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Hi All! I just wanted to drop in and check out the palce. I was told that it is a relaxing place that will help my creative juices flow. I have never been one to write but since joining Lit and with the encouragement of friends and reader I have been able to express myself and explore a bit. I hope you dont mind me posting. I am no where in the class of most of you but Ill give it a shot!
 
Phillychocolatem said:
Hi All! I just wanted to drop in and check out the palce. I was told that it is a relaxing place that will help my creative juices flow. I have never been one to write but since joining Lit and with the encouragement of friends and reader I have been able to express myself and explore a bit. I hope you dont mind me posting. I am no where in the class of most of you but Ill give it a shot!

Hi there Philly... good to see you.
Looking forward to reading the results of your creative juices.. ;)
 
PhillychocolatemHi All! I just wanted to drop in and check out the palce. I was told that it is a relaxing place that will help my creative juices flow. I have never been one to write but since joining Lit and with the encouragement of friends and reader I have been able to express myself and explore a bit. I hope you dont mind me posting. I am no where in the class of most of you but Ill give it a shot!


Phillychocolatem, we all cut our teeth somewhere when it came to writing..if you look you will find even on the thread a new writer, so give it whirl this is the place to do it..if you need assistance any of the writers here would be glad to help you. I have been know to punch a poem or two for folks. Writing is a delight for most of us.
 
Sunrise​

I awaken to see the suns glow
Reflected in your eyes

Glowing in your hair
And in between your thighs
When I look at you I wish
That every morning could be like this

The rise of your chest
The curve of your hips

The sparkle in your eyes
The smile on your lips

The warmth of your heart
The fire of your sex
I can not wait to see where we go next

A trip to the moon
Or to the store
You are the woman that I adore

The future is bright
Of this I know
I awaken with you to see the suns glow
 
LustfulOne50 said:
Phillychocolatem, we all cut our teeth somewhere when it came to writing..if you look you will find even on the thread a new writer, so give it whirl this is the place to do it..if you need assistance any of the writers here would be glad to help you. I have been know to punch a poem or two for folks. Writing is a delight for most of us.


Thanks... I think that i have truely found what love means.. It means doing something you never thought youd do, just because that person inspires you to do so. Writing has never been my forte, but I now have things running through my mind that i cant help but write down.

I want to thank her if she sees this... she knows who she is. Not only have you made each day brighter but you have expanded my mind and the realm of the possible, for that I will always love you! :rose:
 
Phillychocolatem said:
Sunrise​

I awaken to see the suns glow
Reflected in your eyes

Glowing in your hair
And in between your thighs
When I look at you I wish
That every morning could be like this

The rise of your chest
The curve of your hips

The sparkle in your eyes
The smile on your lips

The warmth of your heart
The fire of your sex
I can not wait to see where we go next

A trip to the moon
Or to the store
You are the woman that I adore

The future is bright
Of this I know
I awaken with you to see the suns glow

Nice one Phillychocolatem.Humm and you think you can't play here...LOL you got the stage my friend...keep up the work...good stuff
 
LustfulOne50 said:
Nice one Phillychocolatem.Humm and you think you can't play here...LOL you got the stage my friend...keep up the work...good stuff

Thank you. BTW just call me Philly :)
 
Phillychocolatem said:
Thanks... I think that i have truely found what love means.. It means doing something you never thought youd do, just because that person inspires you to do so. Writing has never been my forte, but I now have things running through my mind that i cant help but write down.

I want to thank her if she sees this... she knows who she is. Not only have you made each day brighter but you have expanded my mind and the realm of the possible, for that I will always love you! :rose:
Welcome, Philly. :kiss: That was an absolutely beautiful poem. She's a very fortunate lady......it sounds like she should be the one thanking you. I do hope you enjoy your time here and that you visit often. :rose:
 
Phillychocolatem said:
Sunrise​

I awaken to see the suns glow
Reflected in your eyes

Glowing in your hair
And in between your thighs
When I look at you I wish
That every morning could be like this

The rise of your chest
The curve of your hips

The sparkle in your eyes
The smile on your lips

The warmth of your heart
The fire of your sex
I can not wait to see where we go next

A trip to the moon
Or to the store
You are the woman that I adore

The future is bright
Of this I know
I awaken with you to see the suns glow


Beautiful :)

Philly, I've never yet met anyone who is happy with thier creative work, be they writer, poet, artist or musician, that's what drives them to always do more, so they can improve their work in their own eyes. And that list has me right at the top lol, I'm never happy with anything I write.
 
