I have recently wrote the first chapter for a lesbian/bisexual story I am starting. The two main characters are both women, freshmen at college, one extremely confident and the other shy. Not much happens in the first chapter, even though it is over 3000 words. I need someone to check spelling, punctuation, sentence structure etc. And to see if my character development is good, because that's one of the things I strive to put into my stories, and something that makes them quite long.
I want this one to have a plot, whilst being highly sexual at the same time. These are a few of the things that it incorporates, or might incorporate:
Red: Definately in story, one of main plot aspects.
Blue: Maybe in story, could be a plot aspect.
Green: In debate whether to put into story at some point or not.
If any of this appeals to you, please PM me and I will send you the first chapter :3 I would prefer a female editor with some of the things above ^^ as kinks, though if you just want to edit it purely for editorial reasons, that's fine.
I want this one to have a plot, whilst being highly sexual at the same time. These are a few of the things that it incorporates, or might incorporate:
Red: Definately in story, one of main plot aspects.
Blue: Maybe in story, could be a plot aspect.
Green: In debate whether to put into story at some point or not.
- Lesbians/Bisexuals
- Humiliation (Consensual)
- (Light) Exhibitionism
- College dorms
- Romance
- Threesomes
- (Very) Light bondage
If any of this appeals to you, please PM me and I will send you the first chapter :3 I would prefer a female editor with some of the things above ^^ as kinks, though if you just want to edit it purely for editorial reasons, that's fine.
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