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MrFantasyMan said:
Deception

I chased your heartache
and captured your fears.
Gave you the sunshine
and bottled your tears.

I said all the things
you needed to hear.
The truth from my soul
honest and sincere.

I made you smile
and forget the pain.
Rainbows and laughter
chasing the rain.

But when I needed you
it wasn't the same.
I cried aloud,
but you never came.

You took all you needed
and left me here.
Drowning in sorrow,
catching my tears.

You didn't bring sunshine
or even a light.
Just left me here in
the cold of the night.

But I'm not worried,
I'll make it through.
By using all the energy,
I wasted on you!


MFM

Very Good Poem MFM...Keep up the good work My Friend... :rose:
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
Ok.. I'm the first to admit... that I'm a better story writer then poet.. but hey... it was fun to try... :D
It kinda follows the Dr. Suess Cat in the Hat ... but not entirely.. :D

I came into town,
not making a sound.

Soon my horse stopped,
its leg in a knot.

I jumped off his back,
and heard a great crack.

I looked to my left,
then to my right.

My sight did behold
such a glorious fight.

He was bronzed by the sun,
his body glistened with sweat.

I stood there and waited,
wondered what would come next.

Looking again, my heart did beat fast,
the man was beating a lad and a lass.

Taking my hand,
I aimmed at the man.

Though he was handsome,
and physically fit.

His manner was brash,
and he looked like an ass.

His looks were nice,
his manners were not.

I advanced slowly
not a sound did I make.

Soon I was hiding
behind the great rake.

I hit him hard,
my hand it did fall.

He turned as his head,
started to lump.

"What have you done,
you simpleton?"

"I have struck you, you knave,
now you go and behave."

"Behave we will see,
I'll be back to get you at a quarter till three!"

My body did shiver,
his threat made me quiver.

I turned on my heel,
and started to reel.

Great words of disgust,
filled the air and the dust.

"We'll see who will lead.
In this game you will plead!"

As I came to my home,
my heart full of wonder.

I felt a small tingle
begin way down under.

Soon I was eating my supper alone,
soon my red wine had found it a home.

Retiring for the night,
my eyes full of fright.

"Did he mean a quarter past three...
in the morning or evening, soon we would see."

My eyes grew heavy,
ladened for rest.

I saw his head in my mind,
what a sight.

I ached and I moaned with each passing touch,
oh how I wanted him to just fuck.

Feeling the wetness between my legs come,
I open my eyes and look up above.

His eyes, golden hued,
his body sun kissed.

He was taking me over
a great big abyss.

"You pleasure me well,
with your cock that has swelled."

His smile is wide
as I hear him sigh,

"Take in my tongue
and I'll make you cum."

My face blushes red,
my hair is a fire.

All of my hope
and all my desires.

I close my eyes
as his lips do try.

To gather me up,
and release me real slow.

Soon I tell him,
soon I will go.

He chuckles he sighs
and makes my soul cry.

The heat from my loins
releases such passion.

It is all I can hold
to keep from a thrashin'

"Don't stop!" I call out.
"Don't quit!" I do shout.

He thrusts and he grinds,
I moan the whole time.

In time we are done,
and he calls me, "Hon."

The End​


I think your good at whatever you do... :rose: ...you have a style that is most definetly YOU!...I to hope you choose to grace this thread again, and again... :D
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
I wept silent tears when I read this. It's so poignant and finds its mark with each line. It's as if you've crawled into the head of all that have hurt to this degree. :kiss:


:rose: X12
 
MrFantasyMan said:
I think your good at whatever you do... :rose: ...you have a style that is most definetly YOU!...I to hope you choose to grace this thread again, and again... :D


Thank you MFM... I don't know about poetry here very often from me... but your's was lovely and heart touching, as always. :kiss: :rose:
 
MrFantasyMan said:
After it’s over
forgetting
is impossible
even as gnawing demons
of heartbreak
hang around
like bad relatives
who come and stay too long
the fog of
regret stays thick
with resentment
borne of emptiness.

In deep remorse
a thinning haze
may enter
upon wings of hope
cultivating
the magic of unearned trust
while a broken heart
heals enough
to share itself in
the forgiving mist
of time.


MFM

Another very good one...it's timing had to be fate...for the words trust in and love forever are gone and now that regretable pain finds its way into the soul to fill in all the warmth that was only a few days ago felt.....Very Nice MFM...keep up the good work... :rose:
 
biggbear8 said:
Capturing Her Beauty

.

