Lucky Boy

TreeBeard42

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I have an idea for a story which I would love to see written. I would write it but I'm no writer. The rules say that you can't have anyone under 18. Is this rule strictly enforced? Because that would make it harder to make my idea work. It's about a boy who is so young that women don't really suspect him of any idea what sex is. I was thinking that he would be about 14 or 15, but if we need to I guess he could be 18 and just be young looking for his age. Same thing. Here's what I got so far:

A boy, we'll call him Mac. His mother left his father when he was young. She always wasn't quite normal. Mac was taken to live with her, but pretty much took care of himself because his mother wasn't very responsible. He was always busy taking care of himself and never had much time to think about girls. In his teenage years, a judge ruled that the father should have custody of him. He goes to live with his father in another city.

His father has gotten a girlfriend in the meantime. We'll call her Jan. Jan is a free spirit. Very sexy looking. Completely uninhibited. Significantly younger than Mac's Dad. Before Mac came to live with them, she had been accustomed to walk around the house in just a bra and panties, and sometimes even less. But before Mac comes his father tells Jan to act more conservatively around his son. No more walking around the house without being fully clothed, etc.

Mac arrives at the house with his luggage and is surprised to find that there will be a hot woman living in the same house. She will be sleeping in his father's room, and he will have his own bedroom.

One day, he decides to skip class because he isn't fitting in at his new school. He comes home and sees Jan nearly naked doing arousing exercizes and stretches through the window. He hides by the window and peaks in until she eventually finishes and walks into another room out of sight. He starts coming back every day to watch her throught the window while he is supposed to be at school.

The more time he spends around her the more aroused he becomes. One day he can't stand it anymore and starts masterbating in his bed thinking about her. He is very afraid of what would happen if Jan or his Dad would walk in on him like this. That would be the worst thing that could happen if the only people he knows in his new home would find out that he is fantasizing about his Dad's girl. To his utter horor, Jan walks in on him in the middle. He blushes profusely and is scared stiff. He feels like his life is over. She tries to comfort him and tell him that this is perfectly normal and nothing to be ashamed of. She correctly guesses that he is fantasizing about her. To her he seems so sexually inexperienced to be so ashamed. She decides that she must teach him, to put him out of his misery. Also, this is the only thing that she can do to make him feel better about her walking in on him. She strips in front of him, to his continued horor and disbelief. Then she gives him an a gentle, loving blowjob. Then she tells him that she is going to teach him how to fuck. She quickly works him up to stiffness again. Then she mounts him. She is the whole time enjoying herself immensely, as is made evident by all of her noises. She sees that he is staring at her jiggling boobs but not doing anything. "You can touch them, don't be shy," she says gently. She takes his hand and puts it on her tit. Slowly he grows less timid. When he has gotten confident at groping her boobs, she changes positions so that he has to do the fucking. At first he is slow and timid, afraid of doing anything to ruin it. She keeps encouaging him to be faster and harder. Eventually they both orgasm. She makes him swear not to tell Dad about this and assures him that this is just his first lesson. She has obviously been enjoying this immensely herself as well and is eager to keep it up.Then she leaves.

Over the coming days they have more lessons. She teaches him how to finger fuck a woman. How to eat her out. How to play with her breasts and ass. How to give her anal. How to touch a woman so that it drives her crazy. But every night she still sleeps in Dad's room.

One day Mac is alone in an elevator with a very attractive woman, perhaps going to a higher floor to a model shoot. The elevator malfunctions. They are both stuck high up in an elevator shaft and what's worse, it will be hours before anyone comes to help them. The woman tries to comfort Mac, whom she sees as a poor frightened little boy. She hugs him and sits him on her lap, trying to mother him so he wont be scared. He cant beleive what is happening and is extremely turned on by all this contact with this hot woman. Despite his better judgement, he tries some of the tricks that Jan taught him. The woman at first thinks that the boy doesn't realize that he is turning her on. She thinks he isn't old enough to know such things. Just an innocent little boy. She tries to explain to him in baby terms that it is affecting her in ways that he can't understand. He keeps going, until she gets so horny that she can't stop anymore. She begins to realize that he is doing it on purpose, but still thinks that he is just an innocent little boy. She feels terrible about perverting him, but she can't stop herself anymore, and ends up fucking the shit out of the unsuspecting little boy. She completely blows his poor young mind. It is not till after they have finished that they are rescued. They go on their ways pretending that nothing happened.
 
How about treating it from a fantasy bordering on supernatural angle? Like the devil in disguise... or does that sound dumb? Just a thought....
 
To me the appealing part of the story is that it is just a regular kid. He just got really lucky.
 
You damn near wrote the story already. Spend another thousand words on each sex scene, get it edited and submit it.

Or I might just do that. Hmmm.

MJL
 
Yes the rule is strictly inforced here. The owners will reject any story that specifically mentions someone under the age of 18, or if they hint towards it in how they describe the characters.
 
It is written.

Give me a week to edit and clean it up, have my wonderful new editor have a look at it and then get it posted. Look for it in two weeks or so. :cool:

MJL
 
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