Looking for editing help

[HardTime4_69]

I am looking for a little help in editing my latest story. Chapter one was a pretty big success, but there were some editing points I missed. Anyone care to offer a little assistance here. Full disclosure this story is in the incest/taboo genre, although the characters are step-dad and stepdaughter.

 

[SisterJezabel]

Have you approached any of the editors on the Literotica dashboard? I'm a little too busy to help at present, sorry/