Make a haiku

[Cymru6969]

Try Welsh then, my friends
Impress the ladies. Have fun!
Consonants galore!

 

[EbersMoll]

Try Welsh then, my friends
Impress the ladies. Have fun!
Consonants galore!

Dude, Welsh is tricky
With consonant mutation
dictionaries fail!

 

[PlayfulLittle1]

Once again the night
Is turning into morning
Before I find sleep

 

[EbersMoll]

Sleep well then playful
Let Morpheus carry you
Across the dark night

 

[LoveToLurk]

Sleep well then playful
Let Morpheus carry you
Across the dark night

I love that haiku! Nice.

 

[Jett_73]

I love that haiku! Nice.

Seconded. Very good indeed EM.

Try Welsh then, my friends
Impress the ladies. Have fun!
Consonants galore!

Ysgrifennu Cymraeg:
Pa mor galed all hyn fod?
Iawn ffycin caled!

 

[EbersMoll]

I love that haiku! Nice.

For praise from the void
I am so very grateful.
Thank-you, silent one.

 

[EbersMoll]

Seconded. Very good indeed EM.



Ysgrifennu Cymraeg:
Pa mor galed all hyn fod?
Iawn ffycin caled!

To a welsh speaking
Antipodean, I say
"Very impressive".

Thanks Jett!

 

[EbersMoll]

The sun falls westward
The day's logic is replaced
By nighttime's passion.

 

[PlayfulLittle1]

Bonds are braided tight
Tied with cultivated trust
Bodies, souls entwined

 

[EbersMoll]

Bonds are braided tight
Tied with cultivated trust
Bodies, souls entwined

Nice PL1

 

[PlayfulLittle1]

Nice PL1

thx

 

[LoveToLurk]

For praise from the void
I am so very grateful.
Thank-you, silent one.

The sun falls westward
The day's logic is replaced
By nighttime's passion.


WOW! I've never received a haiku for a compliment! Keep the beautiful words coming. Thank you

 

[PlayfulLittle1]

Bubbles foam and pop
O'erflowing a hot bathtub
Will you wash my back?

 

[EbersMoll]

Happy birthday PlayfulLittle1

Earth orbits once more
Beauty and wisdom both grow
As time moves forward.

My dearest Playful
Birthday wishes I send you
On your special day : rose:

 

[PlayfulLittle1]

Earth orbits once more
Beauty and wisdom both grow
As time moves forward.

My dearest Playful
Birthday wishes I send you
On your special day : rose:

AWESOME! Thank you thank you thank you!

I am overwhelmed
Words from friends and strangers both
Make the day special.

 

[PlayfulLittle1]

I cannot give up
Even when I know I should.
Is it past hoping?

Hope hurts more than helps
Fighting the coming rainstorm
Losing to the wind.

My calm like a shell
Meager protection from harm
And broken with ease

 

[EbersMoll]

With concern I read
Those words that convey worry
With friend's help, stay strong

 

[raiguy]

I've wanted to try haikus for a while, so if these are wrong, please let me know so I can try again:

Hiding from Myself
Trying to figure out if
It is real or not

The water stands still
Flowing silently along
It's way forever

 

[EbersMoll]

I've wanted to try haikus for a while, so if these are wrong, please let me know so I can try again:

Hiding from Myself
Trying to figure out if
It is real or not

The water stands still
Flowing silently along
It's way forever

I would say they are very good indeed. Well done and welcome aboard

 

[raiguy]

I would say they are very good indeed. Well done and welcome aboard

Thanks. I've always wanted to do these. I have a journal that I've wanted to fill with haikus I think of, but haven't ever known if I was doing them right...

 

[EbersMoll]

Sun's kiss warms pasture
Prompting an awakening,
As does my lover's.

 

[Jett_73]

Sun's kiss warms pasture
Prompting an awakening,
As does my lover's.

Her 'pasture'? Oh, her kiss.

My gentle kisses
All over your satin skin
Raise little goose bumps

 

[EbersMoll]

Her 'pasture'? Oh, her kiss.

My gentle kisses
All over your satin skin
Raise little goose bumps

You wouldn't be criticising my kiru would you Jett, that's fighting talk

Spring's light pink blossom
Signifies fertility,
Like her full figure.

 

[Jett_73]

You wouldn't be criticising my kiru would you Jett, that's fighting talk

Spring's light pink blossom
Signifies fertility,
Like her full figure.

Nup, no criticism, just amusement at the thought of the unintended (I assume) innuendo.