Lyrical or text assistance...

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Once again, here I am asking for help with my homework which has nothing to do with BDSM. :p Allow me to briefly suck up by stating that I think all of you guys have wonderfully creative minds, and that I look up to and respect that kind of intellect. *bats lashes*

I'm currently working on an assignment that will, in subtle imagery, tell the story of a sexual assault on a teenaged girl. What I want to incorporate (this is actually heavily suggested) is text with my images; I'm looking preferably for song lyrics, but poetry or segments of text from other works would be okay, too.

Something subtle, that could be open to interpretation, would be awesome. Would anyone be so kind as to offer suggestions? I'm not needing to use the whole song, but perhaps 6 or 7 lines or stanzas from the same body of work instead.

Love you guys! :)
 
Are you a Seether fan Jade?? There is a song on one of their albums called there is a song called Love Her, Gasoline and one other I cant thing of and my mp3 is down so I cant look it up. These songs might work for you though.
 
I will have a peek. :)

I don't think it is so important if the song itself is one that I like; it just needs to fit. :)

If it was one I liked, I'd know what I wanted already! :D I do have an idea or two, but I'm not sure my own ideas are really gonna work.

I'll look those up, thanks Leeroy!
 
jadefirefly said:
I'm currently working on an assignment that will, in subtle imagery, tell the story of a sexual assault on a teenaged girl. What I want to incorporate (this is actually heavily suggested) is text with my images; I'm looking preferably for song lyrics, but poetry or segments of text from other works would be okay, too.

Something subtle, that could be open to interpretation, would be awesome.
African proverb: “The ax forgets, the tree remembers.”

Maya Angelou
Even the Stars Look Lonesome
page 17

:rose:

Alice

Edited to add an image for you, Miss Firefly:

https://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=16439992&postcount=1949

Not sure that's what you are looking for, but it's the best I can do at the moment. :)
 
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jadefirefly said:
I will have a peek. :)

I don't think it is so important if the song itself is one that I like; it just needs to fit. :)

If it was one I liked, I'd know what I wanted already! :D I do have an idea or two, but I'm not sure my own ideas are really gonna work.

I'll look those up, thanks Leeroy!

Jade if you were a Seether fan then you would have heard these song is why I asked. I am not sure if any of them are good fit but maybe bits and pieces would work for you?? If your having trouble finding the unedited CD songs let me know I cant find my disc, but at least I can PM you with the words.
 
Alice, that's an awesome image. :D I'll peek at your link shortly.

Leeroy, I have probably heard the songs; I am notorious for knowing a song, but having no clue who wrote it, what album it's on or the name of the song. There are way too many songs in my head that I've heard over the years for me to remember the names of all of 'em -- I consider myself lucky when I can remember the name of a song my favorite group did, let alone what album it's from. :)

I'm a pro at searching out lyrics, it won't be a problem for me to look 'em up. I've had a hideously long day though, and am craving more of my Evangelion marathon, so I'll be searching for 'em tomorrow night, most likely.
 
jadefirefly said:
Alice, that's an awesome image. :D I'll peek at your link shortly.

Leeroy, I have probably heard the songs; I am notorious for knowing a song, but having no clue who wrote it, what album it's on or the name of the song. There are way too many songs in my head that I've heard over the years for me to remember the names of all of 'em -- I consider myself lucky when I can remember the name of a song my favorite group did, let alone what album it's from. :)

I'm a pro at searching out lyrics, it won't be a problem for me to look 'em up. I've had a hideously long day though, and am craving more of my Evangelion marathon, so I'll be searching for 'em tomorrow night, most likely.

DBZ or some good old Vampire Hunter D and Akira. Though I do like that mature anime as well not sure were i could rent such stuff around here do you know Jade??
 
