue what is a kigo or a kireji

Your haiku is child's play. :rolleyes:
 
Maybe Chipbutty can teach you about English poems, but don't teach me about haikus. I think in Japanese.
 
Priests ... Morning glories ...
how many have died and been reborn
beneath this pine tree?
 
o fer sakes fuck
what the hell does those mean lines mean?
a weenie peenie, or what?
 
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