As I see her through my eyes,

I wish to capture this moment.

There’s no camera that can duplicate her beauty,

I am not an artist of the brush, canvas or paint,

I have only my pen, and imagination,

and my words to describe such elegance.

.

Just the sight of her leaves me feeble ,

Please be patience as I try my best,

to describe her, capturing her beauty from my eyes.

There she stands her ivory skin, smooth, silky, slightly tanned.

Her long golden hair, flowing in the breeze

like golden waves of wheat,

just enough make_up to enhancing her facial features,

.

Don't stand to close if she smiles your way,

until you cover your eyes, her brilliant smile,

will brighten your day.

As you look into her eyes, you become lost,

for they contain the bluest of blues of the ocean and sky,

and you can get trapped in them forever.

.

I know that I cannot possibly do her description justice..

but please wait as my heart whispers to me,

capturing her beauty, through my soul.

Her neck soft and tender begs for tender kisses,

my lips feel the warmth of her sultry flesh,

The curve of her back, trails gracefully

down to the small valley then to,

Her derriere, firm, rounded, smooth and so squeezable.

Then there’s her legs long, tapered, and soft as silk.

.
She slowly turns onto her back

Please Bear with me, I'm simply studying ,

capturing her beauty, through my eyes.

Oh her "Breasts", magnificent mounds,

so beautiful taut and firm,

Yet sensitive and eager to be caressed.

As her chest rises and falls, her beating heart,

is so full of love and tenderness.

.

Looking back to her face, so beautiful peaceful and .serene,

AS my eyes journey down to her belly,

soft and flat, gazing down at her bellybutton,

there’s no better place to sip wine,

Then I softly kiss my way down to her triangle of fine fur just below, MMM, wet and so inviting.

This is where my thirst is quenched.

.

She is intelligent, witty, and she is willing to learn,

She doesn't pretend to be what she is not.

not thinking she is better anyone, but always striving to be equal.

She speaks her words with integrity, truth, and honesty.

She says what she on her mind...sooner or later,

she doesn’t play games nor well she accept game players.

.

When she cares and loves you it is without equal,

She’s a daughter, a mother, a friend, a sister, a aunt, a lover.

But she is so much more than this.

I hope my description does her justice,

but you see I'm just,

capturing her beauty. Through my eyes.


again Bear touches us all...as through your eyes the true beauty is always seen... :rose: ...I bow to your majesty...
 
LustfulOne50 said:
Another very good one...it's timing had to be fate...for the words trust in and love forever are gone and now that regretable pain finds its way into the soul to fill in all the warmth that was only a few days ago felt.....Very Nice MFM...keep up the good work... :rose:

so very true......
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
Thank you MFM... I don't know about poetry here very often from me... but your's was lovely and heart touching, as always. :kiss: :rose:


Thank you... :kiss: :rose: ...and I think you underestimate what you write...be it poetry or stories...


and Thank you Lusty...as you know we write what we feel... :rose:
 
There I was
A candle in the dark
Unbent, untouched
Pure and proud

And then you came
Warmth enveloped me
You lighted me
And I began to see
The world
Where I truly belonged

I saw the beauty
of Everything
Savoring every moment
But when I turned around
You were nowhere
To be found.

I searched with my light
But I couldn't see you.
Then the heat began to burn me
With a pain so intense
To my very core.
Wax flowed all over,
Remaining there to be seen
By all.

Then a gush of wind
So bitingly cold
Made my flame dance
And it seemed that
The wind blew you away

Another strong blow
Finally put out the light
A wisp of smoke
From my blackened wick
Curled up above me,
And was gone.

As I look at myself
The once proud candle
Now just a stump
With a blackened core
But I couldn't care more.
Because for a moment in my life,
I became a light in the dark.


MFM
 
I needed someone to love me true,
To care for me when feeling blue,
To hold me close to their loving heart,
When my world started to fall apart.

I fell in love with you, seems overnight,
Although it was wrong, it felt so right,
We talked of many things old and new,
Things we left out were only a few.

I gave you my heart to have and to hold,
So very precious, even more precious than gold,
I said take care of it, and it is yours forever,
You will stay in my soul forever.

Day by day, we grew closer together,
I could see you and I stretching on forever,
Wanted to be with you I ached for your touch,
I wanted to kiss you, hold you so much.

I needed so much to look into your eyes,
Instead, you started giving me sighs,
Little things I found out were not true,
How could I be so deceived by you?

