Rozalin_0123
Sinful Seductress
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Hello fellow readers,
I thought I would post a thread here to say thank you for the overwhelming amount of feedback I have gotten so far with my first story submission, Love Without Limits Ch. 01. If you haven't read it, you can find it here:
http://www.literotica.com/s/love-without-limits-ch-01
I can't thank all of you enough for your kind words so far. I'm really looking forward to what people have to say about the upcoming chapters. I also can't thank robertreams enough for his help in spending many many hours helping me edit it. When I first had him read it, it was absolute crap
In addition to all of the positive feedback, I've gotten so many questions, many of which are recurring. So in an effort to address these questions, as well as questions that arise in future chapters, I will answer them here to the best of my ability without spoiling what comes next.
Q: Is this really a true story?
A: 90% of it is true. The 10% that isn't true are the names, and one event in chapter 2 I had to rewrite slightly to be acceptable by Lit's TOS. Other than that, all the events, dialog, etc are true.
Q: Why didn't you write Tim joining in with you and Vanessa?
A: Simple: That's not what actually happened! While it may have been more entertaining, especially for you males, the fact of the matter is that when I set out to write my life's story, I wanted it to be as accurate to what actually happened as possible.
Q: Then why didn't you invite him to join in?
A: I kind of did. When I was going down on Vanessa, I turned my ass to face him, hoping to get him to join in. If he was to join in, I felt it would be up to him to decide, not do it because I had asked.
Q: Given what we get of his back story and the old love who cheated on him, but his sudden acceptance and willingness to agree to this situation without taking at least a day or even a few hours to think it over stretches credibility. Granted, the story is told from her POV so we can't really know what is going on in his mind, but the setup and the outcome seem to be describing two different men.
A: One of the more well thought out comments I had received. Allow me to elaborate: When I had originally set out to write this story, I was going to submit it as a whole. However, the more I worked on it, the more details came to mind and thus the more bloated the story became. Taking the advice of several experienced authors on Lit, I split it up into chapters. While I could have fleshed out each individual chapter a bit more, in the end I I just wanted to get to the point.
It comes across as I described two different men because he is in fact a different person than when I first met him. He was once so shy, antisocial, and prudish. Now he is far more socialible, open minded, and confident. The only explaination he got for why his ex cheated on him was she told him he was "too needy" which I still don't understand to this day. Ever since I've known him he as put me first. This is why he just watched, he was more interested in my happiness than his own pleasure. Plus, I'm fairly certain that the innitial shock of it all hadn't caught up to his brain until after the fact
Q: If you wanted children so bad, why didn't you have an egg implanted or adopt?
A: We tried fertility meds for a long time and that didn't help. In Vitro is ungodly expensive so that was out. Adoption isn't as easy as most people think. Its not like picking up a pet at an animal shelter. You must be a foster parent for so long before you can adopt. The thought of getting attached to a child only to have them taken back would break my heart. This happened not once but twice to a woman I work with before she was able to adopt.
Q: Is the story finished? When can we expect the next chapter?
A: The story is 100% finished. I submit the next chapter the moment the previous is accepted. The first chaptet took 8 days to be posted and with the coming holiday I would expect it to be at least that long if not longer. In the event that a chapter is rejected, I will post information about it here to keep my readers informed.
Once again I'd like to thank everyone who took the time to read my story and for your continued support! I hope you enjoy what's yet to come
I thought I would post a thread here to say thank you for the overwhelming amount of feedback I have gotten so far with my first story submission, Love Without Limits Ch. 01. If you haven't read it, you can find it here:
http://www.literotica.com/s/love-without-limits-ch-01
I can't thank all of you enough for your kind words so far. I'm really looking forward to what people have to say about the upcoming chapters. I also can't thank robertreams enough for his help in spending many many hours helping me edit it. When I first had him read it, it was absolute crap
In addition to all of the positive feedback, I've gotten so many questions, many of which are recurring. So in an effort to address these questions, as well as questions that arise in future chapters, I will answer them here to the best of my ability without spoiling what comes next.
Q: Is this really a true story?
A: 90% of it is true. The 10% that isn't true are the names, and one event in chapter 2 I had to rewrite slightly to be acceptable by Lit's TOS. Other than that, all the events, dialog, etc are true.
Q: Why didn't you write Tim joining in with you and Vanessa?
A: Simple: That's not what actually happened! While it may have been more entertaining, especially for you males, the fact of the matter is that when I set out to write my life's story, I wanted it to be as accurate to what actually happened as possible.
Q: Then why didn't you invite him to join in?
A: I kind of did. When I was going down on Vanessa, I turned my ass to face him, hoping to get him to join in. If he was to join in, I felt it would be up to him to decide, not do it because I had asked.
Q: Given what we get of his back story and the old love who cheated on him, but his sudden acceptance and willingness to agree to this situation without taking at least a day or even a few hours to think it over stretches credibility. Granted, the story is told from her POV so we can't really know what is going on in his mind, but the setup and the outcome seem to be describing two different men.
A: One of the more well thought out comments I had received. Allow me to elaborate: When I had originally set out to write this story, I was going to submit it as a whole. However, the more I worked on it, the more details came to mind and thus the more bloated the story became. Taking the advice of several experienced authors on Lit, I split it up into chapters. While I could have fleshed out each individual chapter a bit more, in the end I I just wanted to get to the point.
It comes across as I described two different men because he is in fact a different person than when I first met him. He was once so shy, antisocial, and prudish. Now he is far more socialible, open minded, and confident. The only explaination he got for why his ex cheated on him was she told him he was "too needy" which I still don't understand to this day. Ever since I've known him he as put me first. This is why he just watched, he was more interested in my happiness than his own pleasure. Plus, I'm fairly certain that the innitial shock of it all hadn't caught up to his brain until after the fact
Q: If you wanted children so bad, why didn't you have an egg implanted or adopt?
A: We tried fertility meds for a long time and that didn't help. In Vitro is ungodly expensive so that was out. Adoption isn't as easy as most people think. Its not like picking up a pet at an animal shelter. You must be a foster parent for so long before you can adopt. The thought of getting attached to a child only to have them taken back would break my heart. This happened not once but twice to a woman I work with before she was able to adopt.
Q: Is the story finished? When can we expect the next chapter?
A: The story is 100% finished. I submit the next chapter the moment the previous is accepted. The first chaptet took 8 days to be posted and with the coming holiday I would expect it to be at least that long if not longer. In the event that a chapter is rejected, I will post information about it here to keep my readers informed.
Once again I'd like to thank everyone who took the time to read my story and for your continued support! I hope you enjoy what's yet to come
