Looking For Feedback

[Kozuka]

Greetings!

I've been a member of Lit for some years now, and for a while, I was unaware that the forum section of the site existed. I was quite content just browsing and reading stories, but obviously, interacting with the people of Lit gives the site a new dimension.

Which brings me here. I'm looking to get back into publishing stories here; I love to write, and while I don't engage in it often enough, I seem to be in the mood as of late.

My dilemma is this: continue with a story I published here years ago, or start anew? I hate leaving things unfinished, and I have a story that is far from over. A few people have expressed interest in seeing the story progress, and so, I come to the great people of Lit to decide for me.

Yay or nay?

http://www.literotica.com/s/human-revolution

 

[Bert_Fegg]

Greetings!

I've been a member of Lit for some years now, and for a while, I was unaware that the forum section of the site existed. I was quite content just browsing and reading stories, but obviously, interacting with the people of Lit gives the site a new dimension.

Which brings me here. I'm looking to get back into publishing stories here; I love to write, and while I don't engage in it often enough, I seem to be in the mood as of late.

My dilemma is this: continue with a story I published here years ago, or start anew? I hate leaving things unfinished, and I have a story that is far from over. A few people have expressed interest in seeing the story progress, and so, I come to the great people of Lit to decide for me.

Yay or nay?

http://www.literotica.com/s/human-revolution

You said it yourself - The story is unfinished and you want to continue. That seems to me to be the end of the discussion.

 

[PennLady]

I'm with Bert. Don't leave it up to the anonymous masses here to decide for you. If you get something out of writing the story, and want to finish it, then do so. and good luck.

 

[Iceprincess12]

I just read the story. It might be worth continuing but there needs to be something more than just a pair of perfect beings who need to be replicated. That storyline seems too simplistic.

he placed his eyes on the ceiling in dismay.

That made me laugh, I hope he gets his eyes back down

Also when they escaped and saw the world you said it stopped them in their tracks. When you pick up their storyline again, you didnt say what stopped them, so it was a cliffhanger but you just bypassed it.

If you do continue this, I hope you post it for review.