The heart that ached for you so much,
Will now never know your tender touch,
In my dreams, I still see you kissing me,
But now I know this will never be.

Do I now feel like a naïve fool?
No not really, love has no rule,
We give our love, to which our heart chooses,
That’s why in this there are no loses.

I still love you more than you know,
While distance between us continues to grow,
In my heart you stay forever, it seems,
When I am awake and in my dreams.

I now bid farewell and happiness to you,
With your next love, I hope you are true,
I wish you wealth, health and luck too,
But most of all “LOVE” I wish for you.


MFM
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
Ok.. I'm the first to admit... that I'm a better story writer then poet.. but hey... it was fun to try... :D
It kinda follows the Dr. Suess Cat in the Hat ... but not entirely.. :D

I came into town,
not making a sound.

Soon my horse stopped,
its leg in a knot.

I jumped off his back,
and heard a great crack.

I looked to my left,
then to my right.

My sight did behold
such a glorious fight.

He was bronzed by the sun,
his body glistened with sweat.

I stood there and waited,
wondered what would come next.

Looking again, my heart did beat fast,
the man was beating a lad and a lass.

Taking my hand,
I aimmed at the man.

Though he was handsome,
and physically fit.

His manner was brash,
and he looked like an ass.

His looks were nice,
his manners were not.

I advanced slowly
not a sound did I make.

Soon I was hiding
behind the great rake.

I hit him hard,
my hand it did fall.

He turned as his head,
started to lump.

"What have you done,
you simpleton?"

"I have struck you, you knave,
now you go and behave."

"Behave we will see,
I'll be back to get you at a quarter till three!"

My body did shiver,
his threat made me quiver.

I turned on my heel,
and started to reel.

Great words of disgust,
filled the air and the dust.

"We'll see who will lead.
In this game you will plead!"

As I came to my home,
my heart full of wonder.

I felt a small tingle
begin way down under.

Soon I was eating my supper alone,
soon my red wine had found it a home.

Retiring for the night,
my eyes full of fright.

"Did he mean a quarter past three...
in the morning or evening, soon we would see."

My eyes grew heavy,
ladened for rest.

I saw his head in my mind,
what a sight.

I ached and I moaned with each passing touch,
oh how I wanted him to just fuck.

Feeling the wetness between my legs come,
I open my eyes and look up above.

His eyes, golden hued,
his body sun kissed.

He was taking me over
a great big abyss.

"You pleasure me well,
with your cock that has swelled."

His smile is wide
as I hear him sigh,

"Take in my tongue
and I'll make you cum."

My face blushes red,
my hair is a fire.

All of my hope
and all my desires.

I close my eyes
as his lips do try.

To gather me up,
and release me real slow.

Soon I tell him,
soon I will go.

He chuckles he sighs
and makes my soul cry.

The heat from my loins
releases such passion.

It is all I can hold
to keep from a thrashin'

"Don't stop!" I call out.
"Don't quit!" I do shout.

He thrusts and he grinds,
I moan the whole time.

In time we are done,
and he calls me, "Hon."

The End​

RedHairedandFriendly this was very good dear...keep it up...so you have a new playground for you words ..... :rose: :kiss:
 
MrFantasyMan said:
There I was
A candle in the dark
Unbent, untouched
Pure and proud

And then you came
Warmth enveloped me
You lighted me
And I began to see
The world
Where I truly belonged

I saw the beauty
of Everything
Savoring every moment
But when I turned around
You were nowhere
To be found.

I searched with my light
But I couldn't see you.
Then the heat began to burn me
With a pain so intense
To my very core.
Wax flowed all over,
Remaining there to be seen
By all.

Then a gush of wind
So bitingly cold
Made my flame dance
And it seemed that
The wind blew you away

Another strong blow
Finally put out the light
A wisp of smoke
From my blackened wick
Curled up above me,
And was gone.

As I look at myself
The once proud candle
Now just a stump
With a blackened core
But I couldn't care more.
Because for a moment in my life,
I became a light in the dark.


MFM

WOW...MFM that was awesome..great poem with so much feeling in it....keep it up my friend.. :rose:
 
LustfulOne50 said:
RedHairedandFriendly this was very good dear...keep it up...so you have a new playground for you words ..... :rose: :kiss:
Thank you Lusty.... I'll not dabble much in poetry... my words don't flow real well for that... but when it strikes me to write a ditty I shall post it here.. :rose: :D
 
MrFantasyMan said:
again Bear touches us all...as through your eyes the true beauty is always seen... :rose: ...I bow to your majesty...