This going to cost you Jade.........!!!

sighs

doing Jades homework ........hmmmmn ............okay I'll give it a go and post a few Jade but its veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery possible you won't be able to use any

Reject No 1

Hold Back the Night
Performed by Sinead O'Connor
Written by Robert Hodgens


I want to walk
Into the light
Day has turned cold
So hold back the night
What will become
Of you and I
We had a dream
Don't let it die
Do you want to be
Do you want to be
My dying day
My darkest hour
My overdose
Cuz that's what you'll be
Just hold back the night
There was a time
I'm sure you'll agree
We saw it all
A glorious sight
Everyone's burned
Everyone's gone
What we once were
Now we are not
So hold back the night
 
Maybe Not a Reject ........smiles

Just remembered this one Jade it fits though your not oblidged obviously ;)

Field Of Innocence
Performed by Evavescence
Latin hymn


I still remember the world
From the eyes of a child
Slowly those feelings
Were clouded by what I know now

Where has my heart gone
An uneven trade for the real world
I want to go back to
Believing in everything and knowing nothing at all

I still remember the sun
Always warm on my back
Somehow it seems colder now

Where has my heart gone
Trapped in the eyes of a stranger
I want to go back to
Believing in everything
 
Potential Reject No 3

And The Devil Cried
Peformed by Psychotic Waltz


be seated now, lay your small ante down
as the dark dealer smiles to the play
dear player of my little game
I don't believe I caught your name
that's alright now lay your hand down

queens slay your nines
the fortune you've lost now is mine
quick to the deal, let us step to the wheel
take a spin and lay down your claim
your number loses, not to blame
you see my friend,they're all the same
you can not win now, play again now

taste of earthly pleasures
see the harlots smiling
feel the evil passion
clawing, crying, crying on

...and the devil cried

well could you pay the price
if we rolled of the dice
just a piece of your soul down again
the rules are simple as they seem
just roll a one or roll thirteen
and all is back now, free and clear now

your soul and your mind
the fortune you've lost now is mine
 
leeroy jenkins said:
DBZ or some good old Vampire Hunter D and Akira. Though I do like that mature anime as well not sure were i could rent such stuff around here do you know Jade??

I'll do a search on Netflix and see what I turn up. I'm not sure about anywhere you could actually go in to, like a Blockbuster or something. I'll get back to ya.

sighs

doing Jades homework ........hmmmmn ............okay I'll give it a go and post a few Jade but its veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery possible you won't be able to use any

Reject No 1

Hold Back the Night
Performed by Sinead O'Connor
Written by Robert Hodgens


These are all awesome, Rebecca, thank you! :D I knew you guys would pull through for me. :cattail:


Edited to add: Or rather, Leeroy, I'll check Netflix for you when C. gets around to re-starting the account. :eek: Sometimes when he gets called out on a patrol he forgets when he said he was going to do something; it happens. :)
 
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jadefirefly said:
I'll do a search on Netflix and see what I turn up. I'm not sure about anywhere you could actually go in to, like a Blockbuster or something. I'll get back to ya.




These are all awesome, Rebecca, thank you! :D I knew you guys would pull through for me. :cattail:


Edited to add: Or rather, Leeroy, I'll check Netflix for you when C. gets around to re-starting the account. :eek: Sometimes when he gets called out on a patrol he forgets when he said he was going to do something; it happens. :)

Nope Jade the stuff I am talking about when I did the renting in OH, the comic book shop has this stuff listed as xxx anime so I do not think that netflix will be caring it any time soon. Besides when I have you, Miss Jade to talk to why would I want to see large breasted girls getting raped by demons and stuff?? That seems to be a much used story line in anime from Japan.
 
jadefirefly said:
These are all awesome, Rebecca, thank you! :D I knew you guys would pull through for me. :cattail:

Oh thats fine Jade I live to serve.................laughsssssss :D
 
leeroy jenkins said:
Nope Jade the stuff I am talking about when I did the renting in OH, the comic book shop has this stuff listed as xxx anime so I do not think that netflix will be caring it any time soon. Besides when I have you, Miss Jade to talk to why would I want to see large breasted girls getting raped by demons and stuff?? That seems to be a much used story line in anime from Japan.

