Looking to edit short stories

[delicate_yielding]

Hi,

If you have a relatively short story (less than 8k words please ), I'd be happy to help.
I don't have impressive credentials, but a second eye is always good.
I can offer some content/flow/continuity/whatevs suggestions too, if you'd like.

You can reach me by PM or e-mail.

Cheers

 

[Allan_Arbinger]

I have a short story

Hello
I have a short story of about 5,300 words. I think it is pretty good but I want a woman's opinion on the two female characters -- I am afraid they are a bit flat.

I have not posted it on Literotica yet so how do I send it to you, assuming that you are a woman and interested in this short story?

Thanks,
Allan

 

[delicate_yielding]

You can e-mail, pm, or even post it right in the thread (though I don't think you'd want to do that XD). I'd prefer it as plain text either attached or in the body, but I can deal with MS Word. When you send it, tell me anything else you'd like, such as whether you want grammar editing or any specific things you're worried about.

P.S.

I'm usually vehemently feminist, but in erotica, I can let things slide.