Handshake my friend and thank you for your great comment and you too are a master of writing and a wonderful gift that you share with us
 
LustfulOne50 said:
WOW...MFM that was awesome..great poem with so much feeling in it....keep it up my friend.. :rose:


Thank You my friend...just lit a candle and watched it burn... :rose:
 
biggbear8 said:
Handshake my friend and thank you for your great comment and you too are a master of writing and a wonderful gift that you share with us


as we all share... :rose:
 
MrFantasyMan said:
I needed someone to love me true,
To care for me when feeling blue,
To hold me close to their loving heart,
When my world started to fall apart.

I fell in love with you, seems overnight,
Although it was wrong, it felt so right,
We talked of many things old and new,
Things we left out were only a few.

I gave you my heart to have and to hold,
So very precious, even more precious than gold,
I said take care of it, and it is yours forever,
You will stay in my soul forever.

Day by day, we grew closer together,
I could see you and I stretching on forever,
Wanted to be with you I ached for your touch,
I wanted to kiss you, hold you so much.

I needed so much to look into your eyes,
Instead, you started giving me sighs,
Little things I found out were not true,
How could I be so deceived by you?

The heart that ached for you so much,
Will now never know your tender touch,
In my dreams, I still see you kissing me,
But now I know this will never be.

Do I now feel like a naïve fool?
No not really, love has no rule,
We give our love, to which our heart chooses,
That’s why in this there are no loses.

I still love you more than you know,
While distance between us continues to grow,
In my heart you stay forever, it seems,
When I am awake and in my dreams.

I now bid farewell and happiness to you,
With your next love, I hope you are true,
I wish you wealth, health and luck too,
But most of all “LOVE” I wish for you.


MFM

Another awesome poem MFM..In love and lost..is there really a lost..for you know from your heart you loved even tho their love was a vapor that could't stand in the light of day.....Nice one..Keep it up my friend.. :rose:
 
LustfulOne50 said:
Another awesome poem MFM..In love and lost..is there really a lost..for you know from your heart you loved even tho their love was a vapor that could't stand in the light of day.....Nice one..Keep it up my friend.. :rose:


no winners...no losers...and each relationship deserves a proper "good-bye"...even when saying good-bye is the greatest sign of love... :heart:
 
I sit here and I wonder
when my life is done
will you sit and ponder
all the pain from this one?

I didn't mean to cause it.
To bring you grief and strife
and our hearts now split
by a sharp bladed knife.

I hope you know I'm sorry,
as I turn to go
my brown eyes a bit starry
Your whispered love I'll know.
 
MrFantasyMan said:
no winners...no losers...and each relationship deserves a proper "good-bye"...even when saying good-bye is the greatest sign of love... :heart:


Very true..
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
I sit here and I wonder
when my life is done
will you sit and ponder
all the pain from this one?

I didn't mean to cause it.
To bring you grief and strife
and our hearts now split
by a sharp bladed knife.

I hope you know I'm sorry,
as I turn to go
my brown eyes a bit starry
Your whispered love I'll know.

Very good poem RHF ...very good...Keep it up dear... :rose: :kiss:
 
LustfulOne50 said:
Very good poem RHF ...very good...Keep it up dear... :rose: :kiss:
Thank you Lusty... see you all opened Pandora's box.. :rose:

Here is another:..
~~~~~



We didn't know each other
Two lost souls so low.
Searching for another
Not knowing where to go.

Holding hands we ventured
seeking for our mate.
Soon we were indentured
driven by life's fate.

How were we to know
that we wouldn't meet again.
How were we to know
That this would be the end.

You made your choice
and I made mine.
Gone now, your voice,
that filled my soul like wine.

So I sit and watch you
through my memories.
My love belongs to you
and not my enemies.
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
Thank you Lusty... see you all opened Pandora's box.. :rose:

Here is another:..
~~~~~



We didn't know each other
Two lost souls so low.
Searching for another
Not knowing where to go.

Holding hands we ventured
seeking for our mate.
Soon we were indentured
driven by life's fate.

How were we to know
that we wouldn't meet again.
How were we to know
That this would be the end.

You made your choice
and I made mine.
Gone now, your voice,
that filled my soul like wine.

So I sit and watch you
through my memories.
My love belongs to you
and not my enemies.

Another nice one RHF ..I am happy to see Pandora's box was openned..Keep it up my dear... :rose: :kiss:
 
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