Leeroy you a Hentai freak huh :eek:
 
@}-}rebecca---- said:
Leeroy you a Hentai freak huh :eek:

No clue this was back in the late 90's, though I will not deny that seeing large breasted woman in anime is nice, but I would rather something a bit more real and not so much make believe. Though I would love to check out Playboy's Oct 04 issue the girls of vidoe games graced the mag and late last year there was a 2 issue card set too. I am very naughty, I guess I need to be punished.
 
leeroy jenkins said:
I am very naughty, I guess I need to be punished.

laughs ......yes Leeroy............yes you are ........... and yes Leeroy ... yes you do
 
@}-}rebecca---- said:
laughs ......yes Leeroy............yes you are ........... and yes Leeroy ... yes you do

Well Miss Rebecca I am sure you not willing to give punish me as i deserve, which is my loss then I guess.
 
leeroy jenkins said:
Well Miss Rebecca I am sure you not willing to give punish me as i deserve, which is my loss then I guess.

:eek: OMG Leeroy.....almost spits but smiles.....not really my forte but I'll try and think of something thats not to lame !!!!..........oh my
 
@}-}rebecca---- said:
:eek: OMG Leeroy.....almost spits but smiles.....not really my forte but I'll try and think of something thats not to lame !!!!..........oh my

You said it yourself that you more submissive right so I would not want you upset that balance because I am in need of some discipline. I know Stegral threaten me about hijacking so maybe you could find her and the two of you can come up with something to curb my excesses??
 
leeroy jenkins said:
You said it yourself that you more submissive right so I would not want you upset that balance because I am in need of some discipline. I know Stegral threaten me about hijacking so maybe you could find her and the two of you can come up with something to curb my excesses??

laughs not 'more' submissive .................. 'a submissive' ..........but I am also a Mom so I can manage a little discipline ..........you bummed out though Leeroy , your not my child sooooooooo..........lol............

Noddinglaughing...........YEP excellent idea call Stegral .......I support the idea , I am sure she may be able to come up with a little something.......though I will gracefully stand down...........I don't do poly with or without the cracker :D

You might have to be a little more inventive though Leeroy dude asking for punishment hmmmmmmn........nvm
 
@}-}rebecca---- said:
laughs not 'more' submissive .................. 'a submissive' ..........but I am also a Mom so I can manage a little discipline ..........you bummed out though Leeroy , your not my child sooooooooo..........lol............

Noddinglaughing...........YEP excellent idea call Stegral .......I support the idea , I am sure she may be able to come up with a little something.......though I will gracefully stand down...........I don't do poly with or without the cracker :D

You might have to be a little more inventive though Leeroy dude asking for punishment hmmmmmmn........nvm

I would but can I blame my noobishness this time??
 
I wasn't sure what all Netflix carried in terms of 'mature' anime... I do know that after four episodes of la blue girl, though, I got bored. Same plot line, over and over... *yawn*

Tentacles just don't do "it" for me. :p

I am not sure where one could find/rent that sorta thing here in AZ, Leeroy. You're in Phx, right? I could do some googling for ya... you might be best off just to search online and purchase, though. I doubt there'd be much available to rent.

Y'all are hijacking my thread again! I oughtta... um... I oughtta.... oh, damnit. I dunno. :p

*lays out the doormat and invites walking all over it* :cattail: :D
 
jadefirefly said:
I wasn't sure what all Netflix carried in terms of 'mature' anime... I do know that after four episodes of la blue girl, though, I got bored. Same plot line, over and over... *yawn*

Tentacles just don't do "it" for me. :p

I am not sure where one could find/rent that sorta thing here in AZ, Leeroy. You're in Phx, right? I could do some googling for ya... you might be best off just to search online and purchase, though. I doubt there'd be much available to rent.

Y'all are hijacking my thread again! I oughtta... um... I oughtta.... oh, damnit. I dunno. :p

*lays out the doormat and invites walking all over it* :cattail: :D

No need to expend energy on this, just spend the whole day and I do mean 16 hours chatting off an on with some persons here at lit. Missed my chance to run a guild raid of MC a high level dungeon in warcraft and tomorrow I have to check with some people about this part time job I am trying to get so there goes MC again. But what is more improtant friends in a game or making and connectiing with more people here??

An luck in finding the Seether words still at your beck and call if you want it??
 
