Looking for Line Editor

crampedhand29

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Hello all,
I have a short story of eleven pages and approx. 5,000 words titled “51 51: Sissy in Heat,” which I would like to be line edited for style and flow, and possibly proofreading if you are able.
“51 51” is about an extra-horny male crossdresser just wishing to spend an undisturbed night with her male lover. But when her meddling neighbor calls the police, her wishes for an undisturbed night are dashed. Although the disturbance may have been what she did not want, it is just what she needed.
I am not in a big rush to have the work done but would like it back in about a week after receiving it if possible.
The document is in word.

Thank you, Crampedhand
 
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Maybe a clearer description? Citation of "pages" means little. Pages where? And wordage in pages can be easily manipulated. What is clearer is number of computer-generated words. Also, is the crossdresser male or female and what gender is "her" lover? An editor's interest quite likely can depend on whether this is a hetero story or a gay/bisexual one.
 
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