Looking for Feedback

[JupiterMars]

I have been posting for about a year. I’m working on getting better with each story.

The last one was an action adventure story set in the DC comics universe. It’s about 12,000 words with flushed out heroes and villains.

https://literotica.com/s/silent-danger-in-gotham-city


It was posted a few weeks ago and is just sitting there. Not a lot of views, comments or votes.

I’m not sure if I missed the mark, or described it poorly, or if that type of story doesn’t have a big audience.

Input would be appreciated.

 

[HectorBidon]

I really liked the story. You're a very competent writer, and this story really had an exuberant superhero-comic-book feel. I can only guess that the low number of views and comments has to do with Celebrities not being a highly popular category.

You tried to give the main characters a bit of depth by having Chris be non chauvinistic and having Libby notice. That added a bit of romance to their attraction, but, I guess for me, they were still basically comic-book characters and so I couldn't help but see their sex in *BAM* *POW* pneumatic lycra terms. Still, though, I guess that's what you want in this kind of story (and what you get in a lot of stories on this site). Anyway, a very fun story. I hope you keep on writing.

 

[JupiterMars]

Thank you for taking the time to read the story and comment. Feedback from an experienced writer is very much appreciated. You got the feel I was going for so I see that as a success.