Criminal by Fiona Apple

I've been a bad bad girl
I've been careless with a delicate man
And it's a sad sad world
When a girl will break a boy
Just because she can
Don't you tell me to deny it
I've done wrong and I want to
Suffer for my sins
I've come to you 'cause I need
Guidance to be true
And I just don't know where I can begin

What I need is a good defense
'Cause I'm feelin' like a criminal
And I need to be redeemed
To the one I've sinned against
Because he's all I ever knew of love

Heaven help me for the way I am
Save me from these evil deeds
Before I get them done
I know tomorrow brings the consequence
At hand
But I keep livin' this day like
The next will never come

Oh help me but don't tell me
To deny it
I've got to cleanse myself
Of all these lies till I'm good
Enough for him
I've got a lot to lose and I'm
Bettin' high
So I'm beggin' you before it ends
Just tell me where to begin

What I need is a good defense
'Cause I'm feelin' like a criminal
And I need to be redeemed
To the one I've sinned against
Because he's all I ever knew of love

Let me know the way
Before there's hell to pay
Give me room to lay the law and let me go
I've got to make a play
To make my lover stay
So what would an angel say
The devil wants to know

What I need is a good defense
'Cause I'm feelin' like a criminal
And I need to be redeemed
To the one I've sinned against
Because he's all I ever knew of love

What I need is a good defense
'Cause I'm feelin' like a criminal
And I need to be redeemed
To the one I've sinned against

Because he's all I ever knew of love

Me and a Gun by Tori Amos

5am friday morning
thursday night far from sleep
i'm still up and driving
can't go home obviously
so i'll just change direction
cause they'll soon know where i live
and i wanna live
got a full tank and some chips

it was me and a gun
and a man on my back
and i sang "holy holy"
as he buttoned down his pants

you can laugh
its kind of funny
things you think
times like these
like i haven't seen BARBADOS
so i must get out of this

yes i wore a slinky red thing
does that mean i should spread
for you, your friends
your father, mr ed

it was me and a gun
and a man on my back
but i haven't seen BARBADOS
so i must get out of this

and i know what this means
me and jesus a few years back
used to hang
and he said "it's your choice babe
just remember
i don't think you'll be back
in 3 days time so you choose well"
tell me whats right
is it my right to be on my stomach
of fred's seville

it was me and a gun
and a man on my back
but i haven't seen BARBADOS
so i must get out of this

and do you know CAROLINA
where the biscuits
are soft and sweet
these things go through your head
when there's a man on your back
and you're pushed flat on your stomach
it's not a classic cadillac

it was me and a gun
and a man on my back
but i haven't seen BARBADOS
so i must get out of this
i haven't seen BARBADOS
so i must get out of this

Janie's got a Gun by Aerosmith

Dum, dum, dum, honey what have you done
Dum, dum, dum, it's the sound of my gun
Dum, dum, dum, honey what have you done
Dum, dum, dum, it's the sound, it's the sound...
Nah, nah, nah, nah, nah, nah....

Janie's Got A Gun
Janie's Got A Gun
Her whole world's come undone
From lookin' straight at the sun
What did her daddy do
What did he put you through

They say when Janie was arrested
They found him underneath a train
But man, he had it comin'
Now that Janie's Got A Gun
She ain't never gonna be the same

Janie's Got A Gun
Janie's Got A Gun
Her dog day's just begun
Now everybody is on the run
Tell me now it's untrue
What did her daddy do

He jacked the little bitty baby
The man has got to be insane
They say the spell that he was under
The lightnin' and the thunder
Knew that someone had to stop the rain

Run away, run away from the pain
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah

Run away, run away from the pain
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
Run away, run away, run, run away

Janie's Got A Gun
Janie's Got A Gun
Her dog day's just begun
Now everybody is on the run
What did her daddy do
It's Janie's las I.O.U.

She had to take him down easy
And put a bullet in his brain
She said 'cause nobody believes me
The man was such a sleeze
He ain't never gonna be the same

Run away, run away from the pain
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
Run away, run away, run, run away
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
Run away, run away, run, run away

Janie's Got A Gun
Janie's Got A Gun
Janie's Got A Gun
Everybody is on the run

Janie's Got A Gun
Her dog day's just begun
Now everybody's on the run (Honey, honey what's your problem)
'Cause Janie's Got A Gun (Tell me it ain't right)
Janie's Got A Gun (Was it daddys cradle robbin')
Her dog day's just begun (That made you scream at night)
Janie's Got A Gun
Her dog day's just begun
Now everybody's on the run
Janie's Got A Gun
 
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