Looking for reviewers on new story.

[MDF251]

Hi all, Guess I jumped into this thread thing, without a proper intro.
Some of your know me as MDF251, my real name is Michael.

I've read a few threads concerning "incest/taboo" writing ideas and found some inspiration. I generated a story, whether complete or not I'm sure, but after two days it would seem fairly well put together.

I have quiried a couple of you to review it, with no return reply,as yet. I'm making the offer more general, at this point, for anyone that might want to take a pre-post look and offer advice. I am new to writing, obviously, with only 9 posts, but I seem to be gaining some fans.

I'd love to move on and iron out my rough edges. I work construction and the artistic end of this writing business appeals to me, although my time is limited now. Hopefully the future sees me transitioning towards writing as a career and leaving the back breaking work behind!

I look forward to any replys, and for those of you not familar check out my postings, the Emma story leaves much to be desired, I'll admit, but I believe the others show some promise.

Thanks to all that have offered advice and "coodos", your response has been appreciated.

MDF251

 

[sirhugs]

try the story feedback forum

 

[MDF251]

try the story feedback forum

Thanks sirhugs, like I said "new" and guess I failed to catch the feedback forum, or just got too invovled in the new story idea forum to realize my error.

MDF251

 

[snooper]

... I have quiried a couple of you to review it, with no return reply,as yet.

Try the Volunteer Editors, though there are problems with that list. On the top of the Editor's Forum there is a sticky "Alternate Editors" thread listing some eager editors. If all else fails, PM me and I'll sort something out for you.

 

[sirhugs]

Thanks sirhugs, like I said "new" and guess I failed to catch the feedback forum, or just got too invovled in the new story idea forum to realize my error.

MDF251

some posters here might edit ( not me- I'm as lousy a proofreader as i am a typist), but right now a lot are writing contest stories.