Love from the Amazon

[tapeworm]

A small native tribe of pygmies living in the Amazon rainforest decide that it's time to move to the nearest town when corrupt ranchers decide to have the jungle cleared. In desperation, the tribe appeals for support to an elderly retired German businessman vacationing in the area. He hits on an idea which involves bringing the entire tribe back to Germany where they will work at a themed casino wearing their rather skimpy native attire. The Amazon natives get a decent salary, health insurance and even comfortable lodgings. However, one day, after drinking too much, he lets his lust get the better of him and hits on the wife of the tribal chief. Her husband notices this but does not get upest. Instead, he informs the old man that all the adult women in the tribe, regardless of their martial status, belong to the tycoon now since he has become the tribe's protector. Does this idea stike anyone as being remotely plausible?

 

[emap]

Right up to the all adult women are his. A protector would get a wife of his choice from the of age not married gals.

Now if say you want to do women are sluts married or not. That is known to happen. Take away Christianity and women are free to be as loose or not as they want.

 

[lazyhobo]

Christianity

I didn't notice him mention religion or the like.

I feel the story would be better that he forcefully made that point clear to the chief, he did all the flirting and sexual stuff in secret or it was with the unmarried. Otherwise I just don't see it working.

 

[tapeworm]

I didn't notice him mention religion or the like.

I feel the story would be better that he forcefully made that point clear to the chief, he did all the flirting and sexual stuff in secret or it was with the unmarried. Otherwise I just don't see it working.

I think I'll go with that then. He demands all the unmarried young women as a reward.

 

[Carnevil9]

Maybe he settles on one, perfect pygmy woman: three feet tall, no teeth, and a flat head you can rest your beer on.

 

[tapeworm]

Maybe he settles on one, perfect pygmy woman: three feet tall, no teeth, and a flat head you can rest your beer on.

Not so sure about the no teeth part but the rest of it is awesome. Thanks!

 

[thespeck]

Isn't this essentially the plot of Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory and how the Oompa Loompas came to work there?

 

[lazyhobo]

Isn't this essentially the plot of Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory and how the Oompa Loompas came to work there?

No that was about chocolate loving midgets in the forest who were discovered and offered work paid in chocolate.

This is about a race who live in the forest, decide to move on into more advanced things, but require the aid of a rich man.

 

[ThomasShort]

I think this is more open to numerous angles.

The protector may be fine, but what about clients. Each pygmy would have a different story to tell.

 

[Kim_vegas]

I seriously dig this Idea! The women of the tribe, married or unmarried, being declared by the chief as the 'property' of the businessman and the whole tribe accepting the decision willingly appeals to me a lot. The businessman can take any woman of the tribe, including the chief's married and unmarried daughters, fuck them anywhere and in any combination (and that might involve chief's wife, her sister and their daughters as his personal multi-some pets) .. much better if the young men in the tribe become his loyal gangbang soldiers, who would follow his command even if that involves not sparing their own family women. It can also involve the businessman expanding the tribe by impregnating women .. but that is upto the author ..

If this was a novel / collection of 'incidental' stories with a tribe other than pygmies (gimme a break .. I am not into midgets!) .. I would have bought a hard copy and a pdf version for sure. I wouldn't even mind to spend more for a graphic version.


PS: Sent you a PM but your PM box is full .. can resend if u make some space.
Thanks!

 

[RicoLouis]

Maybe he settles on one, perfect pygmy woman: three feet tall, no teeth, and a flat head you can rest your beer on.

You forgot the big ears to hold onto.

Must say when I read the story idea title, I was thinking of an actually amazon woman and not the place.

 

[Carnevil9]

Must say when I read the story idea title, I was thinking of an actually amazon woman and not the place.

I was thinking he meant a woman from Amazon.com. Maybe she's a customer service representative, and they start by having cyber sex, then phone sex, then eventually REAL sex.

 

[callmeismael]

I'd come up with some rituals/traditions rather than just that the businessman 'owns' the women. Something like the 'right of the first night' tradition where a lord can have any bride on her wedding night (this right may never have actually existed, but it's commonly mentioned in european literature). Perhaps there's a very rigid structure of what he's allowed to do with different women, based on their standing within the tribe. Maybe they've got a society where it's considered an honour to have this alpha male to fuck your wife or daughter, and so all the men are trying to influence his choice. Or perhaps, he doesn't totally understand these customs at the beginning, and ends up making some bad choices that result in a darker ending. I'd like to see him become this dark, mad-on-power god-like figure, like Kurtz in Heart of Darkness / Apocalypse Now. Especially if he starts out with pretty altruistic motives at the beginning, and then gets caught up in the rituals and customs of the villagers, eventually transforming into a far less noble man.

 

[ThomasShort]

Need to see Apocalypse Now, desperately. And Heart of Darkness naturally.

I still think having multiple perspectives+ensemble cast will work well with this.

 

[tapeworm]

I'd come up with some rituals/traditions rather than just that the businessman 'owns' the women. Something like the 'right of the first night' tradition where a lord can have any bride on her wedding night (this right may never have actually existed, but it's commonly mentioned in european literature). Perhaps there's a very rigid structure of what he's allowed to do with different women, based on their standing within the tribe. Maybe they've got a society where it's considered an honour to have this alpha male to fuck your wife or daughter, and so all the men are trying to influence his choice. Or perhaps, he doesn't totally understand these customs at the beginning, and ends up making some bad choices that result in a darker ending. I'd like to see him become this dark, mad-on-power god-like figure, like Kurtz in Heart of Darkness / Apocalypse Now. Especially if he starts out with pretty altruistic motives at the beginning, and then gets caught up in the rituals and customs of the villagers, eventually transforming into a far less noble man.

Yeah, that's exactly the angle that I'd like to go for. This is not about simple dominance so much as it is about the main character immersing himself in a tribal culture that he barely understands. I'd like to create a tribal structure which allows him to fuck all married women but which ensures that unmarried women are strictly off limits. The actual parentage of children is uimportant but what matters is that they all have fathers or foster-fathers to provide for their needs, namely the husbands of those women who sleep with other men.As you suggested, as their new, divine chief, it now becomes an honour for all the man to offer their wives to him.


I also like the idea of him turning being corrupted by all that power and turning into a somewhat sinister figure.

 

[tapeworm]

I seriously dig this Idea! The women of the tribe, married or unmarried, being declared by the chief as the 'property' of the businessman and the whole tribe accepting the decision willingly appeals to me a lot. The businessman can take any woman of the tribe, including the chief's married and unmarried daughters, fuck them anywhere and in any combination (and that might involve chief's wife, her sister and their daughters as his personal multi-some pets) .. much better if the young men in the tribe become his loyal gangbang soldiers, who would follow his command even if that involves not sparing their own family women. It can also involve the businessman expanding the tribe by impregnating women .. but that is upto the author ..

If this was a novel / collection of 'incidental' stories with a tribe other than pygmies (gimme a break .. I am not into midgets!) .. I would have bought a hard copy and a pdf version for sure. I wouldn't even mind to spend more for a graphic version.


PS: Sent you a PM but your PM box is full .. can resend if u make some space.
Thanks!

Sorry about not having seen this earlier! I've been away for a few days so I aplogize about not having cleared some space in my inbox. If this plot idea still holds any interest for you, I'd love to hear what you have to say.

 

[tapeworm]

I think this is more open to numerous angles.

The protector may be fine, but what about clients. Each pygmy would have a different story to tell.

True enough. The story will be told from the perspective of the chief, his wife and his daughters.