Looking for someone to beta read, fanfic

[DragonCat91]

Revisiting a piece of Xenoblade smut I wrote some time ago, trying to up the steaminess of it so I can stick it on Hentai Foundry. You do not have to know the characters (Shulk and Fiora) but it helps I guess.

I can answer questions, but really I just want to portray a couple who were childhood friends, went pretty much through hell and back together including a time where one thought the other died, shy male with more outgoing spunky female, madly in love with each other. And I think I did fine, but there might be room for improvement.

PM me if interested.

 

[DragonCat91]

You might get more reactions when posting this request at the Editor's Forum.

I posted it there, not sure why I didn't go there in the first place, I guess because I thought it would get buried. We'll see.