Looking for editor - straight/toys/anal

[DonnaBaker21]

Hello!

I have only submitted a couple stories so far, and find I am struggling to do well with dialogue and fleshing out scenes. My grammar and spelling is fine, I am looking for feedback on the content and development itself. My current story will be around 5,000 words, and the draft is 1,700 so far.

My main characters are mainly self confident females and their pleasures. I like to write some stories reluctance/non consent. I don't do any rape, humiliation/degradation writing.

I would be glad if an editor could read the current draft before I go any further with it. Honest feedback is wanted. If it is shit, then I want to know. I'd like to improve as a writer and honesty is the best way for me to do so.

Thank you!

Donna

 

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[stache52]

Looking for Editor

If I can be of any help, please don't hesitate to get in touch with me

 

[stache52]

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If it's at all possible Donna could you just confirm that you got this reply? This is my first Venture into the forums. Cheers and best of luck with the writing.

 

[DonnaBaker21]

Hello Stache,
Thank you for your messages. I have now found an editor.

 

[Passionisbest]

You will see under my profile that have a lot of experience with doing volunteer Editor work including secular Women's magazine ownership and Editor work.

 

[Passionisbest]

Hello!

I have only submitted a couple stories so far, and find I am struggling to do well with dialogue and fleshing out scenes. My grammar and spelling is fine, I am looking for feedback on the content and development itself. My current story will be around 5,000 words, and the draft is 1,700 so far.

My main characters are mainly self confident females and their pleasures. I like to write some stories reluctance/non consent. I don't do any rape, humiliation/degradation writing.

I would be glad if an editor could read the current draft before I go any further with it. Honest feedback is wanted. If it is shit, then I want to know. I'd like to improve as a writer and honesty is the best way for me to do so.

Thank you!

Donna

You post is older and I am guessing you found an editor. If not now, in the future feel free to reach out to me. I am a volunteer editor here. Ciao

 

[Passionisbest]

Hello!

I have only submitted a couple stories so far, and find I am struggling to do well with dialogue and fleshing out scenes. My grammar and spelling is fine, I am looking for feedback on the content and development itself. My current story will be around 5,000 words, and the draft is 1,700 so far.

My main characters are mainly self confident females and their pleasures. I like to write some stories reluctance/non consent. I don't do any rape, humiliation/degradation writing.

I would be glad if an editor could read the current draft before I go any further with it. Honest feedback is wanted. If it is shit, then I want to know. I'd like to improve as a writer and honesty is the best way for me to do so.

Thank you!

Donna

I am a volunteer editor. Have done this many times. I have Irl experience with your character type. I just saw your post. Still looking?