Miracle

Was a winter's dawn when you entered this world
screaming your outrage at the lights and the cold
arms waving impotently as they weighed and measured
fingers and toes all counted, all treasured
swaddled and warm, your crying abates
and finally that moment I gaze at your face
all pain forgotten, I feel weary no more
your father and I can only adore
perfection we made that night long ago
our beautiful daughter, created with love

:rose:
 
Azure Dreams said:
Miracle

Was a winter's dawn when you entered this world
screaming your outrage at the lights and the cold
arms waving impotently as they weighed and measured
fingers and toes all counted, all treasured
swaddled and warm, your crying abates
and finally that moment I gaze at your face
all pain forgotten, I feel weary no more
your father and I can only adore
perfection we made that night long ago
our beautiful daughter, created with love

:rose:


Ah darn, you got me to a tear, for that special feeling is so dear and when you hold them near and close and give them that first kiss on the nose and then want count kiss and count each finger and toe, you stop and thank god for such a special gift. Very Nice Poem Azure Dreams :rose: :kiss:
 
Azure Dreams said:
Miracle

Was a winter's dawn when you entered this world
screaming your outrage at the lights and the cold
arms waving impotently as they weighed and measured
fingers and toes all counted, all treasured
swaddled and warm, your crying abates
and finally that moment I gaze at your face
all pain forgotten, I feel weary no more
your father and I can only adore
perfection we made that night long ago
our beautiful daughter, created with love

:rose:


~ exhaling ~ this is so precious....
 
Beauty


Beauty is a spirit that never quits
It is the way you smile and move your hips
The special way that you ease pain.
The special meaning you give to rain

The first thought of day and the last at night
Your touch that shows everythings alright
My mind whirls with things to say
I just want to hold you everyday

You tapped into things I didnt know were there
with the way you walk and wear your hair
Your strength and courage are a delight
again letting me know everythings alright

The day has new meaning with you in it
Just waking up with you to begin it
Curling up with you
Holding you
Touching you
Feeling you
Hearing you
Knowing you

Beauty has a new meaning today...Its you.
 
Azure Dreams said:
Miracle

Was a winter's dawn when you entered this world
screaming your outrage at the lights and the cold
arms waving impotently as they weighed and measured
fingers and toes all counted, all treasured
swaddled and warm, your crying abates
and finally that moment I gaze at your face
all pain forgotten, I feel weary no more
your father and I can only adore
perfection we made that night long ago
our beautiful daughter, created with love

:rose:

Beautiful... :rose: ...having two sons of my own the sentiment doesn't change...the parents of the world have the greatest responsibility and the biggest hearts to share with the children...
 
Phillychocolatem said:
Beauty


Beauty is a spirit that never quits
It is the way you smile and move your hips
The special way that you ease pain.
The special meaning you give to rain

The first thought of day and the last at night
Your touch that shows everythings alright
My mind whirls with things to say
I just want to hold you everyday

You tapped into things I didnt know were there
with the way you walk and wear your hair
Your strength and courage are a delight
again letting me know everythings alright

The day has new meaning with you in it
Just waking up with you to begin it
Curling up with you
Holding you
Touching you
Feeling you
Hearing you
Knowing you

Beauty has a new meaning today...Its you.


wow.... beautiful Philly....
to be treasured like this is every woman's dream... ;)
 
Phillychocolatem said:
Beauty


Beauty is a spirit that never quits
It is the way you smile and move your hips
The special way that you ease pain.
The special meaning you give to rain

The first thought of day and the last at night
Your touch that shows everythings alright
My mind whirls with things to say
I just want to hold you everyday

You tapped into things I didnt know were there
with the way you walk and wear your hair
Your strength and courage are a delight
again letting me know everythings alright

The day has new meaning with you in it
Just waking up with you to begin it
Curling up with you
Holding you
Touching you
Feeling you
Hearing you
Knowing you

Beauty has a new meaning today...Its you.

Very nice Philly...and being in love certainly has a way of touching us all...I really enjoy your work and look forward to more... :cool:
 
MrFantasyMan said:
Very nice Philly...and being in love certainly has a way of touching us all...I really enjoy your work and look forward to more... :cool:

Thank you MFM. Its good to hear a guys point of view. The one thing that I will forever be grateful for that she has given me is, HOPE.
 
Phillychocolatem said:
Thank you MFM. Its good to hear a guys point of view. The one thing that I will forever be grateful for that she has given me is, HOPE.

Lucky lady.... ;)
 
WyldBreeze said:
Welcome, Philly. :kiss: That was an absolutely beautiful poem. She's a very fortunate lady......it sounds like she should be the one thanking you. I do hope you enjoy your time here and that you visit often. :rose:


Thanks WB.. Great AV BTW. I hope she feels as fortunate as I do to have her.
 
babydoll2u said:
wow.... beautiful Philly....
to be treasured like this is every woman's dream... ;)

Thanks Peg

I have found someone that I want to treasure and that deserves to be.
 
Phillychocolatem said:
Thanks Peg

I have found someone that I want to treasure and that deserves to be.

I'm so happy for both of you.... cherish every moment you have together :rose:
 
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