Bebop3 Really Experienced Joined Oct 24, 2017 Posts 295 Feb 15, 2018 #1 Well, the title says it all. It's a very short story and I'd love to get some feedback. General thoughts and impressions, nothing too detailed. PM me or post here if you can lend a hand. Thanks!
Well, the title says it all. It's a very short story and I'd love to get some feedback. General thoughts and impressions, nothing too detailed. PM me or post here if you can lend a hand. Thanks!
R Redbearded1 Really Really Experienced Joined Oct 11, 2017 Posts 447 Feb 15, 2018 #2 I'd like to read it and give you input!
Bebop3 Really Experienced Joined Oct 24, 2017 Posts 295 Feb 15, 2018 #3 Redbearded, please check your pm's.
sdsioux Really Really Experienced Joined May 3, 2010 Posts 448 Feb 16, 2018 #4 count me in too Would love to read it. Send PM to me
hpycpl Literotica Guru Joined Aug 11, 2011 Posts 729 Feb 17, 2018 #5 I'll give you my input. This is one of my favorite categories.
Bebop3 Really Experienced Joined Oct 24, 2017 Posts 295 Feb 17, 2018 #6 hpycpl said: I'll give you my input. This is one of my favorite categories. Click to expand... Please pm me your email address and lmk if MS Word works for you. Thanks!
hpycpl said: I'll give you my input. This is one of my favorite categories. Click to expand... Please pm me your email address and lmk if MS Word works for you. Thanks!