First time author - Please send feedback
Hello everyone,
I just finished editing a story and reposting based on the feedback from the readers. It was in the LW's category, and I am seeing that the trolls rule the comments section of all the stories in that category.
I would like to get some real feedback now - especially since this is after an edit.
This story is a cuckold story in the LW's cat.
http://www.literotica.com/s/off-the-rocks-pt-01
I welcome any input as I am already writing Part 02 and would like to hear back pre-posting.
Thx,
-H
Hello everyone,
I just finished editing a story and reposting based on the feedback from the readers. It was in the LW's category, and I am seeing that the trolls rule the comments section of all the stories in that category.
I would like to get some real feedback now - especially since this is after an edit.
This story is a cuckold story in the LW's cat.
http://www.literotica.com/s/off-the-rocks-pt-01
I welcome any input as I am already writing Part 02 and would like to hear back pre-posting.
Thx,
-H
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