Love to hear your feedback...

[ol1verjackson]

I've just started writing again, used to do it as a hormonally unbalanced teenager and would like some feedback on my short short-story.

The link is (I hope)..

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=24102

Please E-mail with whatever you think, cos I am currently planning another public transport escapade.

Cheers in advance.

Oliver